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Darkside 
Old-School Rolla
Registration Date: 02-01-2005
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Please check out my new track 'Rydah In Black' and post your comments here!!!
i wanted this one to be a dancefloor track, tell me what you think, can it make it? the vox are from one of my friends' little rap group, and they are used with permission. this is practically the remix of their song, in fact-i made the melody of my song so it would fit around theirs. hope you like this one.
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06-03-2005 02:08 |
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Rude
I'm gonna get you
Registration Date: 06-01-2005
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erm.. the intro isn't very good, isn't it?
pitch down the synth coming in @ 0:42 and add some subbasses to it,..
and who's rappin' there??? (@ 2:56)
--> isn't it a sample from another song?
This track still needs alot of work.
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06-03-2005 16:35 |
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Rude
I'm gonna get you
Registration Date: 06-01-2005
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Originally posted by Rude
erm.. the intro isn't very good, isn't it?
pitch down the synth coming in @ 0:42 and add some subbasses to it,..
and who's rappin' there??? (@ 2:56)
--> isn't it a sample from another song?
This track still needs alot of work. |
whoops, haven't read the rappin' thing there..
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06-03-2005 16:36 |
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kaliyuga
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nice beat its open and light vox not so sure on , lead needs mixing better. good energy in tune, beats needs more layering, needs more bass to, break to early vox to hip hop gansta this aint brooklyn we junglist. keep on improving and u can go on and make some proper bas tunes. wicked
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10-03-2005 01:12 |
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Dubrain Hertz
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Registration Date: 23-01-2005
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10-03-2005 02:27 |
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Surora23
Agressive Melodic Disorder
Registration Date: 05-07-2004
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those intro drums are weird..the sub intro was a little ehh...make darker intro...and for taht reece/lead drop it one or 2 octaves to get a more evil sound...vox are cool in my opinon...those hi synth strings are completely disharmonic, and do not work with the melody at all...there is no bass under the lead either and it gets a little annoying imo...you reallly need to get rid of that hi synth...the vocals sound cool in my opinon, the track jsut needs to be done better...
Its a decent start..youve only been making dnb for a short while...so here are my points...
Intro-make it much mroe interesting and lose those frist drums they dont fit the rest of the track
lead-add more variation and etc, also get some bass in there...also switch up the drums a bit make them more lively...good first efforts...
2/5 track
2/5 sounds
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Rinse it OUT!!!! 
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10-03-2005 02:58 |
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beatRon
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Registration Date: 10-03-2005
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i dont like this kinda dnb. try alittle more aggressive. the baselines need more power. 
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10-03-2005 18:07 |
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Surya
The Robot
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Bit weird to start a track with plain sub, no?
Drums kicking in: quite nice. Try boosting those ghosthits a bit.
Vocal sounds quite cool
Drop: leadsound is nice, melody is catchy, which is good. But the gap between the lead and the sub is too big, try getting it filled up by adding some bass to the leadsound.
Nice how you build up the amount of vocals, nicely done.
Quite a nice track, just work on the frequencyrange of the leadsound. Make it phatter and warmer!
3/5 for the track
2/5 for the sound
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"In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
- Pieter Frenssen 2004
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23-03-2005 11:54 |
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Sound Fusion
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Registration Date: 23-03-2005
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erratic hi-hats goin on and the synth is phat. Lean little slow down of the beat n bass in the middle cant find anything majorly wrong wiv this tune keep it up bruva!
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24-03-2005 00:01 |
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