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Greyone 
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Please check out my new track 'Zeus' and post your comments here!!!
Maybe the bass is not so correct but i still have much to learn about it.
This track has been deleted on the producer's request
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02-04-2005 13:54 |
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Rude
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THEFUCK what the hell is that vocal
it's like a she-male who's telling a story
really fast hi-hats in the drumloop...
drop that vocal man, ughhh it sucks
sorry man, but really..
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02-04-2005 18:15 |
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tech1
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shit i think u have got good way of maping beets and bass but may b set the track out a difrent way u no the drops breaks its still a good track good mix down and cool bass yer nice got a bad co feell 2 it keep rolling b cool
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03-04-2005 07:20 |
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thefunke1
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I would agree with the above psot regarding the vocal sample used, although tuning that out, the rest of the tune is pretty good, although has a very old style of sounds in there for the drums and melody, gives it an old german electronic sound, rather than a DnB sound.
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03-04-2005 16:26 |
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Paki
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Hey Zeus. I`ve heard your track and i liked it. But i could say that you should probably work on dynamics of the song. I think you shoul make it more powerfull and dynamic. In general i like the song , but i think you shuold make more faster loops with more instrument. Unless if it is your style. So don`t be hard on me i think that every review is positive. Stay drum`n`bass
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03-04-2005 21:43 |
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Nosrac
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Some electro stuff - this stuff is picking up steam right now so ignore the doubters. Bass is nice and clear - vocal is eary - cool but a bit overused, the little spastic drum roll isn't really working and second drop is a bit too jumpy for my liking. Bass could use some layering and reverb. I really like the intro and that 1st drop though. I like the higher pitch sounds that join in later on. Hat at drop out is good quality - nice left right panning. Structure gets a bit wonky and end is unexpected. Very interesting - try sticking with the more structured bright bass electro stuff of the first 1:30 - twas tres cool.
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06-04-2005 03:03 |
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Surya
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Not a big fan of downpitched female vocals... Why did you pitch it? Also, give it some delay and reverb, sounds very dry now!
Bassline is ok, not great. It's stereo though. Make your bass mono, allways!
Gets a bit boring quite fast.
Drums are not bad, but they need some more layers to beef them up.
This track sounds a lot like you're just starting out with producing. You've still got quite some way to go...
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08-04-2005 10:37 |
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Greyone
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I agree with your comments
-about the vocals:* I pitched it, because it would fit in the loop.( I know it sounds a bit shemale... 
) *I know i used it 2 much.
-about the bass: How do you set yo bass in mono 
in FL )
-about the hats : how many hits&hats do you use in a layer?
Does anybody have some tips 4 a beginning producer like me?
thankx for helping
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10-04-2005 14:27 |
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Surya
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Originally posted by greyone
I pitched it, because it would fit in the loop |
Next time try timestretching
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-about the hats : how many hits&hats do you use in a layer? |
As many as it takes to get a nice and full phat sound
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"In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
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10-04-2005 15:03 |
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Infusion
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Hi
The pur ideas in your are really nice. What you make of it is another story. At first I´ve to say I like that aphex-twin type vox. the bass misses punch und that "phat" touch. the rythm of the beat is ok (maybe to basic) but the drumsamples could be chosen more carefully.
The problem of this track is that it has no real (song) structur.
Don´t take it too personal & keep on producing.
Infusion
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27-04-2005 20:34 |
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Greyone
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Originally posted by Infusion
Hi
the rythm of the beat is ok (maybe to basic) but the drumsamples could be chosen more carefully.
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drumsamples?
no no no ... just some long-time-a-go-home-made-shit-breaks.
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11-05-2005 15:03 |
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equipped
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"Well Well, this is a fully loaded track, got everything going here, some of the soundz are as the funke1 basically said, "old german style". Though that can certianlly work for you, and be a track all in itself if you so desire. In other word's embrace your soundz and samples and make them your babies. Cheers. 
++Stu Maggoo++
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31-05-2005 10:01 |
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05-06-2005 23:02 |
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Greyone
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thanx for the reply's but this track sucks ( it was the first i uploaded on this site , ca. a half year ago) . Now I prefer the more technical & dark drumnbass. I've learned a lot from reply's and that's why i'm thankfull.
...fucking exams !
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06-06-2005 15:36 |
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Procleus
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What I dig most about the track is how light it is. I would bring this track back though. New drumkit, minus reverb, keep the pulse-line, add some synths, and try the vocals with a vocoder and see if that brightens it up some. I know you're over it, but that's what I'd do...
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02-12-2005 15:40 |
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Glim
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really like the melody but have to say straight away this doesnt sound very pro..
vocal is nice an there are some ghost hits in there that really flow but overall this makes me feel like i should be holding an old nintendo game controller playing an 8-bit game.
keep creatin those melodies and learn about making the right drums
in time it comes , but only in time
thanks
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03-12-2005 03:42 |
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Greyone
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hah 
still getin reviews on this one...
maybe i should remake this one n see what happens.
note: i know how to make my drums 
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04-12-2005 17:02 |
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Greyone
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please dont reply on this one , go check some other greyone tracks from the present.
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04-12-2005 17:05 |
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Greyone
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haha you mean the old Dutch shit.
shit , how could i ever make this stupid track 
delete this track please , i dont want people to think this is a new track 
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go check :
Greyone - Cosa Nostra
Greyone - Fire
Greyone - Aprodite - Sometimes (Greyone fucked up edition)
Greyone - Screw Yourself
Greyone - Maniac
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