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Rude 
I'm gonna get you
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Please check out my new track '\\\ RAGE ///' and post your comments here!!!
Remake of a song that I've heard somewhere, couldn't find it so I tried to rebuild it.
Hope you'll like it
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05-03-2005 12:32 |
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Rude
I'm gonna get you
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I lost the project again !!! 
F$@#ING klotepc
It just won't save 
I need a new comp..
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05-03-2005 13:03 |
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Anthem
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05-03-2005 13:09 |
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Darkside
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hmm...intro is good..whoa drums way too quiet there, turn those up, they're decent. that bouncy piano(?) is very good, creepy synth fx there. huh..i really like the portasynths you panned to the left and right startin about 1:39. then the one comes in the middle that sounds a lil more like bass. this tune needs to be longer, it needs some beat drops to bring the melody out, and most of all, since it hardly sounds like drumnbass without a hard beat, turn that break up! this track really seems to need a lot to become accomplished, altho it has a good melody. it does have a bit of a "professional" sound to it. pretty cool, i'll say 3/5, but itll be higher once you get that beat up, def.the biggest flaw in this track. peace.
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06-03-2005 04:08 |
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Surora23
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eveything was going cool untill that moog came in...UGH GE RID PF THAT MOOG...use some sub instead...drums could use a boost...middle drop or break down is really really cool...it almost has an acidy house feel to it...needs work...BUT A LOT BETTER than yoru other tracks...good prgoress dude...great...
3/5track
3/5sound
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Rinse it OUT!!!! 
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07-03-2005 03:11 |
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Lizziekah
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OMG! this is good, I mean really, really good!!!
Love ya
4/5
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07-03-2005 09:37 |
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Rude
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08-03-2005 19:06 |
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marine289
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Intro is cool, nice breaks. Did you make any of them yourself? (I mean use samples and built your own beat). Nice atmosphere. Dont really like the bass-sound. Too 'digital', may be use a low pass filter. It just feels like it doesnt fit the track.
Some nice sounds and effects, but sometimes they get played a little too much. Break around 1:22 is really nice, may be change the tempo of the drums to half speed, like a hiphop break. I really love that pad, where is it from?? Definitely your best song so far. I can see you put a lot of time in it. Too bad its a remake of a song you heard, because I dont know how much you put in that was thought of by yourself 
But that's ok, since you have just started (if I remember correctly).
Im gonna give it a 3/5 because of the good atmosphere, but I think your skills would improve if you would think up songs by yourself.
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I was hoping for at least one person who would give this 5/5 .. 
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That's only possible if the song would be perfect.
The mastering, the lenght, the samples/sounds you used, lay out, the originality and more stuff that I cant think of right now, would have to be perfect.
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09-03-2005 13:05 |
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Rude
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10-03-2005 16:41 |
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marine289
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Is that magix?? It has like 8 patters lol. You should start in fruity or something, works much much better if you'd ask me. But are all your drums sampled loops, or are ther some homemade beats 
made with one hit samples?
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10-03-2005 20:35 |
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Hidden identity
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Originally posted by Lizziekah
OMG! this is good, I mean really, really good!!!
Love ya
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every one listen up!
when girlz that dont make music give you a 4 or 5 that means lots more then the crap that the fellow artists say.
normal listeners listent o the songs harmony and melody and stuff in a braod way, but fellow artists listen close to lots of small details,
these small details dont matter compared to what the normal audience thinks 
if you wanna make a good selling album,
just try to get lots of 5/5 or 4/5 ratings from average listeners.
i just wanter to say...
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I'm trying to unfuck my sig.
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10-03-2005 20:46 |
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Hidden identity
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Originally posted by Rude
yeah well I've put alot of time in this one, and now the project is lost, ... I was hoping for at least one person who would give this 5/5 ..
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its not lost!
you have the wave file,
5 montsh from now you may get a great beat slicer,
decode the mp3 into a wave, load it in,
and remix this song into a better or new version..
if you want.
but yah, keep back ups of every single project file!
i do. (i feal ur pain, but due to my mad saving i never loose programs that im coding or songs im working on)
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I'm trying to unfuck my sig.
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10-03-2005 20:49 |
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Rude
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Originally posted by marine289
Is that magix?? It has like 8 patters lol. You should start in fruity or something, works much much better if you'd ask me. But are all your drums sampled loops, or are ther some homemade beats
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LOL no there are more then 12
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you can browse down
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10-03-2005 20:56 |
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kaliyuga
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spooky intro in drum track acid noise bit to old skool 4 me. love the break. different styles in this tune give it a nice edge. not much rage .
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11-03-2005 00:14 |
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iNSiGHt
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I was teased into really liking this...has a nice old school vibe to it..so much so that it sounds like it was made around 94-95.
Unfortunately that MOOG sound is no good.
Doesn't fit, not even just the mix...wrong sound for the tune man.
When it first cuts out the tune is instantly better, then it came back.
But i don't even think the volume of the breaks is much of an issue if you are going for a more atmospheric vibe rather than dance floor.
There are no rules and if there were DnB would just break 'em 
Some interesting drum work def keep going.
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"since when has this music ever been about making fuckin money!"
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11-03-2005 02:49 |
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Surya
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Intro snice
Amen sounds nice
Sub is too loud
Not sure about the acid sounds though, they sound too basic, uninspired
Nice sounds and atmos though!
Gets more intresting as it goes on though, as you start adding layers. Builds a nice atmosphere, but the drums start drowning in the mix.
Nice track, but the start is rather unintresting.
2.25/5 for the track
2.25/5 for the sound
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"In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
- Pieter Frenssen 2004
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24-03-2005 10:58 |
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Halph-Price
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saturate drums to make them louder.
i like the moog, thats the only sound of the moog i like.
yea, the drums and bass need to be a bit louder, the bells drown them out almost, the bells should be reverbed more to set them back a bit, there right in yur' face.
ned some more variations in there, that's what makes dnb.
kinda wanted to hear it go a bit RADICAL, ya know just go freaky. like, hmm, i don't know, a DROP.
but it was cool. had potential. and you wasted it.
my god i have become just like my father.
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This post has been edited 1 time(s), it was last edited by Halph-Price: 25-03-2005 09:29.
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