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Rude 
I'm gonna get you
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Please check out my new track 'concept of the computer (50%) (unfinished)' and post your comments here!!!
Hey I'm working on something, I'd like to know if the drums are cool and the sound is good, it's not complete, so I'd like to know what I could add ??
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This track has been deleted on Rude's request.
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22-03-2005 12:09 |
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Anthem
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Registration Date: 18-02-2005
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jow dude ... your the king of the drumloops man
drums are kickass !!!!
i think that you better turn that synthbass sound thing a bit down .. that way the drums will come out harder !!
3/5
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22-03-2005 13:23 |
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Rude
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22-03-2005 13:28 |
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Surora23
Agressive Melodic Disorder
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Originally posted by Rude
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jow dude ... your the king of the drumloops man
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#1 this is amature drum work...no offense to rude...but the drums have no kick, and are quite easy to sequence...so ifi may correct....king of drum loops? no...BUT...this was an ok attempt at this track...no to mention the copy write infringements put this site in danger..
anyway...this sounds nothing like the original to be honest...you should kind of give a teaser for the durms and etc...and you dont even dreop it...i can hardly feel the sub, and teh drums give a good bang when you drop them...
wasnt feeling this one at all...not to mention i dont like the origianl either so this is a partially biased negative review...but i do have to say...that a lot of people are giving you rave reviews when youre still learning bro...including myself..i think my shit is fucking crap...just keep working and spoend a good week or so on a track...remember, post when you feel more confident..
keep at it bro..
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22-03-2005 18:48 |
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Anthem
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the fact that you couldn't here that kick is probably casued by that synth 
dunno ... however I kinda liked it ...
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22-03-2005 21:00 |
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Rude
I'm gonna get you
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Originally posted by Surora23
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Originally posted by Rude
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Originally posted by Anthem
jow dude ... your the king of the drumloops man
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Or I could make a track with drumloops only |
#1 this is amature drum work...no offense to rude...but the drums have no kick, and are quite easy to sequence...so ifi may correct....king of drum loops? no...BUT...this was an ok attempt at this track...no to mention the copy write infringements put this site in danger..
anyway...this sounds nothing like the original to be honest...you should kind of give a teaser for the durms and etc...and you dont even dreop it...i can hardly feel the sub, and teh drums give a good bang when you drop them...
wasnt feeling this one at all...not to mention i dont like the origianl either so this is a partially biased negative review...but i do have to say...that a lot of people are giving you rave reviews when youre still learning bro...including myself..i think my shit is fucking crap...just keep working and spoend a good week or so on a track...remember, post when you feel more confident..
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What are you talking about "the original"
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23-03-2005 12:01 |
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Lizziekah
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How much time have you spent on this one? 15 minutes? I don't like this one.. there's something wrong with it
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23-03-2005 13:07 |
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Halph-Price
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thoes vocals remind me of Team Fotress Classic, when you capture the flags.
yea, i am prone to be turned off by the drums, the original is over used, the amen. i don't know, it's good for a break before the drops, but not the main drums.
try to layer or soemthing.
need to have a bassline don't forget.
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23-03-2005 14:55 |
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Surora23
Agressive Melodic Disorder
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Originally posted by Rude
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Originally posted by Surora23
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Originally posted by Rude
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Originally posted by Anthem
jow dude ... your the king of the drumloops man
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Or I could make a track with drumloops only |
#1 this is amature drum work...no offense to rude...but the drums have no kick, and are quite easy to sequence...so ifi may correct....king of drum loops? no...BUT...this was an ok attempt at this track...no to mention the copy write infringements put this site in danger..
anyway...this sounds nothing like the original to be honest...you should kind of give a teaser for the durms and etc...and you dont even dreop it...i can hardly feel the sub, and teh drums give a good bang when you drop them...
wasnt feeling this one at all...not to mention i dont like the origianl either so this is a partially biased negative review...but i do have to say...that a lot of people are giving you rave reviews when youre still learning bro...including myself..i think my shit is fucking crap...just keep working and spoend a good week or so on a track...remember, post when you feel more confident..
keep at it bro.. |
What are you talking about "the original" |
this is a track by future prophecies called dreadlock....spudley sampeld the melody himself...thats where he got the smaples from
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28-03-2005 06:26 |
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daze_DND
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yea, i am prone to be turned off by the drums, the original is over used, the amen. i don't know, it's good for a break before the drops, but not the main drums.
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I fully agree...there's more to life then the f*cking amen. If yr gonna use it...try to be original with it (good luck yr gonna need it).
as for the track:
beats: see above
arpeggio synthline: bit to trancy imo (just my opinion, not into trance dnb ) needs some eq to sit better in the mix.
Bass: what bass? it's in there if you listen very closely but you should bring it up more (drum & BASS remember).
Rave stabs: ok but not very original imo...
this 'tune' needs a lot of work....maybe work more on yr tracks before posting here....
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28-03-2005 10:10 |
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Surya
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Cool intro, thanks to the cool vocal.
Nice choir coming in, but it sounds dry. Give it more reverb.
Arps aint that intresting.
Drums: nice edits and quite crisp sound, but it sounds so standard... I advise you to start layering your amens with one-shot samples to spice them up!
1.59: nice sub coming in, but doesn't make up for the lack of bass in the track.
This sounds more like a rouch concept than a real track to me... I think you're more like experimenting and slowly finding your way in producing rather than really making tracks. Nothing wrong with that, that's how I started too...
1.5/5 for the track
2.25/5 for the sound
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"In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
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03-04-2005 19:21 |
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Halph-Price
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that has to be one of the most touching reviews i have read.
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03-04-2005 19:24 |
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Surya
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Hmmm, not sure what you mean by that...
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"In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
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03-04-2005 19:28 |
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Rude
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03-04-2005 19:45 |
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JayFish
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This peace of track just didn't fit into my ears at all. Sound levels where all wrong. No kick in drumline what so ever. No actual baseline. Boring arps with europop flavor we did over ten years ago.
Hope you'll get this 100% and I want to hear it again. There maybe some potential in this track but not yet tho.
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03-04-2005 20:51 |
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Rude
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nope this track = discontinued
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03-04-2005 20:53 |
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this is the most touching review I have ever read