DjSlut 
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Registration Date: 27-08-2003
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Please check out my new track 'Under Stand' and post your comments here!!!
THis track is a bit weird, dont know what else to say, listen to it and see what u think.
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16-03-2005 16:10 |
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kareem
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Registration Date: 10-11-2004
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intro sounds too uptight.Very strange sounds.
Nice beat , just the snare I don't like.
Lots of variation which is nice , lots of action too.
Its just the sounds, they don't seem to fit together.
Crazy ideas. 
kinda like it.
3,5/5
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16-03-2005 22:24 |
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Abnormalbrain
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Registration Date: 24-03-2005
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Very experimental tune! Almost a little hardcoreinspired. A like that you ain't folloing the mainstream d'n'b in arranging view. You certenly have variation. If I shuld give you some negative points on the tune, A d'n'b-tune shuld mostly be dancefloor-orientated, and the song misses that. You gotta have more straight beat, and a groove that makes you wanna dance.
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24-03-2005 22:15 |
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thefunke1
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Registration Date: 09-12-2004
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Interesting intro, like the break ups, right down my alley! A lot of the synth sounds used are a very old rave style sound, which give the tune as a whole that overall feel.
The levels are pretty good, most hits, sounds,and effects are clear and distinct. Don't like the voice sample too much, or the bird chirp noise. The wobbly base sound is neat at about 2:39, although should be brought more to the front of the sounds, given more presence, oh wait.. there it is... nice. Overall nice tune, but a little too chopped up, and looses the groove in a way, but, I have the same problem. Nice work, lots of variations, although my biggest critisism is mabey too much variations.
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26-03-2005 18:25 |
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tech1
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Registration Date: 21-03-2005
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yer its a jump up beet fat in tro well cut up beet deep bass good second drop wat do i no eeeeee 
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29-03-2005 06:17 |
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Halph-Price
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Registration Date: 22-12-2004
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oh i thought i reviewed this. well i thought you should have repeated the drill sounds in the start, there suppose to sound random, not organized. at the very least, change them up so they don't souned loop. check squarepusher for Drill and Bass examples.
cool song. it's got the samples, and the melody is cool.
generaly i liked the song, it's one of thoes feel good mvoies of the summer feel?
not really. but it's frantic.
love the second drop bassline, it's so liquid!!!!!
i love it, howd ya do it, got a cool vocal quality to it almost, what filter did you use on it?
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29-03-2005 06:42 |
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Surya
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Registration Date: 04-11-2002
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Quite nice drums overall
Leadsounds sound a bit muddy and stuff and could use more bass (the amount of sub is sufficient).
Weird combinations of sounds. Some hard electronic sounding, other trancey sounding...
Your transitions could be a bit better sometimes, some parts sound like they belong to another track.
2/5 for the track
2.25/5 for the sound.
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"In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
- Pieter Frenssen 2004
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31-03-2005 14:17 |
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DjSlut
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Registration Date: 27-08-2003
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Thanks the feedback guys! 
P.S.
Halph Price -
I made the bass with vanguard, and used the glide effect on it. Cant remember about filters, ill check next time i have a chance, but that wont be for a while! 
(as I am minus a PC for bout a month!) 
Anyway, thanks again! Ill review your guys tunes when I get a chance...
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08-04-2005 16:11 |
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Greyone
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Registration Date: 01-04-2005
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intro is very special 'n nice , good work !
strange sounds do fit in the context and don't seem to be enoying 
drums could use more variation.
but on 2:47 there's too much background noise.
2nd drop: massive , but hats are a bit loud allso the frequency of some sounds should be pulled down.
outro : could be more faded out.
nice song , nice style !!!
-->rating 3.5/5 
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16-04-2005 12:27 |
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teknyne
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Registration Date: 12-05-2005
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love the drums. reckon the bass could be louder tho and a few more layers could poss be added to the synths pads etc just sounds a little bare in places. this tune pisses on the res of the stuff ive checked on here tho, lovin the squarepusher influence. big up!!!!!!
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