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drumJoyce
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Originally posted by Halph-Price
Please check out my new track 'What's the worst that can happen' and post your comments here!!!
ya, hiding under your desk can save you from a nuclear blast. |
really? haven't got the chance to see if that works..
lets hope it does 
as for the track... 3 hours... some people can do great things in 3 hours.. but erm.. perhaps you should spend a li'll more time on this... not a catchy melody, the key to succes is a catchy melody !!! 
cool samples though
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01-04-2005 21:02 |
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Darkside 
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hm...i dont really like the lil roll u put in ur beat when you played it in the intro, but i dont hear it again so fine.
lead sounds like scifi movie, kinda goes along with vocals, but the melody isnt catchy as drumjoyce said, in fact its kinda hard to grasp at first.
i like bass until after explosion but overall it sorta needs more sub, sometimes i forget it's there. after the explosion, the bass and the melody are just kind of like droning along in harmony with each other and it's not really as good.
overall track needs a lot of work to be directly honest with ya...of course, you did this in three hours, so the curriculum is a bit different.
3.5/5 vocal samples and sounds, 2.5/5 how you used them here
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02-04-2005 05:04 |
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Halph-Price
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WOOO! don't really use vocals, and last time i did it was a disaster!
yea, there is no melody. i should really get one for it, thanks for that comment. and i can add sub to the bassline...
thanks!
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02-04-2005 16:43 |
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tech1
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i think its a good track bit more work on it back grownd sounds is wat i am saying i dont get this oscillator modulator i can nock out 51 tracks a day shit spend more time on ur trak fuck i sound a no all b cool
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04-04-2005 17:09 |
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tech1
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wats with the 15 track a day thing is that the new way 2 work i don think so 
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05-04-2005 15:09 |
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Halph-Price
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05-04-2005 17:51 |
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Surya
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Strange feel to the melodies...
Drums are quite nice. A bit thin maybe.
Bassline is kinda lacking.
Most of the vocals don't really blend with the rest, they sound a bit like you've just added them coz you wanted to use them...
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"In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
- Pieter Frenssen 2004
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08-04-2005 10:24 |
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Nice structure and samples, but it's way too short. When I was listening it for the first time I was like "Yeah, great song!" and suddenly it stopped. Also the melody could use some more bass boost. Anyway, it really has to take longer (reading the title takes longer than the song).
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17/03 : Somewhere in Borgerhout...
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08-04-2005 19:37 |
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Halph-Price
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ha ha.
anyways,i did just added the vocals cuz i wanted too. i don't normaly use vocals, ro know how to use them or ever have vocals i WANT to use.
i only know how to use vocals in a rock band sort of way, not in a ooooo that's trippy sort of way.
ex. wow that waraw noise was someone talking.
thanks surya, butyou didn't help at all. i'll 'thicken' the drums though.
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