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Rude 
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Please check out my new track 'Roughneck 2005' and post your comments here!!!
There, I think this must be the best track I've ever made. So soft and simple.. and yet so nice to listen to. I've spent all night workin' on it, no more clicks when the bass starts, sweet drums and this nice synth... god I love that synth
Greetz!
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01-04-2005 12:37 |
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drumJoyce
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NIIIIIICE ONE
yup, the best 
simple but GREAT 
I love it man, never thought you'd make anything better then fubar or your silence rmx
you got sum nice fx in your intro, where'd you get that? and a track without clicks.. hmmm gonna listen to it over and over again 
exellent structure, I like the way you stretched and reverbed your synths at the intro 
4.5/5 structure
4.5/5 tune
4/5 drumworks
5/5 track
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01-04-2005 19:29 |
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Surora23
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indeed a cool intro...great intro synths....trancy jsut how i like it...aww they stoped wtf...bad move...oh wait...oooo these are nice...very NU-NRG feel...for anyone who doenst know how nu nrg is hes an italian trance producer...one of the top best trance dj/producers out there...drums kick...ehh...theyre a bit off...i can tell youre using a some kind of slicer...there a bit off...same drums kick in with the bass....nothing has changed so far really and im 3 minutes in...this is the entire track...nothing special about this at all..some really good sounds...realy really good sounds....
but here we go...
#1 the intro leads you to think this is going to be a very techy hardstep track...very dsl style...and well...it wasnt...bad move...
#2 the synths go absolutely no where...they sounded great...but this could be much better as a rela trance track rather than dnb...
#3 your track goes no where...you repeat your measures 4 times and noting changes....
#4 your drums are good but not great...work on choping up the sample and programming all your own drums rather than using a slicer...
4/5 sounds
2/5 track
overall...i give it a 2.5 i got bored fast...and no dnb floor would like this...
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Rinse it OUT!!!!
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01-04-2005 20:05 |
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Rude
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man, look at yourself
all pro and shit 
well I know it's a bit repetitive.. but the melody is nice, so.. and you got everything in that #-stuff xcept the bass,
guess there's nothing wrong with the bass???
if so
YESSSSS !!! ATLAST !!!!
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01-04-2005 20:13 |
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drumJoyce
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thefuck???
now I have to go look after a new avatar !!
jerk
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01-04-2005 20:27 |
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Surora23
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hahaha the bass sounded good bro..for the sub that it was...it fit well with the melody
and im ntoall pro! I SUCK! so...blah...keep at it man!
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01-04-2005 20:49 |
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marine289
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here's my short review, im tired 
synth is ok, but way too repetitive, you need more elements.
we know your amen-trick now
there are other breaks out there, you know...
Intro is nice, some cool effects.
Beat comes in, maybe a bit too sudden, and i dont really like the way you use it... get's better though, a little 
that synth again... i dont really like it, but i dont dislike it either. it's just that you used it too much, with the same notes and it gets boring. As is to be said for the sub. Just too much of the same.
At 4:02 it's just the first 1.5 minutes again....
ah wait, the synth is gone.. lol a bit empty without it, maybe throw in some crazy effects (like you did in the intro). Anyway, i dont think this is your best. I thought your best was the one where you tried to copy another song. The soft, liquid dnb type, i dont remember the name...
You get a 1.75/5 from me. im sorry but its way too repetitive... 
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02-04-2005 00:58 |
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Halph-Price
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02-04-2005 05:38 |
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Halph-Price
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this is nothing like Starship troopers: roughneck
anyways.
the drums are really static sounding.
for elctronica it's a nice song.
could have been worth it to have a second melody.
or at least change to something else to give contrast to the MAIN hook.
you OD'd that one dude.
and than you kept using it.
you'll never be like common people.....
oh ya, and umm, the drums are just missing that umph, layer them.
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02-04-2005 05:48 |
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cynik
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this is not a dancefloor track definitely, morof a home - listening, or yet better, music for some sport-movie shit I dunno.
yeah, and on the slowdown, the movie gets slow-motioned
about the track... the amens sound kind of weak . the tune is ok but stops very oddly at around 1:50, buildup coming... the drums filling in quite weak again, this track never gets really going, pitty.
needs much more work.
I like: the ambient feel to it - you created a picure with tis 1
I dislike: the lack of punch, erm energy 2 it. also, the songs has slowdowns, yet never picks back up enuff
but keep tryin
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02-04-2005 10:48 |
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Rude
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yo guys, all of you are talking about the amens
believe it or not
those are firefights
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02-04-2005 12:32 |
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02-04-2005 13:12 |
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Rude
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hahaaa I'm havin' a really good time in here
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02-04-2005 13:14 |
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Surya
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Intro is nice.
Ah, filtered arps coming in, quite nice, curious what you're going to do with them.
Drop: sub could use a slight boost. Again standard amens with nice edits.
Sounds a bit empty with only the drums and the sub...
Hmmm, ok, so you've got that arp, a sub and some nice, but very standard sounding amens... and thats it again. Again I'm missing some depth here man. You can't make a track with only 3 so basic elements, it's just not intresting enough...
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08-04-2005 10:19 |
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Rude
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Originally posted by Surya
Intro is nice.
Ah, filtered arps coming in, quite nice, curious what you're going to do with them.
Drop: sub could use a slight boost. Again standard amens with nice edits.
Sounds a bit empty with only the drums and the sub...
Hmmm, ok, so you've got that arp, a sub and some nice, but very standard sounding amens... and thats it again. Again I'm missing some depth here man. You can't make a track with only 3 so basic elements, it's just not intresting enough... |
THOSE ARE FIREFIGHTS !!!!!!!!!!
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08-04-2005 18:30 |
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potatohead
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nice drums and wicked intro. very professional!!!!!
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08-04-2005 18:37 |
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Surya
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Originally posted by Rude
THOSE ARE FIREFIGHTS !!!!!!!!!!
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Erm, no, thisone is an amen
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"In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
- Pieter Frenssen 2004
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08-04-2005 20:33 |
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Rude
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Originally posted by Surya
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Originally posted by Rude
THOSE ARE FIREFIGHTS !!!!!!!!!!
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Erm, no, thisone is an amen
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no man, it says "firefight" on the sample, and
if I don't chop it, it is a firefight
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08-04-2005 20:35 |
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Surya
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The sound is that of an Amen man, not a Tirefight, which sounds more agressive and has those typical Tighten Up rides, which are not in this loop.
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"In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
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