Darkside 
Old-School Rolla
Registration Date: 02-01-2005
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hey, the longer it takes, the better, man. in most cases.
hmm intro is a bit empty at first...haha the copyright is funny...not to do with the music but o well...i like that hoover there...creeping sound builds up to hi hats and vocals...sounds fairly good so far...very nice suspense being built here...is that a dave akuma break you're using there? if so...they're very popular here, i get kinda sick of em...hm nice synth that comes in, kinda sounds like an alien choking...best way i can describe it so u know what im talkin about. subs seem at the right level. lets see...u filter out the beat and now we're left with the atmo and the hoover...you're filtering up all kinds of stuff for this drop...and then you cut it off. sounds pretty good. might wanna stick a vocal snip in the silence there tho. hm song continues as usual...to a fairly smooth ending. well ok now that i've walked you through your own work, here's the final review: i really think you need a melody line in here, or maybe just make a bit of melody out of those beeps you already have. also the beat kinda needs some cleaning up, if this is its best quality...and yeah like u said some more fills in here would be well done. otherwise i'll say 3/5. you seemed to get the structure done fine, and the drops are fairly good, altho you should try vocals like i suggested...peace
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28-03-2005 02:27 |
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SARIN
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Registration Date: 08-10-2004
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Thx darkside..
That's a well written review, I will have to go back to the drawing board and get the magic tools out to clean up the breaks and all.
And as i said it's still in progress...so a melody line here and a fill there is def gonna happen.
Thx for the feedback
SAR!N
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28-03-2005 05:01 |
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Surya
The Robot
Registration Date: 04-11-2002
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Intro is quite nice. Heavy vocal 
Drop: Nice drums. Make them a tad more punchy maybe?
The distorted part of the bass (or whatever it is) should sound a bit phatter, now it sounds toot thin.
Sound could use some work. If you don't pay attention, all you hear is the drums and the sub. Boost the mid parts so your melodies come out a bit better.
Not bad, but you've done better.
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