Anthem - Adagio (mash up ... test)

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Anthem - Adagio (mash up ... test)

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Anthem Anthem is a male

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Registration Date: 18-02-2005
Posts: 67

Please check out my new track 'Adagio (mash up ... test)' and post your comments here!!!

hi , I just messed around with some strings and stuff ...

Don't think you folks are going to like this though... I thought that besides the 'intro' , the track sounded a bit nice :P ...
comments are welcome

This post has been edited 1 time(s), it was last edited by Anthem: 18-03-2005 15:30.

18-03-2005 15:22

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yep your right ......i dont like this!!!
id normally give more detailed feedback but im in a rush!

18-03-2005 19:42

stickbubbly stickbubbly is a male

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Registration Date: 16-09-2004
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i like the melodies. the beat could use some more layers.
leads are too loud but sound cool.
gets a bit boring
could use some more variations.
i love that wonky bass
nice one

cheers

18-03-2005 21:32

DOPEGANGSTARZ
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Registration Date: 18-03-2005
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a bit repetitive in places,
the synth strings sounds awful, sorry even if their real sampled strings they dont work.
sorry to be so harsh.
you need to work on the mix Noo

18-03-2005 22:10

Anthem Anthem is a male

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Registration Date: 18-02-2005
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thx for the feedback ... It's true , i've a problem with variation in my tunes ... working on it Tongue

folks that heard my very first one say that I'm gettin' better Roll Eyes

more comments ?

This post has been edited 1 time(s), it was last edited by Anthem: 19-03-2005 11:08.

19-03-2005 11:08

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right.time for a bit more detail......
first of all there is a basis for a decent track here but.....personally i would ditch the string sounds/synth stabs and try some new things instead,
if you cant be bothered to do this fair enough but at least edit them with some different fx...EXPERIMENT!!!.......
if you find your tracks need more variation try using a more minimal arrangement.....that way when you bring in a new part its more noticeable.....

.then again....do what u like and have fun!!!

19-03-2005 19:52

Anthem Anthem is a male

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Registration Date: 18-02-2005
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I'm exploring reason for 4 weeks now Tongue

don't now how all fx work yet so I didn't use many of them in this tune ... have made a new one today ... Maybe I'll post it... It sounds a lot different than this one Tongue

I blieve that's a good thing ...

19-03-2005 21:55

mvvuorimaki mvvuorimaki is a male

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quickly:

melodies are ok
drums is good
Nice Bass Sound

well it,s good

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19-03-2005 22:09

Anthem Anthem is a male

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Registration Date: 18-02-2005
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you all have VERY different tastes ... LoL ...

thx ... The new one is better though ... Tongue

19-03-2005 22:23

tech1

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Registration Date: 21-03-2005
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it dont grab me beets r good not much going no in it good mix down its better than my traks more work no the trak Bigup

22-03-2005 15:33

Surya

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Very lowfi sounding drums. Did you use some of them preset REX loops that come with reason?

The bassline is very cool, too bad all the rest follows the same melody.

Gets boring quite fast tough.

I would say: nice bassline, but the rest needs a lot of work!

2/5 for the track
1.5 for the sound

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01-04-2005 09:14

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