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Surora23 
Agressive Melodic Disorder
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Please check out my new track 'The Silence ( SuRoRa's Whisper Mix)' and post your comments here!!!
Alrighty...after some agrivating hours of working and re working this track...this is my master piece...it contains a lot of the similar flow, and is a bit longer...(as are most of my tracks) but theyre all made to be mixed by dj's...anyway, i didnt use the original cords for the strings but did use some nice pads for some eary trancy melody...Also for the reece i didnt use the same reece sample but a very similar one that is in the bass pack in the download section...dont know what else to say...youll have to check it for yourself...
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Junglist
Vangaurd
Albino
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This track has been deleted on the producer's request
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28-03-2005 03:12 |
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DjSlut
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Before we start, i'd like to commend your choice of vst's. 
Anyway...
Tight intro, that synth melody needs to be more varied imo... The amen is awesome!
The bass sounds good, but is not very reminiscent of the original. Good flow.
At the second build, i like the filtered bass. However perhaps u could have had a more progressive intro (the break kinda jumps in). The second drop is pretty phat anyway though. My favourite aspect of the tune is definetly the drums - they are sweet as! 
This is all round a good tune and i am sure it will give other entries a run for their money. 
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28-03-2005 04:32 |
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Darkside
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ah...nice synth melody in the intro, not so much the melody as the sound, since that melody is ringing through my subconscious, as i hear it so much since everyones usin it. nice bass filters you've got everywhere in here, and a much cleaner amen than usual thanks to that mastering software being put to use. this beat is a frickin audio assault i swear. the drops are well done too. i think this tune is a pretty good remix, harder than the original, keeping the melody but not too much else. much better than a average track with small alterations, which passes off for a remix with some 
can't rate it yet tho or i might get in trouble... lol peace
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28-03-2005 05:25 |
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Surya
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This thread will be opened for comments after the compo has wrapped
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"In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
- Pieter Frenssen 2004
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28-03-2005 11:48 |
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Surya
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Reopened for comments!
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"In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
- Pieter Frenssen 2004
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04-04-2005 07:17 |
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afterhourz
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Rolling breaks&bass,nice analog lead (Im a sucker for em),maybe add few SFX
Mixdown good apart from bass pad at 1st drop is bit low and bassline requires bit more sub frequency.
Arrangement is Dj friendly,Not far of the mark 6/10
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04-04-2005 18:59 |
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JayFish
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Like that synth in intro and at the end. Flows good through whole song with it's ups and downs. Sound quality is good but I think there's too much cutted from lower freqs. It makes me feel something is missing without proper lower band.
With little more mastering there could be so much more.
Really good track and good luck with the compo!
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04-04-2005 20:06 |
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Surora23
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Originally posted by ultradark
the trancy sound that you begin the track with is so gay, drums have too much reverb, the snare sounds lame and so dated it's unbelivable (it's 2005 man!), first drop is so out of tune, the reece style bassline that you continue with is again so lame an kinda oldfashion sounding, i'm struggeling to continue to listen to this, the second drop - again some out of tune synths, it seems like nothing fits together in this track, i also think you seriously need keyboard playing lessons, the drumming after the second drop is terrible, a total mess of drums with no sense, sorry but it's just another track that sounds and is arranged like all the rest of your track and that is getting nowhere, imo. |
dude i think youre just pissed off cause your shit sucks...dont flame on my track when you dont know whatthe fuck youre talking about...#1 that intro synth is a square synth from junglist...so i correct you..its not gay...teh drums HAVE ZERO REVERB ON THEM!!!!! and the snare is an amen faggot...and the strait drums are the same samples has bs1 recirding artists use so dont sit there and flame on my snare cause a lotof professionals use the same...my reece is NOT OUT OF TUNE...and ive taken lessons before...and the arrangement of all my tracks is that to be DJ freiendly...i remind all people like you...if you want a fucking track signed in teh future it better be DJ friendly cause theyre the ones fucking playing it, nopt you in your bedroom...now before you think you know more than me and jsut get pissed off cause your remix has some flaws doesnt give you a right to flame on mine when you dont know what you are tlaking about.... THANK YOU!!
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05-04-2005 00:38 |
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Surora23
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jsut because i havent reviewed them doesn mean shit...oh and btw i reviewd yours before you reviewed mine...so dont start going off and bullshtiing with that...and i reviewed suryas and darksides...so dont stasrt saying shit like im not reviewing the other tracks...dumbass...
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05-04-2005 01:25 |
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Surora23
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jsut because i havent reviewed them doesn mean shit...oh and btw i reviewd yours before you reviewed mine...so dont start going off and bullshtiing with that.. |
you really are dumb, ofcourse you reviewed mine before i reviewed yours, you were going for my track to screw it because of your jealousy and unability to make something similar.
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and i reviewed suryas and darksides...so dont stasrt saying shit like im not reviewing the other tracks...dumbass...
2 minutes later you reviewed surya's track, so you must had known in advance that you will intentionally screw my track.
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RIGHHHHHHHHHTTTT...and tahts why NO ONE has voted for your tr5ack right? ive reviewed everyones track except jay fishes and afterhours...so please quit with your amature "im better than you" bullshit because your shit obviously sucks CAUSE NO ONE IS VOTING FOR IT...fucking dumb ass...
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05-04-2005 02:18 |
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Surora23
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RIGHHHHHHHHHTTTT...and tahts why NO ONE has voted for your tr5ack right? ive reviewed everyones track except jay fishes and afterhours...so please quit with your amature "im better than you" bullshit because your shit obviously sucks CAUSE NO ONE IS VOTING FOR IT...fucking dumb ass...
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i made the track to contribute and show respect to this great site and i don't care about voting because i'm not the chart whore like you. |
chart whore? is that a compliment...and dont start going off about bullshti abotu how great this site is, because everynow and then i PM the chronic and give him praise for it, and you can even ask him on that one...so quit with the bullshti and shut the fuck up already....
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05-04-2005 02:25 |
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Surora23
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chart whore? is that a compliment... |
yes, i guess it is a compliment for you.
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and dont start going off about bullshti abotu how great this site is, because everynow and then i PM the chronic and give him praise for it, and you can even ask him on that one...so quit with the bullshti and shut the fuck up already.... |
besides chart whore you obviously are also asslicker and you think you are the only one who can praise something and you don't like competition. |
are you trying to say that im saying im the best producer on this site? asslicker...boviously not otherwise i wouldnt have given you the review i did...and its decent to praise the mods for our opportunity..your contradicting yourself by that statement...and i love competition...phonatics remix was amazing...so before you start running your mouth some more...think of something intelligable to say....
youre making yourself look like an idiot...
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05-04-2005 02:37 |
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Surora23
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well then get someone to put together a sample pack such as surya or whatever and lets beat battle so youll shut up... dousche bag...
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05-04-2005 02:52 |
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Halph-Price
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Originally posted by ultradark
how can an idiot tell somebody that he is making himself look like an idiot?
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that saying, takes one to know one.
or as Karl Jung calls it, the archtype of ones Shadow, in where you see your faults reflected on other people, that you hate.
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05-04-2005 04:25 |
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Halph-Price
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Originally posted by ultradark
the trancy sound that you begin the track with is so gay, drums have too much reverb, the snare sounds lame and so dated it's unbelivable (it's 2005 man!), first drop is so out of tune, the reece style bassline that you continue with is again so lame an kinda oldfashion sounding, i'm struggeling to continue to listen to this, the second drop - again some out of tune synths, it seems like nothing fits together in this track, i also think you seriously need keyboard playing lessons, the drumming after the second drop is terrible, a total mess of drums with no sense, sorry but it's just another track that sounds and is arranged like all the rest of your track and that is getting nowhere, imo. |
and i am offended that you called it gay, i don't apprciate that attitude, and i would like to remind you of the etiquette of this site.
although you must comment on them, there's a fine line between constructive, and being a downright asshole. you trampled it. no one else is an asshole here.
there was one but he got removed and all songs deleted, to my knowledge.
without any suggestion on improvement, you're comment is pointless.
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This post has been edited 1 time(s), it was last edited by Halph-Price: 05-04-2005 05:57.
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05-04-2005 04:59 |
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Halph-Price
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i knew this post would come to bite me in the ass.
but hoenstly, i don't insult people's music. that's what i am talking about. you don't see anyone else do that either. that's what i don't like.
could even understand it if they were new and didn't know what they were doing, but not when there trying and it's just a genre of music you don't like.
i should stay out of this though. i am sorry i said anything. i won't retract thoes comments, cuz then it would be confusing, but let's just leave this okay before anyone get's into trouble.
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05-04-2005 05:20 |
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Surya
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Please stop flaming...
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05-04-2005 07:18 |
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tetsuo
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Ouh, it's hot down here.... here's my review:
The sound quality is really good, drums are clear, basses doesn't "falls" on each other, the one one coming up at 2.32 is great, sound good with that lfo on it, maybe going up a little too much sometime...
Drum are good once again, maybe some variation on the main loops would be nice.
Good build up and shit, one of my favourite of the compo....
4/5
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06-04-2005 19:44 |
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phonatic
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yea liking this one..beats are nice and crisp, but actually i think they are a bit to loud, they push everything else in the track back in the mix. thought when the sub came in 1.04 i thought it was too quiet, but listening more, its the beats being too loud...all that reece on the break down seems a bit to distant to me too, wicked drop tho man, but seems to lack a little sub, its there just a bit quiet.....think it could be a little louder imo. yea again the second drop is heavy, just seems all the levels need a little tweak..its hard to make out the reece cos of the beats. well like this tho man, wicked track..good luck dude 
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