 Anthem - I Love You So Much |
Anthem 
Producer
Registration Date: 18-02-2005
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Well , here it is, my first home build dnb track .
it's not perfect at all, and there is some stuff missin I guess ... Any comments on this one ?
looking for an MC to provide the track of some rhymes ... anyone interested ?
grtz
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04-03-2005 22:38 |
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Darkside
Old-School Rolla
Registration Date: 02-01-2005
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dude...i would so love to listen and review but that file is HUGE...i dont really think its necessary to render at anything higher than 192 kbps unless your music doesnt sound good unless its at 320, for any reason. if you upload a smaller mp3, i'd be happy to check it out. i have a 56k modem, but its busted and only runs at half speed, so 19 mb is a long wait for me.
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05-03-2005 01:57 |
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Darkside
Old-School Rolla
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hm...pretty good. ur beat is on point altho maybe too lo-fi...the wah wah bass is too pronounced i think u might need to turn it down a little and put some more effects on it, it sounds too dry. the background melody, those three notes u play on the strings or whatever, are pretty good, those will be fine just that way. the synth that comes in at 3:13 or so is real tight and the build fx you put in before the beat kicks back in there is pretty good. might wanna put a few quick kickdrums in there to make the drop more exciting. you continue with slight variation to sounds we've already heard...put some fx in this like sweeps and stuff around the parts where the new add-ins are gettin old. but anyway...this would be a pretty good track if u- changed the lo-fi beat, not the beat jus the sound of it, it makes everything sound like its bad quality. u might wanna put a lead synth in, somethin with eighth notes, to incorporate with all of the three or four note melodies you've got, if you can...it sounds like rhythm is more your forte than melody, as with many d'n'b producers. this track doesnt quite "flow" yet either, altho thats very hard to master and i daresay i havent gotten it down yet, either. you know, i've only made 3 songs myself. this sounds like a listen track rather than a dance track for the most part as well, if u wanna make it for the dance floor you cant take the beat out for so long as you do. anyway, pretty good overall 2.5/5 because it sounds messy but don't let it get you down i mean this is ur first track it shows pretty good potential, and jesus this is the longest review i've ever written. well, if you upload any more tracks or a rerelease of this one, whatever, i'll be sure to check em out, im interested in seein how you'll do. keep on rockin
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06-03-2005 03:36 |
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Anthem
Producer
Registration Date: 18-02-2005
Posts: 67
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thx m8 .. nice review 
... I'll start a new one with the same souds ... only different ... and indeed i think it's hard to find a melodie that goes with the rhitm ...
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06-03-2005 13:02 |
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Surya
The Robot
Registration Date: 04-11-2002
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Wobble is nice but could use some sub to it, sounds a bit thin.
Drums could use more punch, and they sound very lowfi. I guess the loop you used sounds that way. In that case, layer it with some extra crisp rides and/or hats.
Hmmm, 3 minutes into the track, and not much has happened yet...
Ah, extry string coming in. Nice sound to it, but why does everything follow the same melody? That doesn't only sound uninspired, but it makes tracks become more boring quite fast.
Overall, I would say the track is way too long, has way too little elements and thus is very repetetive and boring.
The sound is very thin, there is no sub anywhere near and the drums lack any crispness.
1.25/5 for the track
1/5 for the sound
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"In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
- Pieter Frenssen 2004
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