 dj2lip - only way to fly |
dj2lip 
Producer
Registration Date: 31-12-2004
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Please check out my new track 'only way to fly' and post your comments here!!!
my first track ever.
produced with Reason. the title relates to a sample from the matrix, which was removed before uploading the track. many thanks in advance for your feedback!
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07-03-2005 03:30 |
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camo
Wicked Producer
Registration Date: 22-12-2004
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nice funky intro stuff. cool bass. cool breaks.they are bit too slim, should be harder........ok....very harder.........2,20: bassline gets a bit boring, but these guitars are dope 
there should be more variation and more drive! keep it rollin!
overall i like it, theres nothing really bad
keep it up.
greetz, camo
3/5
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keepin it rollin`
www.myspace.com/camopdj
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08-03-2005 13:36 |
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Halph-Price
Zombie Algorithm
Registration Date: 22-12-2004
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first track ever almost makes it a turn off.... eee. but oh well. never use presets.
anyways let's listen shall we. hey this isn't bad....
the choppy break you repete in alternative to the main break, try chaning that around when you play it again to add some variation there.
after the bass solo, you cann use the choppy break at 1.46 like the first time you introduced it there, it does fit fine. but wheny uo keep using it it get's old fast.
this long break at 2.30 could use some variations in drums, or something...
nice groove at 3.00...
not bad song, just boring. the choppy break is the only hook in it.
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10-03-2005 05:09 |
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dj2lip
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Registration Date: 31-12-2004
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thank yoiu guys for your reviews!
next time I will try to use less presets and work on some serious drum patterns with more variation in it.
Cheers
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11-03-2005 00:09 |
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iNSiGHt
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Registration Date: 10-08-2004
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obviously as your first tune i won't get into production as it does sound like a reason track.
but you have a good grrove and understand tunes and melodies.
as a first tune it's definately worth sticking at it.
I'd say the only issues are really in production but that will come with time.
Def keep going
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"since when has this music ever been about making fuckin money!"
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11-03-2005 03:15 |
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Surya
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Nice warm bassline, good drumwork. But the drums could use a slight work.
Like the conga rolls, but they are a bit too loud.
Ew, not too fond of that mellow organ you used, sounds too "funky house"-ish...
Nice elements and ideas, but where's the main hook? I think you forgot to put that in
2/5 for what's there
2.25/5 for the sound
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"In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
- Pieter Frenssen 2004
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24-03-2005 10:53 |
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Halph-Price
Zombie Algorithm
Registration Date: 22-12-2004
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the only time you mention using hooks in songs is when i mention it.....
and i can honestly say that, you only say hook2 other times as in "hook me up"
oh well.
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25-03-2005 09:46 |
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Surya
The Robot
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Originally posted by Halph-Price
the only time you mention using hooks in songs is when i mention it.....
and i can honestly say that, you only say hook2 other times as in "hook me up"
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Lol, I never read otherones reviews when reviewing a track, not to get manipulated by their views, so that must be coincidence, and further proof that the hook is missing 
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"In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
- Pieter Frenssen 2004
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25-03-2005 10:02 |
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