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Rude
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Please check out my new track 'F.U.B.A.R. (aggressive version)' and post your comments here!!!
For the people who don't know the meaning of the word F.U.B.A.R., it means Fucked Up Beyond All Recognition. It was used in times of war when someone was crippled that much, you couldn't have any idea who that person was. Anyway, I've changed the drumloops into amens, and I was impressed by my own breaks! Hope you like it
edit by thechronic:
Rude uploaded a new version of this track. Check it out here
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11-03-2005 20:52 |
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marine289
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Ok, Amen is much better, but you need to chop it up some more, this is too standard. And also maybe you could add some other samples (snare, bd) on top of the amen, or layer them.
But please dont post 15 versions of the same song, that works confusing...
You have only changed the drums so far, but you dont have to post the song here everytime you have made some changes or some new. Just when you feel like the song is ready, post it. And then adjust it (if possible) to what people say on this forum. Well at least that's the way I work...
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12-03-2005 09:24 |
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Rude
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Originally posted by marine289
Ok, Amen is much better, but you need to chop it up some more, this is too standard. And also maybe you could add some other samples (snare, bd) on top of the amen, or layer them.
But please dont post 15 versions of the same song, that works confusing...
You have only changed the drums so far, but you dont have to post the song here everytime you have made some changes or some new. Just when you feel like the song is ready, post it. And then adjust it (if possible) to what people say on this forum. Well at least that's the way I work... |
15 versions, dude, there are only 2 versions posted of this song, I'll remaster it and post it again when I think it's done. Greetz, Rude
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12-03-2005 11:21 |
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tracassasin
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hey it sounds great i just think u need to add a lot more! like double up on the beat or somethin be creative
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12-03-2005 16:12 |
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HyperFlexed
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that choir sounds very odd. The low notes sound weak. Perhaps it could use a little compression, and a bit more reverb.
Alot of those samples sound like default FL samples. Woah, when it breaks into the jungle type thing it sounds pretty sick. I'm not digging the sound of the choinky-type synth. Nice use of reversed drums as well.
Your structure is excellent, but I think this soung could use more polish now. oh yes, and as said above... CHOP THAT LOOP MORE!
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If a priest pauses to finish a prayer, is it an Amen Break?
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12-03-2005 18:06 |
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Lizziekah

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looking forward to hear the remastered version
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12-03-2005 18:55 |
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camo
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Hi dude!
intro: choir is ok, synths are not so my thing.....
after break: i think the melody is too silent for the amens.
after 2nd break: same thing, make more variations!
but alover its pretty cool!
but i think its not very agressive.
amens are cool.
sub bass would be cool, makes it more burnin'.
i like the melody!
2,8/5
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12-03-2005 20:53 |
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thefunke1
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Nice track, will go listen the previous version after. The synth sound in the back seems to go off tempo around 1:52 a little, Like the change up at 2:20, overall nice tune!
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12-03-2005 20:58 |
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Rude
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Originally posted by thefunke1
Nice track, will go listen the previous version after. The synth sound in the back seems to go off tempo around 1:52 a little, Like the change up at 2:20, overall nice tune! |
yup, did somethin' about that in the next version
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12-03-2005 21:01 |
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