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Surora23 Surora23 is a male
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Please check out my new track 'Jedi (Master)' and post your comments here!!!


First and formost...this track is fucking sweet...and absolutely hilarious if you find the humor in it...With and eye on teh dance floor and the DJ in mind (once again) this track goes from a sort of spacy feel, to an almost interstellar attack to get you moving...Deffinitely a track to check out!!! Why you say?

CAUSE IM A MUTHA FUCKIN JEDI BITCHES!

Made With:
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and some kick ass samples..

Big Ups to Spud and DOC for beta testing...

Edit by Surya: new version here


This track has been deleted because a new version is available

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31-03-2005 06:32
Halph-Price Halph-Price is a male
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i think you lack depth, as a person.

just kidding, never thought you'd be one who'd like star wars!!!!

pretty hollow sounding ghosts, ghost should usually try to sound like the original snare, just so ya know.

got some nice atmospheric stuff going on, but it can be totally lost sometimes, thee was a cool winding out sound i thought i heard. that shoulda been louder, if it was there!!!!!

ya there is i heard it agian!!!!! mid drops.


you need star wars sound in it, it will help support a song like this. honestly. and allow for additional variations with that.

trance influence coming in with the use of the reverse cymbal all the time, it actually stopped being a atmosphere sound after the 5th time. but it's cool.

that is a pretty sweet kick, why not insert that directly into my anus, wow, gots nice punch.

kept my attention, good song. need something more as a hook, other than fucking jedi. a cool little lead to give the atmosphere a more tone melody, maybe, keep it a bit more memorable. ya know a simple two three note port. sound.

good bassline. got bite enough.

i rate this good enough.

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31-03-2005 07:12 Homepage of Halph-Price
cynik cynik is a male
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9.6 mb ow I aint got time for this now Frown

nut, just courious, who gave this a five star rating? since the above user rated it "good enough" ??

Confused

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31-03-2005 07:37 Homepage of cynik
tracassasin tracassasin is a male
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its a real nice track but fuck all the star wars shit. i also think its kind of stretched so that makes it less intense. 4/5. cynik is right

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31-03-2005 09:11
wreakon wreakon is a male
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nice track

that reverse symbol is annoying after a bit... its too standard anyways

get some more samples and dont distort too much!! Smile

bass doesnt seem very deep or heavy... but my speakers arnt the best

that bark with the break is cool for a bit but its kinda over used

nice sounds though.. bit darker than some of your other tracks Big Grin

3.5/5

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31-03-2005 12:27 Homepage of wreakon
spudleyq spudleyq is a male
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Reverse cymbals and Jedi Masters galore!!!

Chewbacca is eating the ewoks and Han Solo is now Han Duo. Revenge of the Synth!!!!

Halphy had a good suggestion about the star wars sounds, it would definately add some atmosphere to it....laser blasts, that high pitched whine that the x-wings make on the descent to the Deathstar.

If you want to make some really good laser blast samples, take a high quality shotgun mic, go out to some high tension power lines, put the mic on the large metal cables that hold the poles to the ground, and smack it with a wrench.....presto!! Instant laser blasts!!

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31-03-2005 16:08 Homepage of spudleyq
Surora23 Surora23 is a male
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The reverse cymbols arent something thats suppose to be payed relaly much attention to...theyre there for 2 reasons...one becuas ei love them...and im not onna change it cause 2 people dont liek it Tongue and 2 because it adds to teh atmo. and the musicallity of the song...so they stay Tongue but my tracks are streatched because of DJ use...there are too many damn songs out there thatn when i mix they end way too fast...you guys always say my tracks are too long but i assume you arent DJ's...if you look at most vinyl...each track is usually 6:30- 8:00 long...any shorter and you relaly dont have time to mix... If some of you guys are serious about producing you better have a DJ in mind because theyre the ones tha are going to be spinning the tracks...not you guys at home admiring your own work Smile


KEEP EM COMIN GUYS!

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31-03-2005 17:16
cynik cynik is a male
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nice!!

this tune rules. u can see from the start

great rhythm sense in the drums love it, and oh yeah! tjhe 1st minute break: rocks Rinse

xcellent reverse cymbals!!
then the slowdown with the congas is good.. . the bassline rocks altho only 16 step it doesnt get boring! well done

i dont like the voice like sound (the mid) sounds amateurish.

the lyrics r ok I guess. the lenght of the track is reasonably low. the trancey sound maybe deserves better appearance, otherwise fabulous stuff! I keep listening it wayto go !!!
Woot greets , cynik

oh yeah it deserves at least the 4star so doesnt matter Cool

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31-03-2005 18:51 Homepage of cynik
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cool tune, but erm.. why is it jedi-stuff?
and the reversed cymbals, you put those in every tune you make .. Wink
anyway
I kinda like it Bigup
really
*sits back and relaxes*
chill
Big Grin
greetz Bigup

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31-03-2005 19:37 Homepage of Rude
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I have enjoyed this beats very much Smile In spite of nice drums, the bass should sound louder ... or you should increase it around 80-100 Hz. Peace!
31-03-2005 20:46
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the first beat you put in here i think should have some fx, maybe very light bright reverb, doesn't sound as good dry. the conga-ish loop is fine how it is tho. i kno! u should try to make a reversed sample of the assembly line "huh!" sound and put it before a normally played one. i think that might sound cool. anyway the beat is very driving and nice, and the reece doesn't overpower anything. lovin the fx at 2:56, you have some crazy ones in here. there's only one major thing missing in this song and halph mentioned it before...a hook. whether it be a catchy synth melody or vocals, you need one. and without those star wars samples (i thought i told you about those star wars samples!) i almost forget why this is called Jedi. 3.5/5. and reverse cymbals will never die. Big Grin
01-04-2005 04:46
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I like what you have going here, nice and clean, Drums r nice n thick and have the punch they should. The synth at times seems to get a little on the thing side now and then, but its nothing major. The backing things im not very found of though they dont harm the track at all in my opinion. Unlike the other im fond of the reversved cymbal. I think thats just fine. Overall not quite my style, yet i still like this one. 3.5/5
01-04-2005 05:15
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quote:
Originally posted by cynik
9.6 mb ow I aint got time for this now Frown

nut, just courious, who gave this a five star rating? since the above user rated it "good enough" ??

Confused

weird


you can rate ur won tracks, so........ Roll Eyes

heh, no time to review right now, at work..

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01-04-2005 12:48 Homepage of phonatic
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Pretty kool track.....Its not really a storming rinse out track but i think more of a chilled out track. I like your drums theyr rinsing (but the way you formed your bass round them makes it chilled)....maybe a very slight variation of how hard your bass drum hits would be good. But hey I think if your not looking to go for a release with it or anything its good enough. If i were doing a party and had a crowd of the small amount of people in the world who actually appreciate dnb then i'de mix it in for a "come down" track.
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01-04-2005 13:18
Surora23 Surora23 is a male
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quote:
Originally posted by Dj_Rinse
Pretty kool track.....Its not really a storming rinse out track but i think more of a chilled out track. I like your drums theyr rinsing (but the way you formed your bass round them makes it chilled)....maybe a very slight variation of how hard your bass drum hits would be good. But hey I think if your not looking to go for a release with it or anything its good enough. If i were doing a party and had a crowd of the small amount of people in the world who actually appreciate dnb then i'de mix it in for a "come down" track.
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This is far from a chilled track..the bass is pumping sub...i had this palyed out last night at a show in myrtle beach...the crowd went crazy...im sitsll doimg final touches hear and thre..but this is far vrom chilled mate :p cheers for the review!

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01-04-2005 17:26
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we'll i guess its obviously a matter of opinion... i general think of a rinsing tune of 1 with quite a bouncy bass line...but fuk it i'm not gonna generalise that much.whatever vibe you get from it... its a kool tune Big Grin .
Rinse it out...
p.s. thats kool what kinda show was it? like a demo thing?....nice1 m8

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01-04-2005 17:33
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quote:
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we'll i guess its obviously a matter of opinion... i general think of a rinsing tune of 1 with quite a bouncy bass line...but fuk it i'm not gonna generalise that much.whatever vibe you get from it... its a kool tune Big Grin .
Rinse it out...
p.s. thats kool what kinda show was it? like a demo thing?....nice1 m8


just a weekly in the area...

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01-04-2005 18:12
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This is the shit ! superb bassline and great drums. Great climax and no bad comments except for the drum beats at the beginning, but anyway great song !

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01-04-2005 20:19
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rate urself? thats of least importance. why would any1 want to know that? tahts lame Tongue

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This shit is tight mate, reminds me of resonant evil angry man GRIMEEEYY SHIT!. The only flaw i can present to you is lack of star wars samps, i reckon a few more would give the tune that identity it needs to be named jedi.


4/5

Swweeeet

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