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Surora23 
Agressive Melodic Disorder
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Please check out my new track 'Meltdown (PREVIEW 60%) ' and post your comments here!!!
This is something im working on...Please ingore the gap after the breakdown...vocals are going to be inplace of that gap...but for the track...its very driven, pumping sub, and some spacy pads...
all done with FL, Albino, syrtus, and will be mastered with t-racks
Edit by Surya: new version here
This track has been deleted because a new version is available
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08-03-2005 02:08 |
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daze_DND
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yeah kewl track
good beats.... only maybe a bit less 'snap' to the snare. Don't like the 'dribbling' of the kick (leave a bit more space between imo). Good lead sound with nice fx's. Good sub bass 'till breakdown/silent part....... Reese is a bit too raw imo. Needs maybe another layer or so(maybe less stereospread?).....dunno.
Good beat variation with amenlike beat that sits under the main beat...kewl! nicely rolling!
overall a good track.Grime stuff (especially the reese).
Defo work on this!
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08-03-2005 10:02 |
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broadside
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Pretty cool track, just a bit . . . confusing maybe? Perhaps just my speakers not coping - just sounds like the grime stuff (eg whats going on at around the 3 minute mark) is a bit messy (in the pejorative meaning of the word that is) and doesn't seem bear any relation to the pads you use later. The sub line is sweet, and the melodies are pretty cool, although the choice of sounds in the pads feel a bit forced or cheesy or something. Its definately intense, but if it dropped at a rave and can see alot of people just being a little bit lost.
Production seems great to me, and, dont get me wrong, shit loads of potential here, but something a bit unsatisfying about this. Much preferred that Bombshelter tune you dropped, that was sick. 
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08-03-2005 17:54 |
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Surora23
Agressive Melodic Disorder
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haha thanks for the review...yea im doing all sorts of stuff...we'll see how it tunrs out... any more suggestions!?
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08-03-2005 18:09 |
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Yawn
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ahh this sounds nice maybe a longer intro before the drums kick in would be nice
bass at 1.04 doesnt really seem to go i was expecting something a bit lower and more menacing kinda like the sinister stabs at the beginning....
just kicked in... sounds phat!!!! i like it!!!
dont know whether its coz im listening on phones but the kick just doesnt sound quite right a little muddy and that rough bassy sound could be more crisp and clear, i think that would make it sound a lot better.
Subtle change at 2.35 is good
I think the silence during the second break was just that bit too long - i wasnt watching the progress bar & i thought the track had finished!
overall definitely a good start - with a bit of tweaking could be really good track!
3/5 sound
4/5 track
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08-03-2005 22:28 |
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Surora23
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thanks again 
yea that long pause there are going to be vocals...so its jsut a empoty paufe for now
thanks for the review...any more !
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09-03-2005 01:41 |
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Halph-Price
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the kicks a bit too loud, or up front. maybe too much mid. something. doesn't Blend with the track. probably volume.
and fuck dat,t he dribbling sounds good.
the reece is improved.
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09-03-2005 03:35 |
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Stutterstep
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I like the intro, your drum are really nice. good pads and melodey. But the main lead is fucked. there is no presence. just alot of distortion. on a sound system it would sound fucked. everything else is good , but if the main sound is off then the track is off. respect
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10-03-2005 21:19 |
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Surora23
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good call and youre right...its much cleaned uo now...hope you guys liek the finished version...will be up by next week
keep the reviews coming!
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11-03-2005 01:25 |
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iNSiGHt
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Ha well if ur redoing it then these comments may not be appropriate....but I've started so I'll finish
It's not a tune of the style I'm really into so I won't go that, justy constructive over production values.
Firstly the breaks are tight, all elements are clean but the snare seems a little too loud and crunchy/snappy.
Don't know if you're limiting it heavily?
Also I'd say work on making the drums as part of your track. They sit right out in front, all the elements don't seem like they are in the same environment. helps with reverbs etc...
Production is generally good man, can hear everything that's round one to you.
But it was hard for me as I wasn't into the main melody, not enough happenned for me to look/hear beyond the loop.
But like I said I'm into different styles so please don't take my comments too hard.
Keep it up man. def good potential
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11-03-2005 01:57 |
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Surora23
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no hard words taken...only appreciation...thanks for the review..im gald you took teh listen
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11-03-2005 02:00 |
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Surya
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New version here
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"In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
- Pieter Frenssen 2004
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24-03-2005 11:06 |
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k.c.walsh
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Gerat tune. Some old school bass linez would give this tune a nice feel, but I must say this tune is soundin great with or without. Ear Canday, indeed. ***********EQUIPPED************
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23-05-2005 09:53 |
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