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Emblem-X 
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Registration Date: 10-11-2002
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17-03-2005 21:43 |
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Surya
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Hey, how many versions of thisone are you going to make?
Bass is slightly overpowering in this version.
Snare is quite straight, give it some variation here and there 
2.17: nice drop, sub works well.
Starts getting a bit messy towards the end though, wouldn' t use that oldskool sound...
Nice track, but a bit too repetetive maybe...
2.75/5 for the track
3/5 for the sound
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31-03-2005 14:29 |
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Halph-Price
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the snare sounds very nasal, it needs a bit of high end excitment, for sure.
i always liked the bassline.
that grind before the drop goes on forever...
but for the drop, you need a lead or something, there's a big gap right where you have the sensative sound at.
you get the vocals going after, and they fill that gap.
but at the wrong time, the drop you want it to be a flat eq, that means no freq isn't filled.
the 500-1500 is vocal speech and is the most sensative to human's because of that, so anything sounds empty without it going on.
so try kicking in the vocals during the drops instead.
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02-04-2005 02:55 |
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Emblem-X
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shameless bumpage 
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03-04-2005 17:40 |
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Halph-Price
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i usually can muster up something random to say in a bump page. you truly HAVE no shame!
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03-04-2005 19:25 |
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Surya
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Indeed, the more since he posted the new version only yesterday
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03-04-2005 19:28 |
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Emblem-X
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Originally posted by Surya
Indeed, the more since he posted the new version only yesterday
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that's why it says:
shameless bumpage
hehehe
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03-04-2005 19:30 |
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JayFish
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I liked everything else except that melody which started near 4:30. Mastering should also get more attention.
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03-04-2005 20:59 |
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Emblem-X
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