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Darkside 
Old-School Rolla
Registration Date: 02-01-2005
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Please check out my new track 'Bring It On' and post your comments here!!!
first d'n'b track i've ever released, so i'm wondering how it sounds to you guys. please leave reviews givin me tips on sound if needed, i really want some constructive criticism right about now. thanks and thanks for showing interest. it's a big help to me since i'm just comin' up.
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27-02-2005 02:48 |
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broadside
mentalist
Registration Date: 17-01-2005
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for the first ever this shows remarkable potential. quite atmospheric. cool vocal aswell. i love the build and drop around the two minute mark.
the sound that comes in at 3.00 is a bit overkill tho does it sit well with the mood or the melody. Nice beat that comes in on 3.20
I think this is good, but for proper technical advice and so forth you'll need someone else to review it.
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28-02-2005 14:53 |
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wreakon
evol genius
Registration Date: 05-10-2004
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another really nice track!!
wicked bass again
levels are all good... wif head phones anyways
some of the vocals are anoying when you cant understand/hear them imo
very dark.. kind of sounds slow but thats cool
you need to work on the strcture if you want to spin this though 
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01-03-2005 11:37 |
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marine289
Wicked Producer
Registration Date: 05-10-2004
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Nice intro. really good atmosphere.
nice effects. laugh is a bit weird at the end? (did you do that, or was it part of the sample?)
amen break, nice chopping once in a while, but there are other breaks then the amen. Or you could try and make your own beats from scratch.
Vocal is sometimes a bit not-understandable 
but it fits the track.
Some nice basses.
Hiphop beat is nice, but snare is a little too loud compared to the amen.
The melody sometimes seems like it has a bit too much high frequencies. May be try a low pass filter.
Overall atmosphere is really good. But the basslines and amen could use some more variation. But you could also add or replace it with another break. I think that would make the track better.
3/5 mainly for atmosphere.
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02-03-2005 18:33 |
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Surora23
Agressive Melodic Disorder
Registration Date: 05-07-2004
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cool intro...drums seem a lil low in the mix after tha laugh...or maybe the laugh is just too loud...the tramen is nice...nice reece but i think it could be more distorted...or tweaked a bit...at the drop the drums arent very excitind...and the synth isnt too exciting...alot of relaly cool effects at the second drop...nice hip-hop breaks...but completely over power the main drums before...give the main durms more power...a lotmore power..and make them more active...took too long to drop imo...and the second drop isnt any differnt....wasnt feeling this one too much...some cool sutff here andthere but not exactly my cup of tea...
2/5 track
2/5 production 
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Rinse it OUT!!!! 
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03-03-2005 01:26 |
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Rude
I'm gonna get you
Registration Date: 06-01-2005
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Isn't that copyrighted???
Korn - Twist
(he used a piece of that song at the ending..)
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06-03-2005 16:28 |
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Darkside
Old-School Rolla
Registration Date: 02-01-2005
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Originally posted by Rude
Isn't that copyrighted???
Korn - Twist
(he used a piece of that song at the ending..) |
huh...i must've forgotten to take it out during the mixdown i was jus playin around with stuff there. jus disregard it. you got good ears, tho..
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06-03-2005 17:52 |
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Surya
The Robot
Registration Date: 04-11-2002
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Intro: a bit empty but ok.
Tramen comes in: sounds weird, like it has some kind of chorus effect on it. Dunno, sounds uneasy. Lacks power too and makes it clear the track is slow.
Hoover is allright but sounds a bit too digital.
Some nice ideas and atmos and stuff, but doesn't have any power.
1.75/5 for the track
2/5 for the sound
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