kareem 
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Registration Date: 10-11-2004
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Please check out my new track 'Bassment' and post your comments here!!!
Hope you enjoy it!
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04-03-2005 16:23 |
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Darkside
Old-School Rolla
Registration Date: 02-01-2005
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a no-bs start...very nice...that beat is kickin and the flute? sample in the background very dark. nice nasty bass...that ping effect that comes in at maybe 1:15-20 is kinda cool. first drop leaves something to be desired, i think you should make em wait longer...the new synth line that you put in at about 1:51 i dont like that much but the one that replaces it at about 2:18 is better. the track needs some more atmo maybe all together i feel like its empty at some points...chop up that break every once in a while will ya...the 3:06 synthline is pretty tight...diggin the fx at 3:21 or so...on the way out u add a few variations to the beat...this would be a really sweet track to spin i think if u added a couple more fx and atmo maybe, i say 3/5 beat cuz u need variation and 3.5/5 melody/fx because the track sounds a lil empty sometimes like i said. ur eqing, compression etc. seems to be on point tho, u manage levels well and nothing really overrides. nice tune, ur a good producer. peace.
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05-03-2005 02:32 |
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Rude
I'm gonna get you
Registration Date: 06-01-2005
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Kind of a messy track, isn't it?
Anyway, I kinda like it
cool drums
cool tune
messy fx
when the 2nd bass comes in.. dunno.. erm..
it's the same thing over and over again..
the only thing that changes are the synths
Greetz, Rude
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05-03-2005 13:08 |
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Anthem
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Registration Date: 18-02-2005
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the whole part before the first drop needs some extra... drums are gettin bored after a while, just because the bassline keeps on going with no variation in tones,...
after the drop, things work out ok ... but it will not be a crowd mover this way ..
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05-03-2005 13:25 |
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Jeller
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Registration Date: 11-11-2004
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this song lok,s more proffesional than ur other songs, that's why i think it's way better gj man
4/5
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07-03-2005 18:56 |
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daze_DND
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Registration Date: 01-11-2004
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Bang on drums.....like that.
wobbly-sub bass drops way to soon imo..... keep it out 'till drop at 1:48 (when the fast arpeggiator sounds come in= wich are very nice imo).
a lot off sounds in this one (a bit to much imo)...therefore the tracks is missing some structure.
Keep the best sounds and spread/work on them over the entire track....
some very good sounds you got going here. beat is tight but may be better with some edits of the main kick/snare patterns....fill-in/ghostbeats are good (maybe bring them a bit more upfront imo)
Needs work but overall a good track.
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08-03-2005 10:14 |
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Dub-LJ
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Registration Date: 20-02-2005
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I think an Intro would be good - the track just starts from 0 to 100. Just build it up a little longer in the beginning. And the drums need more variation and some fills - they are a little boring through the tune. Also the track needs some structure - it just goes and goes and has no climax. But although, it is nicely mixed and you had some good ideas - a good track, and with a little more work it is a 4/5 tune. 
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08-03-2005 16:13 |
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thechronic
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Check your levels, the drums are a bit too loud imo
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09-03-2005 17:32 |
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I think that your song Mercury was better.
Bass is good, but I don't like melodies and effects.
Drums are quite simple.
And the audio clipping in drums is very high.
I'd give it 3/5 for song.
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09-03-2005 19:20 |
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Surora23
Agressive Melodic Disorder
Registration Date: 05-07-2004
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drums are too loud...those square basses you put in there dont fit, that lil reece synth thing you got sounds NICE 
sound effects are cool...takign a while to hit abreak down...yea too long for break down and i was expecting soemthign maybe a lttle more edgy more attacking...thos lil synths in there dont fit at all..spacy stuff is cool...sounds kind of )EIB( ish after that they get really anoying its piercing my ears...
some really cool ideas i just think you approached it maybe the wrong way...deff could be soemthing ncie that would come out of this...
3/5 track
2/5 sound (<<some cliping and levels are a bit mnessy)
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09-03-2005 21:58 |
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kaliyuga
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nice vibes flowin and boncey but with evil edge gets to repetive. could go to different b line riddem. i think u with a more closed drum style
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11-03-2005 00:11 |
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janverstichel
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like youre bass and whale
beat is good but too loud
cool litlle fx as always
definitly youre best track
bassline keeps playhing over and over again (need more variation)
like the new sound at 1 .52
good track
4/5 for the track
2/5 for youre levels 
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15-03-2005 18:04 |
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Surya
The Robot
Registration Date: 04-11-2002
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Quite nice drums and bassline. I would put a LP filter on the bassline though, to filter away the high-end, that way it will sound less synthetic
Gets a bit repetetive though.
The harsh sounding modulated square wave is a bit too loud, but nice touch.
2.25/5 for the track
2.5/5 for the sound
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22-03-2005 15:42 |
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syneptic
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drums are a little bit too loud.
i like the sounds and fx but it seems that it´s the "same" the whole time. which progs do you use ??
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28-03-2005 16:18 |
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