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Muad'Dib
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Please check out my new track 'Jungle Rumble' and post your comments here!!!
I planned to make a jungle tune for dnb.be, and to honour this site and the whole dnb.be community and organisation (honorable mentions go to Surya and thechronic).
I made this tune today, in about 3 hours of producing. Not much attention devoted to EQ so there are some sounds that are difficult to be heard. Anyway, the theme was dark, devil-fast tune which will rock your speakers/monitors/sound-boxes/whatever. I made the vocals myself, but they are difficult to be heard because I said why so. I had problems with getting them to be heard as clear as possible in this last half-hour, and this is how far I got. Ahh, nevermind, I will fix all that in the final version.
Anyway, if you wonder what the text says, here it is:
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Have you imagined yourself to be alone, but to be strong?
Have you imagined yourself being self, and run for long?
Did you ever thought you will be satisfying yourself?
Did you ever imagined you leaving your mind on the shelf?
Had you the idea to rumble?
Did you see yourself in the jungle? |
Yeah. So, please tell me what you think and what I should fix so that I can make an excellent tune! Thanx guys!
:)
-Muad'Dib
-2005
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26-03-2005 14:30 |
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thefunke1
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Intro is fine,
Would be nice to have a big wobbly base come in with the drop, and follow throughfor for a while. I would also cut up the drums a little more, get some more varity In there. As you mentioned, the levels are a little off, therefore I'll leave that alone until the final mix. A little more punch is needed witht he Sub/Bass to give the tune a little depth. looking forward to hearing the final version.
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26-03-2005 17:30 |
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Muad'Dib
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Thanx bro, but I really need more response... please guys?
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27-03-2005 12:58 |
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CubicSphere
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Nice drums, they stand out well, maybe the bass isnt loud enough. THe intro is kind of promissing, with the rising choir sound, and the drums that are going to break out.
Wow about 1.05 (60 bars or so) - now its getting going. The rising bass in the intro should develop into a fatter bass.
Nice variety with different bass lines - not one of those 'repeat it all' tunes.
Damn its stopped!! only 2.17 give us some more!
I reckon the vocals are fine at the level they are, makes the track more mysterous. Maybe the bass lines need fattening up.
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27-03-2005 22:57 |
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Darkside
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yeah you DO need more response, so let's see what i can do for ya.
hmm...nice intro...the rising choir adds suspense...might wanna put a bit of bright reverb on that beat, makes everything sound more fresh, i find...unless theres already some on there, its hard to tell sometime
flute sounds are pretty good
like the vocals, altho their eqing kinda hurts my ears but u said you'd make it fit in the mix so its ok...the one two three needs some effect or somethin tho it doesn't sound serious enough.
uh oh---when you play the surya break over the hi hats it seems to be way off beat there...i think it may just be a bad loop, actually.
bass isn't pronounced enough it seems...
whoa, end caught me offguard...this is gonna be longer, correct?
if i was to rate this track right now it'd be a 3 because of the unstable levels, length and such, but that'd be the only reason because this tune seems pretty solid otherwise. they're all things you can fix without damaging the vibe. but hey i hope this review helped you and i'll check out the final version when it comes out...nice of you to make an ode to the site, especially when it's jungle
STILL my favorite subgenre of dnb...or was dnb spawned from jungle? ah well, anyway, peace bro
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27-03-2005 23:20 |
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Friscko
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04-04-2005 23:59 |
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S.O.T.A.
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I liked the intro and i liked the crazy drums. The beat switch up is a little rough in the one part.The drop was cool but definately more sub bass.
cool then
LATER
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14-05-2005 07:13 |
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