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Yawn 
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Please check out my new track 'Sheddim' and post your comments here!!!
Im pretty much a newbie to producing & this is one of the first tracks i've been happy enough with to post on the site. Id be very grateful for any feedback on what you like (if anything) or what you dont like bout tha track. For the producers - any tips would be sweeeet!!!
and thanks to Dave Akuma for the Shinobu break downloaded from the site, which I chopped up in Recycle , layered & re-sequenced. This track was made entirely in Logic with the help of a few VSTs. (mainly Synapse Junglist).
Peace!
This track has been deleted on the producer's request
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17-03-2005 21:26 |
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nice white/pink noise/atmospheric intro,......hmmmm interesting sample...yes like the rewind id use it a bit less though.......TURN THE BASS UP!!!!
one for the mix,not really a headphone tune
sound is good though.
Looking forward to the collab!!!!
3/5 for the tune - -beats are varied bit i would change the bass as well...and how cool is junglist!!
3.5/ for the sound
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17-03-2005 21:43 |
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Yawn
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All the samples & vocals are my voice! 
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17-03-2005 22:16 |
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broadside
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Nice track. Like the bass, deffo like the beats, like the samples (hehe bet you felt stupid having to record that shit yourself 
) And cool sounds!
Basically sort of minimalist and atmospheric, so not exactly my standard dnb cuppa, but mate, it sounds real professional, so respect to ya!
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17-03-2005 22:39 |
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Yawn
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Originally posted by broadside
(hehe bet you felt stupid having to record that shit yourself
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I was a little worried when doing the nasty shouty screaming thing in case the neighbours thought I was getting murdered or something & called the cops! 
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17-03-2005 22:57 |
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janverstichel
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hi,
very dark intro like that
beat drops good
cool rewinds!(good placed too)
nasty track but it's a bit repitetive
cool play with youre beat
nice 
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17-03-2005 23:07 |
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iNSiGHt
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Nice track
I like the fact u use your sounds quite minimally, alot of producers tend to over do it.
You leave good space for other elements to come thru.
Like the drums. Maybe a little more variety for this kind of track.
The high screech samples a seem a little loud and could sit in the track a little better, maybe panning them from left to right to create space.
Just a thought.
But overall I like
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18-03-2005 00:46 |
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Anthem
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nice track ... those effects are great
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18-03-2005 14:39 |
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drumJoyce
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seems like something is missing.. like there's something is about to happen but it doesn't happen... Some weird structure in the beginning..
I like the ravy sounds though 
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18-03-2005 14:54 |
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Yawn
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Many thanks for tha feedback dudes its much appreciated!!
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20-03-2005 23:22 |
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tech1
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Well constructed tune. Like the drops. Phat bass line. Good head fuck. Nice 1 keep em rolling
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21-03-2005 19:37 |
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Halph-Price
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nice sample.
ya, the rewind is not used often, it's like the reverse cymbal, good to wrap something up.
good tune.
maybe add a bit of reverb to give the snares some stero image. or the atmospheric stuff.
that's the only aspect i can really tell you for help.
i like this shit man, it's wicked.
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22-03-2005 01:48 |
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Surya
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Very cool voca!!!
Drums are good too.
Atmo in the intro is a bit noisy though, maybe BP it?
Drop: ok bassline, although a pumping one could be cooler imo. A bit too loud too.
Hoover like pad is ok, but drowns a bit in the mix.
Structure is quite good too, enough variation.
Wickid sound before the second drop.
Quite nice, but I think you could do some more intresting things with the bassline.
2.75/5 for the track
2.25/5 for the sound
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"In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
- Pieter Frenssen 2004
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01-04-2005 08:51 |
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cynik
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this is a good song, it has depth defo! cool samples (vocals) , it feels like the terror from it is grinding the room down from the ceiling,,
good sound picture, full 3d
it feels the tune could use more serious approach tho..at 1:19 it could have 1 more melody added perhaps, dunno
very cool track, like the slow part & the reverse drums n cymbal AND the sound in the 4th minute!!
just the tune needs more workout othrwise a good 1
cheers
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04-04-2005 19:56 |
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Yawn
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cheers!! you've really made me happy - you guys rock!!
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