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tech1 
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Registration Date: 21-03-2005
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Please check out my new track 'the infected' and post your comments here!!!
rage up
edit by thechronic:
Track removed and producer rights revoked because of sending me hatemail. Find another site where you can bother people.
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07-04-2005 16:38 |
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spudleyq
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Tuned:
Hmmm, that intro snare sounds muffled, needs more snap, unless of course that's exactly the sound you were looking for, I still think it could sound better though. Those amens sound kinda filtered, either bad EQin, or you actually have a filter on it. Those vocals in the buildup could use some work, maybe a little stretching, a little chopping and re-arranging to give them more variation. Your amen definately needs some work. You have some weird stuff here, and I like what you're trying to get at. You definately have the flow to pop out some slammers, you just need to work on your sound and your variation. Keep up the good work! 
2.5/5 for sound
2.79/5 for song
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This post has been edited 1 time(s), it was last edited by spudleyq: 07-04-2005 16:47.
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07-04-2005 16:47 |
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tech1
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yer man i get u bit of a rushed track good fun to make though geting time it can b a bich b cool
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07-04-2005 18:36 |
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anf0 D
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mmmm the snare does sound abit muffled n the amen is abit outta whack...
i like the twisted intro...
i like the swear toy samples lol
the sound of the pads n strings are good...
def needs some more work on levels n eq'n (not so much levels).
bass isnt too bad.
feels abit drawn out at some parts... during 2 - 3 mins
break isnt too bad...
then the outro is fairly cruisy.
not too bad needs more work, good ideas fo sure.
keep it up
3/5
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08-04-2005 09:01 |
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stickbubbly
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i like the noise at the very start.
the beats are good but you should try layering them to make them more your own.
the amens are nice and hard but need some high end.
the drop is cool but i think those muffled amens ruin it.
the string pad in the background is really nice.
overall its a pretty cool track but it got a bit boring and needs e.q'ing.
cheers
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08-04-2005 22:18 |
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Surya
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Intro: hmmm, not great.
Drums the soundquality of the used loops isn't that great and the EQing of them could use some work.
Goes on for a bit too long before something changes
Vocal cuts away a bit abruptly. Can't you fix that?
Overall the bass and drums are quite overpowering!
Didn't find this track very intresting. Some nice elements, but needs a lot of work.
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10-04-2005 15:20 |
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potatohead
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those drums do not feel eq'd right. there is a really loud crunch to the drums that is not right. and it is really boring. That bass does need to come up a few notches. you need to eq the whole song.
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10-04-2005 21:03 |
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@1$-)
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but i thought you said people were telling you that you sound like andy c and bad company......hmmmmmmmmmmm
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12-04-2005 01:57 |
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Surya
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Originally posted by utter muppet
but i thought you said people were telling you that you sound like andy c and bad company......hmmmmmmmmmmm
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Lol. But maybe that's a bit rude to say, no?
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12-04-2005 07:22 |
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Paki
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Wow 
I like the twisted intor and the noise that comes at the begining.
The drums are ok but a little more mastering would do the stuff.
The amens are OK but you need to make some more variations on them.
The vocals seem to be ok but they are somehow too simple maybe if you re-arange them it would sound better???
But however the track is very cool and its rolling
I must admit that you`ve done exelent work here
If i had to rate this from 1-10 i would give it 8.5
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12-04-2005 11:34 |
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