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saphir 
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yoows.
it has been a while since i have posted here some bits.
bad is a finished tune by now, pm if you wanna play it out
this version is quite different from the finished one, but the elements remained the same.
greed is one of my thoughest tracks to finish, i just keep struggeling with the progression of the phased reece near the bridge.
judge or prejudge like or dislike
it's up to you
saphir-bad (clip)
saphir-greed (clip)
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saphir
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Surya
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They're in my playlist, but I'm way behind on reviewing, so patience friend 
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30-03-2005 14:31 |
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Abnormalbrain
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Bad - sounds like you know what you are doing in terms of the arrangement sounds. I didn't like the tune very much, but it depend on my musical taste. I think you could add some treble and in to the mix, and make a cleaner more brilliant mix.
Greed - I personally like this tune more than the other. Especially the vocals and piano. This tune sounds better mixed and better made. It sounds like you have put more time in to this one.
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30-03-2005 19:15 |
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Surya
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Ah, there we are 
Bad:
Nice choir in the intro, good drums.
Cool hoover coming in, but it's out of key with the choir. Good that the choir fades out fast.
Drop: good amen, very nice bassline!
Second hoover sequence is nice n dark
Cool tune!
3.25/5
Greed:
Intro: sounds very mellow, nicely done.
Ah, not too fond of that vocal. Personal taste.
Drop: nice bassline and good drums with a good drive. Vocal is a bit too loud though. The heavely reverbed beats are a bit too loud I think.
Filtered bassline is very cool to, good work!
Vocal is a bit too much all over imo, draws away the attention for the beats and bassline, gets a bit annoying imo.
3/5, would maybe be 3.5 if the vocal wasn't so all over
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31-03-2005 09:32 |
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saphir
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