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Jeller 
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i like it, it is very melodic, and it is still not too soft.
3.5/5
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07-03-2005 18:51 |
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kareem
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Registration Date: 10-11-2004
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nice little effects in the intro.
Good tension and like the snare (both of them).
Nice beats.CHill drop at 2min20, like it.
Like the waterrdops.Everything sounds good, just the bass needs some power.
3,5/5
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07-03-2005 19:16 |
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marine289
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Registration Date: 05-10-2004
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Intro is ok, made me wonder what would come next.
Beat drops: Snare roll is good, but again: I dont really like your snare 
It's so weird, I never like your snares. But that's just personal. BD could use a little distortion, sounds a little dry. Your ghost also sounds a little dry... I dont know about the snare, did you use any effects on that at all?
'Flute' sample is good, but may be combine that sample with another (flute) sample, and you might get a better sound, one that sounds more 'there'.
Nice melodies, but could also use variation once in a while. May be just change a little bit about the pattern you have, and play that once after you used the original pattern 3 times or so... Just a suggestion 
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After the break some new basslines, they add some more variation to the track.
Bassline needs more variation. I think the sound itself is good. It just might need a little more roughness though, if you know what I mean 
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Overall nice track, very interesting and I think it's your best so far. Well produced. Can you send me the .flp some day, so that I can add some good snare samples?
3.25/5
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07-03-2005 19:40 |
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Surora23
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Registration Date: 05-07-2004
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dude relaly good melody...some interesting stuff...drums are nice...maybe mke the hi's just a itny bit more crispy...some relaly cool stuff in here dude...the drop needs more of a hi end...i think those weird square sounding 303 synths could be a differnt sample...didnt liek the second drop...it sounded really good...jsut wasnt feeling it taste wise 
musically this track is very good, and has a lot of great ideas behind but, but your choice of sounds wasnt very good, i think if you cahnged up a lot of the synths you used this track would be much much better! good stuff
3/5 track
3/5 sounds
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08-03-2005 02:34 |
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daze_DND
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Registration Date: 01-11-2004
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nice intro
beat is a bit to 'dry' to my taste....very computerstyle imo. i like them sounding more natural.
Good lead melodys with lot's of variation and fx's.....yeah that stuff is really great...me likes.
bass needs more bottom to imo( also,imo, you start with yr bassline. from a dj's perspective= not a good idea imo. maybe filter that sound untill track actually drops at 1:23).
Not a big fan off the trancy-vibe that's going on(personall taste) but these melodys are very varied and well constructed...... in fact, one off the best i've heard on this site so far.....
good beat edits too but a bit a shame about the tooo techy beat imo (main kick snare....fill-ins are nice imo)...make the main beat more in yr face and this could be a very good track!
just my thoughts aight, peace.
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08-03-2005 09:51 |
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Dub-LJ
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Registration Date: 20-02-2005
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I like it very very much!!! The atmosphere is awesome and the never boring melodies are great - a really great piece of music! The only thing to comply is the snare - I had used a deeper one. But again: A very nice piece of work! 4/5
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08-03-2005 16:32 |
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janverstichel
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Registration Date: 10-11-2004
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thx for the comments
cheers 
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09-03-2005 14:15 |
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kaliyuga
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nice atmosphene kick ti hi pitch for me , some noise don't blend well and sound to ungrimey, kick in needs some uglyness to it to, quite and tech sounding tune could do with an evil edge
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10-03-2005 01:07 |
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Surya
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Registration Date: 04-11-2002
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Istro is nice
Drums coming in: nice n punchy, but lacking some ceality. Ah, new layer coming in, which does improve them! A little more crispness would be nice
Nice melodies.
Acually the crispness thing goes for most of your sounds. They are nice but lack a certain amount of clearity, making the track sound muffled.
I can clearly hear you've worked long on thisones. Sounds and melodies all work great together and the structure has more than enough variations. Very nice.
3.5/5 for the track
2/5 for the sound
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23-03-2005 18:32 |
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Halph-Price
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Registration Date: 22-12-2004
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you should just bring the high shelf up a bit. helps it a lot.
guess it would help if your song went over 15khz .. what up with that?
try 192 KBPS
i dunno....
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23-03-2005 19:04 |
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Surya
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Originally posted by Halph-Price
guess it would help if your song went over 15khz .. what up with that? |
128kbps
But I've noticed that even without going over 15khz, you can still have a very crisp sounding mix (I think my latest track sounds a lot crisper, and it is limited to 15khz too in the MP3 version
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- Pieter Frenssen 2004
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23-03-2005 19:09 |
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spudleyq
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Registration Date: 23-09-2004
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Anything above 15KHz is just going to be really high frequencies that don't add much of anything but a hiss to your track, I always cut it off at 20-22KHz...but I don't see how 15KHz would make much of a difference.
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23-03-2005 19:55 |
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Sound Fusion
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Registration Date: 23-03-2005
Posts: 30
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The beat is heavey nd loud which i like alot. nice synth 2. jus lacks a bit but cant put my finger on wot tho. cool ne ways.
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24-03-2005 00:15 |
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