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muphasta 
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19-03-2005 10:48 |
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Yawn
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like it...you definitely got an original style with your tracks. 
Will do a full review in a bit 
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19-03-2005 10:55 |
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Anthem
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2:18 that bass sounds very good
like the drums ...
the screams are cool
... the vocals "i will kill you all" needs an other voice though.
like the sounds ...
nice one
3.5/5 for the song
2/5 for the vocals
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19-03-2005 11:23 |
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broadside
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This isn't one of my favourites of yours I have to say. Yeah the vocals are obviously just banal and staltified. Tell you what is excellent for them imo is downloading some audio books. I downloaded some guy with aa well crusty accent reading the Isle of Dr Moreau, and neva looked back. Full of stuff like "The beast came lunging for me through the shadows" - wicked stuff 
But vocals don't make or break a tune. Basically everything sounds ok, but the tune just doesn't grab me. So seeing as I aint got nothing constructive to say I'm gonna shut up/
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19-03-2005 14:55 |
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dont like the lead.......and theres not really much wrong with spoken bit....but id use it a bit less......
way to much lead and not enough sub.....layer up some low end
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19-03-2005 20:51 |
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Halph-Price
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marine289: thanks, i have done so.
muphasta: best review ever, i'll make sure to do the same for you bub.
crushfuck: thanks crushfuck, i'll just wait like a obsessive girlfriend waiting for her boyfriend to call. no pressure. .... so how's things...
Anthem: thanks dude, appriciate.
reckon: i am allowed to vote for my own songs. so help me god, i love them to 5 stars.... thanks for the production comments i tried hard.
broadside: DUDE AUDIO BOOSK, THAT"S AN AMAZING IDEA. i get the best inspirations from books i read, so you ave no idea how awsome that is!!!! you just blew my mind.
i'll try to make something wacko next for you okay.
utter muppet: the low end doesn't seem that loud only cuz i trummpted up the high end too much i tihnk, i am still learning about it., thanks though i was wondering if anyone would think i used the words too much as well.
Darkside: i like fatboyslim, so thanks dude, except he would spin them around a bit to be like "GOING TO ALL AM I KILL" in some jerky fasion or another.
completly right, too much trebel, if only in the begining, thanks. the rest it's still maybe be a little too high still.
the rest is apparent, but the second dropp i'll try to add to it to make it a bit heavier.
i used and industrial Pad synth to start it, so it damn well better sound industrial, i can bearly make it play, let alone play how i want it too, so i liked it.
i try to mkae all my songs sound violent, listen to Formidable CompleX (shamless eh? [canadian eh?{enough question's eh?}]) it's violent. really. if nothing AT ALL else.
oh ya and about that slipping nin in i just want to take this moment to say
I AM GOING TO SEE NIN
and i can understand, this song doesn't entirly appeal to me either, i was just trying to make a level song that was produced well enough.
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20-03-2005 06:08 |
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Halph-Price
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links fixed, yay. 
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22-03-2005 01:58 |
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marine289
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Oh I totally forgot to review 
sorry dude, im a busy man (sometimes
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Interesting vocal, is that the voice thingie in fruity or just a sample? 
btw about that voice thing: if you make it like this:
I(6) will(
kill(5) you(3) all(2)! so with this: (#) behind every word, that particular word will be pitched up. It's cool and I think you could make that vocal better that way.
Very interesting intro, with the vocal, the bass, background noises and the hihats.
Drums and bass coming in: bass-sample is ok, dont really like the melody. Drums have some cool variation, but the hihats are too loud, and the BD and snare could be a little louder. Or maybe just some other samples 
At least some distortion on the BD would do it some good, but you can try that.
Ok my favorite part of the song: 1:26 and further. The break is good, and the beat is also nice kind of electro feeling to it.
Lead fading in there is cool too, but the bass doesnt really fit that I think. Some nice screams, but maybe try to do it non-rhytmical, more unexpected, i think that will work better.
Outro is kind of nice too. Overall not a bad song, probably the best Ive heard from you. It's good, you probably have one of the most original styles around on this site... If you'd study music theory and just learn a lot more, you will be really good in a few years
I guess I'll give it a 3/5
oh btw: nice title considering the vocal (I will kill you all)
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25-03-2005 00:26 |
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Surya
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Vocal is cool but a bit dry maybe.
Quite nice reece you have there, just a tiny bit too digital sounding...
Drums sound a bit static, try getting them to sound more alive. And give them more mid.
Dunno, melodies and structure didn't create much intrest with me...
2.25/5 for the track
2.5/5 for the sound
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"In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
- Pieter Frenssen 2004
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01-04-2005 16:27 |
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Halph-Price
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oh wow, surya reviewed and i missed it.
my reece is digital, not much anyway i can get around that.
the drums i can try to spruce up though. thanks!
Marine thanks, i recorded the vocals myself, it's not the fruity voice. it's funny because when i used that speech synth, people thought it was me.
i must stop, speaking, like, robot.
i am trying to attend music college, for that reason too, i need to learn something. thanks for the review.
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This post has been edited 1 time(s), it was last edited by Halph-Price: 03-04-2005 18:31.
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03-04-2005 18:30 |
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Surya
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Originally posted by Halph-Price
my reece is digital, not much anyway i can get around that. |
And how about using some 'dirty it up' filters like downgraders or distortion?
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"In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
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03-04-2005 18:41 |
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Del3riumc3
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Nice track cool bassline..But I don't like the vocals and all they seem out of place and overfiltered..I would rate this 2.5/5
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bust my power bleep my klit if you dunno this shit you aint junglist..
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03-04-2005 18:48 |
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Surya
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my reece is digital, not much anyway i can get around that. |
And how about using some 'dirty it up' filters like downgraders or distortion? |
is it not distorted already? |
It might be, hard for me to hear, but I guess so. But maybe a bit of the right fuzz distortion could give it a nice analogue feel...
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"In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
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