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wreakon 
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16-03-2005 08:11 |
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Anthem
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Registration Date: 18-02-2005
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oh yeah ! heavy bass in this onne !!
love the intro ,,, makes me wonder what will come next. than that verry heavy bass !! awsome ... the bassline disapoints me though ...a little more variation will do it ... vocals are ok ...
3:40 you should have added some drums to make that drop more intresting ...
but it's a very nice tune !!!
4/5
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16-03-2005 15:08 |
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broadside
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Listening . . . cool intro, like the windchime sounds well atmospheric. The melody sounds just a little of though somehow mabe. Good vocals. "The man began to relax and to giggle" doesn't quite fit the mood though does it.
AS to the music I love the bass, the groove, producing sounds wicked, just think this track is generally heavy. Nothing too dramatic, just a dark heavy roller, nice and moody, nice and atmospheric.
Suggestions: The vocals though man, get some new ones I beg you! What is this nonsense about people climbing trees to feed the birds? Its funny, but you need something dark and sinister from a film for this track. Plus I really liked the sounds at the intro, I reckon you should use them more, like have a break half way where they come back in loud - say over what you are doing at 3:00. Also maybe the bass at 1:19 really liked that, try interspersing the main bass line with that a bit more imo.
Anyway excellent song. Keeping it on my hardrive for definate. 4/5
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DjSlut
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well atmospheric intro, nice. that panning sound should be a bit quiter. Nice drums in the intro. They get even better at the drop, with that phat bass. But u definetly need to vary the bass line a bit more. The chimes sound good at the second drop, but u should add something else to it as well.
Personaly i like the vocals, they work well with break downs. Definetly a good tune! 
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16-03-2005 15:55 |
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wreakon
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cheers for the reviews so far 
prob my best response yet
i think your right about the vocals broadside, they dont really fit the mood 
prob could add a little more variation to the bass line... but i want to keep it rolling 
keep em coming though
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16-03-2005 22:25 |
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Surya
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Yeah, like that vocal, funny movie you took it from
Sounds very dry though!
Bassline is nice, but the bass is overpowering
Drums are good too
OK, it's clownstep, and clownstep is repetetive, but this is a bit too repetetive. You have your drums, bassline and some atmospheric sounds. That's not enough. Try adding more stuff!
2.25/5 for the track
2.25/5 for the sound
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31-03-2005 14:12 |
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spudleyq
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Registration Date: 23-09-2004
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Creepy bell synth in the beginning.....I like it. Sounds like a glockenspiel from hell!! Oooooh, I like that vocal, but Surya's right....sounds a bit too dry. Maybe some reverb or delay would loosen that up a bit. Rather funky, I'm kinda liking those drums you use....not as hard as I'd like them, but good.
What movie did you get those samples from? Seems like I'm missing out on a good movie! This is some creepy steppy shit man. Doesn't feel exactly like clownstep, but that LFO on that bass is definately fucking with my head man. Really good atmosphere to this song, right up my alley. This would fit in nicely with my latest track I'm working on. I'm definately liking the flow of this song, a bit repetitive....but a good flow none the less. With a bit of variation, and a pinch of magic synth juice, this track could be a heavy roller man.
2.5/5 sound
3.5/5 idea
2/5 for repetitiveness
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31-03-2005 16:31 |
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wreakon
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the sample is off some short vid i got off someone on soulseek.. its called "LSD Being Tested on British Troops" if you want to search for it
its damn funny
yeah i didnt think it was clownstep...
ill definitely add some more variation in the next version... if i ever get around to it, i hate working on tunes i have kinda finished
cheers guys
...allways keen for more more reviews though
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31-03-2005 17:01 |
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