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ethex
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27-03-2005 17:04 |
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Darkside
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hm...intros kinda quirky. cool tho. especially like the little sonar-ish sound you got. wait...why does the vocal skip before the beat drops when he's saying "we at war with ourselves", it seems to get louder right around "at". jus a lil glitch maybe it might have been the render.
wow....beat's very hard...
alright when i get a little deeper into this i'm feeling like the main melody bleeps aren't workin with the rest of the tune that much...the really high beeps that you have in seem to work well tho
hm the drop is kinda out of structure, where he jus says one word and then its on again...good vocal sample you have there, tho, by the way
well, in conclusion, i was really feeling the idea but the track could be longer and have more structured drops in the middle. i'd say 3/5 overall, 2.5 structure 3/5 production and 3.5/5 idea. i was expecting a bit from more from ya, cuz i havent forgotten that jazzy tune you uploaded earlier, that shit was hot
i listen to it a lot. hope this review will help you with this track, and keep on producin...peace
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27-03-2005 23:00 |
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ethex
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yea thanks m8!
the thing is "clonedsounds" is smth different
two ppl,two different styles.
i usually dont make such music..
gonna fix it anyways.
peace.
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29-03-2005 15:10 |
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Surya
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Drop is very heavy. Some cool switches, good drumwork. But sounds very messy. The plucked sounds are kinda dull though. Try giving it heavy distortion with some reverb!
Totally my style, but needs some work. Try cleaning it up a bit without loosing its roughness.
Oh yeah, it's overcompressed too
__ "In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
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05-04-2005 08:39 |
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ethex
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ok,ill do my best
thx!
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05-04-2005 17:24 |
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