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Muad'Dib 
Andrejnalin
Registration Date: 02-12-2003
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Please check out my new track 'Can You Feel the Desire' and post your comments here!!!
I make all my tunes in FL Studio (4.01) so this one is also made in here. I used many synths for the sounds (3xosc for the high-freqed ringbell sound and the organo sound) and used Fruity's Pluck channel to emulate the guitar.
I made it in about one week, 5 days on the core producing, and 2 days on mastering and finishing. I gave it to my father to listen it, and HE told me that there is a lack of bass sound, and that this bass sound might define where the middle (main) part of the tune is. So I included that subbass sound, and I fucked the whole tune :-)) But I will fix that, cause I plan to offer this tune to record companies. If anyone has a contact to some record company, please PM me with it, ok? :-)
I provided much effort on EQing and compression, and I can gladly say that there is no clipping, there is no lack of power because of the compressor, and that everything can be hear good enough! :-)
My main story about this tune and its theme ("I'm burning for you" and "Can you feel the desire") was dragging on my mind for a long time, since I got the voice samples of the sexy young lady, and that was about a half-a-year ago. I finaly made the project I was craving for. ;-))
Anyway, enjoy, and expect the more finished version soon! :-)
-Muad'Dib
-2005
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13-03-2005 13:48 |
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marine289
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Registration Date: 05-10-2004
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Interesting intro, nice sort of acoustic guitar sound (dont know how to say it otherwise). Great vocals! fit the track great. Intro is maybe a bit too long though, but I dont mind. Drop sounds a bit empty, because there's no bass. But the drums are good, nice samples. I especially like the drums at around 3:00. The sub is nice too, but may be you have to play the basic-key/note more often. I mean the lowest note. I think that gives the track some more stability. Nice effects here and there.
Overall a nice chill relaxed feeling to the track. Great atmosphere, but not the regular kind of lounge, and I like that. It's a good track, and I can hear you put lots of time on the mastering, which is really good 
. (something I most of the times have difficulties with). Outro is good too, nice ending.
You said: "Made in FL studio, interesting experiment." Does that mean you normally dont work with FL Studio, or that you normally dont make these kinds of tracks? 
Well anyway, nice track, good job, I like it!
May be just 'fix' the sub. (the lower notes a little more in it).
3.721672565 (for now 
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13-03-2005 16:07 |
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Rude
I'm gonna get you
Registration Date: 06-01-2005
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'till 2;25 I liked it
but when the bass came in..
anyway, fantastic song..
some nice sounds in it
putting this on cd right away 
Greetz, Rude
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13-03-2005 18:45 |
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Darkside
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Registration Date: 02-01-2005
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hmm...sounds like a good melody...very nice vocals, i like...long intro...but it doesn't get boring, not at all...nice drop and nicer beat, very interesting. this track has a pretty nice feel to it man...altho some of the synths you use don't really sound like dnb, although they do sound nice. i'd say 3.5 overall, not the best i've heard from this site, but doesn't rank with the worst at all. nice tune, peace.
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14-03-2005 03:30 |
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camo
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Registration Date: 22-12-2004
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Hi!
intro: is good! nice guitars and works well with the word desire
1.08: sounds make me happy 
drop: good, but drumloop should be loader and punchier, hmmmm.........just louder. ok, i think, sometimes it gets louda, its cool!
very smoov sounds. there should be some break parts in the track
3,12: ok,there it is
but the bassline should be stronger, vocals r great
very nice inna here
3,9/5
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14-03-2005 11:19 |
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Anthem
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Registration Date: 18-02-2005
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nice one ! me like ... drums a bit harder .. some more bass and it could be perfect 
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14-03-2005 12:59 |
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muphasta
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Registration Date: 29-06-2004
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hehe no offence bro but my first feel was some cheezy goddamm f******hell trance. My second impresion was even worse. no serious man. just the way I feel about it. gonna review it tough
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first I think the guitar or pluck U use is too loud and too accentuated. aint gonna argue about the melody but for me it just isnt that. voice is nice balanced like this style needs. the jungle breaks are too sharp cut them high.then i think it needs a contrasting piece somewhere inbetween something like Bright_Dark_Brightest.
dont really know for the rest. needs serious work IMHO!!!!
nope dont dig it sorry mate
dont be mad!!!
2/5
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14-03-2005 20:56 |
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production on the intro isnt bad.....but id make the patterns a bit more complex....add a little synced delay maybe??? yeah its a little cheesy but i like the idea.....maybe needs to sound a bit warmer....vocal is cool though...BUT THE DRUMS NEED TO BE MUCH LOUDER!!!!! i would have gone on a jon b style trip with this one.....you know a big saw bassline running under the trancey bit rather than the siney b line youve got.
1/5 for the mix
1/5 for the b line....not my thing
3.5/5 for the tune/idea......but you need to sort out the drums...the mix needs work!!!!
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14-03-2005 21:30 |
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Surya
The Robot
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Nice trancey sounds and melodies in the intro. Works great with the voice... Sounds more like a housetune though. And way too happy for my taste...
Amen coming in: lacks punch and needs a boost.
Goes on a little too long without major changes.
Ah, bassline coming in. Your father is right: needs a boost.
Hmmm, nice sounds and melodies, but not very Drum n Bassy imo, more happy house like. The bassline could use some work too, not it sounds too dry, being just a sine wave.
Soundquality is nice, but the beats need a boost and more punch, and the low-end should be represented better.
2.5/5 as a tune
1.5/5 as a DnB tune
2.25/5 for the sound
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- Pieter Frenssen 2004
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