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Anthem 
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Registration Date: 18-02-2005
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Please check out my new track 'Atmosphere' and post your comments here!!!
I wanted to make a soft dnb track .. it turned out a little darker than I expected ... this is my second track and i hop it's a lot better than the previous one ...
hope you 'll like it ..
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10-03-2005 21:55 |
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broadside
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Its preeettty cool up to 0:34 seconds, and then, maybe its just me, but that bass line just sounds horrid - in the pejorative sense (you gotta say that these days or people probably think you're complementing them). There it is again at 1:02. Cut that shit right out. The bass at 1:30 is great though (maybe a bit loud) and actually fits with the rest of the shit. If you were aiming for liquid you've missed by about a thousand million miles. The build is a good try at being different, but it misfires really and then the drop is a bit of a dissapointment. The bit 2:32 is the best bit of the track for me, that bassline is actually quite good, though a bt monotonous. Beats aren't the best either.
Sorry but in general, the track just drags on a bit, theres absolutely no adrenaline, but as a second tune (I didn't hear your first) this shows good signs I think, and is pretty alright. Definately better than I was at that stage anyway.
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11-03-2005 01:52 |
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Dubrain Hertz
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11-03-2005 16:21 |
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Anthem
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haha lol .. that crap at 0.34 and 1.02 wasn't supposed to be in there ... sorry bout that 
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the drop is indeed a bit of a dissapointment ... maybe it will get a lot better if I put the bassline in there first, not that snare thingy ... dunno ...
more drums ... maybe ... don't guiet agree with that though 
next time I shall put some adrenaline in 
any other comments ???
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11-03-2005 19:11 |
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Halph-Price
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the problem is the bassline is in a stero image, meaning it stands forward. where as everything else, is dead center and tight, no stero image
now, atmosphere usually is spread out the most, because it's got lots of reverb which usually is what helps give sound a good spread.
that's the problem, and the 0.34 sticks out, badly cuz of that.
regardless, it shows more that you need to make your atmosphere, SPREAD out. and fill in everything.
you're reece line is cool.
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15-03-2005 07:33 |
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Anthem
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Registration Date: 18-02-2005
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working on a new one ... will try to pay some attention to those things ... as a newbie that's going to be difficult :p
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17-03-2005 12:12 |
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Surya
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Drums lack a lot of power, and they sound like shit. Sounds like you got one of them lowfi rex loops that come with Reason. Ditch it.
The distorted string is ok, I guess.
Bassline sounds cool, but it doesn't have any bass
Ah, second drumloop is a lot better!
Once the second drumloop comes in, the track gets a lot better, but it's still nothing near great.
2/5 for the track
1.75/5 for the sound
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"In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
- Pieter Frenssen 2004
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