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Rude 
I'm gonna get you
Registration Date: 06-01-2005
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Please check out my new track 'Predator' and post your comments here!!!
After the alien stuff, I decided to start a predator-project :))
Greetz, Rude
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15-03-2005 14:09 |
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drumJoyce
Tourist
Registration Date: 15-03-2005
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HOOOOOOLY SHIT !!!
I like this 
nice shit
4,5/5 
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15-03-2005 14:27 |
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Lizziekah
Sexy Tourist
Registration Date: 07-03-2005
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hoooooooyea
love it
I'm not gonna rate this time cuz you know I would give you a 5/5 again 
Love ya
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15-03-2005 15:11 |
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spudleyq
Master Producer
Registration Date: 23-09-2004
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Sounds like you got the drums down....unless that's just a loop you downloaded....I really hope it isn't. Please tell me you made that drum pattern yourself. Anyways, you got the drums down.....but where's the bass? Definately a nice little chill track....but if I heard this in a club this would be one of those songs I sit at the bar to, maybe bobbing my head every now and then. I know that's not what you're going for....you want to make a track that would make me vomit on the speakers and headbutt the guy next to me. You want to make the kind of track that will make me want to bite the DJ and try to punch my way through the floor. You need the stompers man! You need to make the bass rumble so deep that my chest cavity explodes. You need to make drum patterns so chaotic and harsh that aspirations of world domination reel through my mind as I try to fit my head in the speaker port on an 18" subwoofer.
You're making phenomenal progress though! Going from FUBAR to this is quite the step up! Keep learning, keep experimenting....and keep on slamming Rude dude.
2/5 for sound
2.5/5 for song
4.9/5 for idea
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15-03-2005 15:30 |
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Rude
I'm gonna get you
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Originally posted by spudleyq
You need to make the bass rumble so deep that my chest cavity explodes. |
Lol my headphones too
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15-03-2005 15:36 |
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Halph-Price
Zombie Algorithm
Registration Date: 22-12-2004
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wow, all the nubes came to rate your song, lol. 3 in a row.
anyways, the lead synth, is so off. after that the song picks up. the bass synth is good through out, just reptative, but it's a nice groove, the drums do a nice work of variation.
this is a really good song.
the lead synth, is nicer in the middle, more acid.
i tihnk the melody in the start, with the lead synth should be a bit more simple. or just don't have them off tune so badly.
don't fade the drums out at the end. just leave there volume. and end them abruptly, if you don't want a wrap up on them. dnb songs, don't fade, well, the durms don't frankly any other instrument can fade out, but the drum track.
that's my opnion. it's a cool song, kreepy.
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15-03-2005 16:17 |
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Surora23
Agressive Melodic Disorder
Registration Date: 05-07-2004
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jungle drums are cool i guess.i dont particularly like them...and that bass gets on my nerves...i basically say the same as spud...great idea...and i dont liek a lot of the sounds you used...but you still gotta work on that sound...
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Rinse it OUT!!!! 
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15-03-2005 16:37 |
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Darkside
Old-School Rolla
Registration Date: 02-01-2005
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haha this track is pretty sweet, great idea man...the bass could be diff. maybe, but the melody and drums are on point. the acidy melody in the middle is nice. i'll give this a 4, not bad, not bad at all. u got potential, jus as soon as you find the sound that works for ya.
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16-03-2005 04:07 |
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Anthem
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Registration Date: 18-02-2005
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nicely build ... But euhm ... like said before ... it's not one of those tunes that make someone go crazy 
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16-03-2005 14:55 |
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Rude
I'm gonna get you
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nicely build ... But euhm ... like said before ... it's not one of those tunes that make someone go crazy
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so what
I just liked the idea of starting this predator-shit, hope you guys work on this shit too
sure would be cool
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16-03-2005 15:31 |
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Surya
The Robot
Registration Date: 04-11-2002
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Hmmm, your sounds sound like they come from a 70s synth or something, sounds very dated.
Drums are quite nice but could use a boost and more mid.
Very nice strings though
Dunno, didn't like this very much.
1.5/5 for the track
2/5 for the sound
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"In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
- Pieter Frenssen 2004
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31-03-2005 09:24 |
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S.O.T.A.
SHADOW STAR
Registration Date: 13-05-2005
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whats happening? my name is S.O.T.A. I listened to your track. at first your synths sound a little old. I'm not personally a fan of the offbeat breaks but you executed it well. I liked your line at the begining of the drop. Why is it so short? It seems like you need to still finish it a little more. Your bass sounds were good. It has a dark feel which is nice cause dark is my favorite. well take it easy -
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