phonatic
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Registration Date: 21-03-2005
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21-03-2005 12:23 |
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Darkside 
Old-School Rolla
Registration Date: 02-01-2005
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hm...intro needs a little work, maybe a better atmosphere. lead is pretty clean, beat is ok, not the best i've heard. aciddy synth beeps you've got there don't sound quite right for dnb. the new lead u bring in sounds ok...hm...the new beat u drop in has a fx in it involving the snare that sounds sorta weird...the beat progresses on from there...hm it seems like the levels are kinda wrong at 3:18, all the synths begin to sound sorta jumbled. hm second drop is pretty good, the detuned pads or whatever work. yeah the breakdown is pretty tight. and the beat continues from there. yep this ones alright, jus have a look at the stuff i told you about, and it will possibly have a raise from the 3/5 i'm giving it. i really like the melodies in this, and i can tell you have potential to get better as long as you try. thanks for sharin this cool tune with us, peace.
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22-03-2005 03:00 |
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phonatic
Producer
Registration Date: 21-03-2005
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hey wicked, thanks for listening man. yea i've noted what u said and i'll take a look. a lot of people say my tracks more melodical and thats kinda what im trying to do, so 
cheers man, i'll post up the final copy when its done.
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http://www.thehubnet.co.uk/
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22-03-2005 10:10 |
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Surya
The Robot
Registration Date: 04-11-2002
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Drums could use a bit more flow and the snares a bit more high-end.
Bassline is quite nice, but I'm afraid it might get boring fast. A bit more sub would be welcome 
Yah, bassline gets a bit boring indeed.
Nice soft sounding pad you bring in.
Nice themes and stuff, once the trancey pad comes in, but lacks a bit of flow, mainly due to the drums not rolling as much as they should.
Low end could use some work too.
Quite nice track, but it's not finished imo.
2.5/5 for the track
2.25/5 for the sound
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"In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
- Pieter Frenssen 2004
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03-04-2005 19:14 |
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marine289
Wicked Producer
Registration Date: 05-10-2004
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Intro could be a little better... May be the bass (?) in the intro could be played a little louder, or you could add some effects or whatever.
Nice orchestral stuff before the drop. Drop is nice, drums could be a little more tight. Try this: every note a hihat, and change the velocity's of each hit.
Maybe a ride will do the job too.
I think that makes it a little more rolling. But snares and ghosts are good. (may be a little more effect on the snare, more delay maybe...)
Bassline does get a little boring, but is nice. Background effects or synth need a boost.
Same bassline and beat again. Try to add some more variation to both of them. And maybe you should add some crazy effects
Nice pads, but also need a tiny boost.
Overall nice track, but could be better. Work on this a little longer and this will be pretty good!
2.5/5 for now
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