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Surora23 
Agressive Melodic Disorder
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Please check out my new track 'Jedi (master The Return)' and post your comments here!!!
Upon Popular request here is the same track with a few tweaks...and the STAR WARS SOUND EFFECTS!!! WOOT WOOT!...spacy shit all over...lasers flying, aliens screamin..droids making noises...i wouldve added in the growling ewok too, but for some reason it just wasnt working... (SORRY SPUD :P) check it out guys...you wanted the effects...here ya go...
Props to darkside for the reverse assembly line "HUH" idea...
This track has been deleted on the producer's request
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05-04-2005 04:15 |
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Halph-Price
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so, the intro sounds like an outro.
need to get rid of te congos, maybe the fart squeel from R2-D2.
the drop is wicked and the fart squeel from R2-D2 is actually perfect there. the congos blend perfectly there.
that song did sound like shit in the start, but i tihnk it's because you got all thoes sounds, like i told you, and threw them in there.
big mistake. the congos made that intro flow way too nicly. horribly. if you take that out than it'll sound better.
ya dnb sound like video game music. like intellgent msuic , which is part drum and bass part video game msuic. the only genre of music in the world, except for cellphone ringtones, that has video game music as part of the genre and it's dnb.
but no you gave insightful crticizem there. you showed your worth in salt.
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This post has been edited 1 time(s), it was last edited by Halph-Price: 05-04-2005 05:51.
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05-04-2005 05:51 |
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Paki
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I think that yor loops is too agresive acordinhg to the baseline.
So i think that you shouldmake the base more agresive maybe a little play with the reveerb or the mod would do the staff. Anyway i like the loop and the saw arpegio thah was great stuff.
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05-04-2005 13:13 |
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spudleyq
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No growling Ewoks?!?!?!?! Hmmm, just can't deal with that. 
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05-04-2005 19:11 |
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Surora23
Agressive Melodic Disorder
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cool glad you guys like...anymore coments?
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05-04-2005 20:17 |
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Stutterstep
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song is alright. the drums sound washey. i like the drop but to be honest it sounds like most of you other song, mainly the lead. I haven'y heard all your songs but the ones i have heard a very similar. too much tech step. Respect
stutter 
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06-04-2005 05:34 |
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Surora23
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no such thing as too much techstep...:-p but yea my tracks are really similar...my main goal is to essentially form a track that revovles around everuything that ive made before...each track ismore or less an experiment...
Anymore? please rate the thread...cheers 
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07-04-2005 06:39 |
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Surya
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Intro: maybe you did the R2D2 slightly too loud.
The reversed Assebly Line Huh is nice 
Drums are the usual, recognisable Surora ones. Nice.
I think you slightly overdid the laser guns though.
Overall this is kinda the standard Surora fair, with similar sounds and mood as your other tracks. Quite nice.
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- Pieter Frenssen 2004
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07-04-2005 12:08 |
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potatohead
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i actually played this on a loud system at a club last nite and it actually sounded really good!!!!!!!! the only thing i would suggest is to bring down the r2d2 samples just a little.
i rate it a 4.5/5
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13-04-2005 13:47 |
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Glim
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these shit headphones won't do any justice to this review but here goes...
nice 2-step break....everythin soundin clear and fits well so far...
volume of bleeps n squeaks is okay in my book bro...
sounds like your setting this up to be a heavy tune..
breakdown...mmm - tie fighters, cool...
is this what anakin listens to in the x-wing??...lol...
drop: excellent surora, the firing beatz are proper steppa style giving the track bags of energy.
that bass.. how do you do it man... its fat..
percussion is runnin well keepin tings fresh
second drop maybe reduce volume of atmospherics
structure wise me thinks it wuld work well in the mix,
love those rtd2 samples, i thinks you got too much reverb on the bass would sound better with less, more close up u get me???
two main elements being the beatz n bass really carry this track anything else can be placed round these two main factors
overall a proper stomper, second drop could be more minimal as with the breakdown.
will be keeping this in my playlist not only because it kicks ass but anything related to starwars has gotta be good
much respect for droppin another surora stomper
G
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16-10-2005 05:32 |
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Nick ZZ
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This track really shows how much you have progressed in the past few months.
Intro:the intro is a bit boring except for R2!
Drop: the synth is good on the drop!
FX: I like the R2 FX and other Star Wars FX, some of them can come up volume wise! The drum pattern at 2:52 is dope!
It's not a bad track but I started to loose interest after the breakdown... 7.5/10 Z
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17-10-2005 10:52 |
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Surora23
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Originally posted by Nick ZZ
This track really shows how much you have progressed in the past few months.
Intro:the intro is a bit boring except for R2!
Drop: the synth is good on the drop!
FX: I like the R2 FX and other Star Wars FX, some of them can come up volume wise! The drum pattern at 2:52 is dope!
It's not a bad track but I started to loose interest after the breakdown... 7.5/10 Z |
this track is actually pretty old...but is that what you mean by progress...like youre making a comparison to the newer stuff??
anyway...i actually have a new mixdown of this one...and still working some tings out....suppose to go on ozonemedia 320, just hvent spoken the people runnin it in a lonnnnng itme...
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17-10-2005 15:48 |
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TechDiff
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I think I agree with others about the R2 sound being just a little to loud.
The drums are nice a punchy but Im not so sure about the congos. They work but get a bit boring after a while.
I like the R2 stuff on the drop though, That works really well. Where did you get those samples from, did you take them your self or were they on the net?
The congos work a lot better after the drop and give the tune a lot more energy.
I think that the laser sounds stand out a bit to much too. I also think that the high energy in the drums lacks any definition so it ends up sounding more like a hiss than a Hi-Hat.
Finally I think you should be careful about overusing your sounds, The R2 and lasers are cool but lose impact if you use tham so much, maybe even just throwing a couple effects on them or granulizing them to keep a bit of interest, because at the moment theyre cool the first time you hear them, but after the second or third it gets a bit boring.
I dont know why this song only had 4.2 so Im gonna vote you an 8 because I like the tune and think that the average should be a lot higher. Finally I think that maybe you should use a different bass line/sound after the drop to keep things going.
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17-10-2005 17:33 |
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Surora23
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Originally posted by TechDiff
I think I agree with others about the R2 sound being just a little to loud.
The drums are nice a punchy but Im not so sure about the congos. They work but get a bit boring after a while.
I like the R2 stuff on the drop though, That works really well. Where did you get those samples from, did you take them your self or were they on the net?
The congos work a lot better after the drop and give the tune a lot more energy.
I think that the laser sounds stand out a bit to much too. I also think that the high energy in the drums lacks any definition so it ends up sounding more like a hiss than a Hi-Hat.
Finally I think you should be careful about overusing your sounds, The R2 and lasers are cool but lose impact if you use tham so much, maybe even just throwing a couple effects on them or granulizing them to keep a bit of interest, because at the moment theyre cool the first time you hear them, but after the second or third it gets a bit boring.
I dont know why this song only had 4.2 so Im gonna vote you an 8 because I like the tune and think that the average should be a lot higher. Finally I think that maybe you should use a different bass line/sound after the drop to keep things going. |
all those fx samples i found on the net...
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17-10-2005 20:02 |
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Nick ZZ
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Originally posted by Surora23
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Originally posted by Nick ZZ
This track really shows how much you have progressed in the past few months.
Intro:the intro is a bit boring except for R2!
Drop: the synth is good on the drop!
FX: I like the R2 FX and other Star Wars FX, some of them can come up volume wise! The drum pattern at 2:52 is dope!
It's not a bad track but I started to loose interest after the breakdown... 7.5/10 Z |
this track is actually pretty old...but is that what you mean by progress...like youre making a comparison to the newer stuff??
anyway...i actually have a new mixdown of this one...and still working some tings out....suppose to go on ozonemedia 320, just hvent spoken the people runnin it in a lonnnnng itme... |
Progress is good! Z
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