*Izah*
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Registration Date: 02-12-2004
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Please check out my new track 'Jar - The Idea' and post your comments here!!!
This track is from a friend of mine. The reason I post it is that he is too lazy to get on forums and I think you should hear this. enjoy :)
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26-02-2005 15:26 |
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Halph-Price 
Zombie Algorithm
Registration Date: 22-12-2004
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it's a good track, what can i say. maybe a bit more mid range. but the high range is hard to get nicly and it's done here good.
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26-02-2005 18:25 |
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broadside
mentalist
Registration Date: 17-01-2005
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wow, why is it that whenever i drop one of my own tunes some dapper tune comes out and steals the limelight. this is fucking amazing man. good shit, would love to hear this on proper speakers. (headphones at the mo)
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27-02-2005 20:21 |
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kaliyuga
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Registration Date: 15-12-2004
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chack evelop on that noise, bit clicky, nice atmosphere, sound r to seperate drums weak need to be mean and that scream s wack, me no like. boring bass noise, bit of a switch kickin,to many tunes like this already try nu stuff.
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27-02-2005 23:44 |
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*Izah*
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thanks for the comments guys.. 
I'll tell this dude he must get off his lazy ass and start postin his tracks on the forum 
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02-03-2005 13:09 |
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Surora23
Agressive Melodic Disorder
Registration Date: 05-07-2004
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interesting intro...creppy, and kind of reminds me of dripping water in a prison...drums come in...they could use a lil more power..drop is cool...but the sub and the ambience isnt too interesting...drums are really good though so i have to give you props for that...track is the same all the way through...ncie stuff...could be a lot better imo...
2/5 track
3/5 production
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Rinse it OUT!!!! 
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03-03-2005 01:34 |
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Muad'Dib
Andrejnalin
Registration Date: 02-12-2003
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Hmm, strangely... I'm doing lots o dnb listenings nowadays... ahhh, let's review..
cool start, I like it... spooky and atmospheric... Nice sounds here, and I LOVE THAT SCREAM! 
Nice start at 00:51, strange beat... The starts at 01:07 is kool, but the snare is little strange... ahh you fix it, good production. Maybe this part lasts for very short time, only few seconds. I know that you want to make a buildup now, but you should keep the beat a little more.
Nice bass sound, but too quiet. Ahh, you put a tramen here. Nicely produced, nice variations... the hihats are very quiet, boost their volume up.
This part is getting boring.
Ok, now you switch to hihat rhytm. The begining theme you put it again... ok... you repeat the kool beat from the begining...
I pretty much like your part at 04:45, nice bass sounds and combos, but it is getting boring. Maybe because there is no leading melody, I don't know. Try using some strings or reece line with a melody, because like this you don't have a theme in your tune.
The end is ok, filter cut...
2,5/5
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13-03-2005 14:21 |
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Surya
The Robot
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Quite ok intro
Screamsample is nice
Nice sub coming in. Takes a bit too long before it drops though.
Drop: nice amens that do sound just a tad too wet.
String becomes annoying though, I would have ditched it with the drop.
Ah, string gets ditched. Sounds a bit empty, maybe throw in something else Jar.
Ah, there it is back again...
Second drop: ah, cool, with the extra reece. But maybe just use it a lil bit more?
Nice track, but the strings are really overused!
2.25/5 for the track
2.5/5 for the sound
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"In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
- Pieter Frenssen 2004
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16-03-2005 15:35 |
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Paki
Cool Steppa
Registration Date: 03-04-2005
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Wow!!! Awesome!!!
But i think that you are "torturing " the loop too much. Maybe if you extend the loop as it self it might just sound better? Why not to try something like that. Or it could soften the track.
Anyway I like the horror in the track and the screams. Definetely good idea!!!!
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03-04-2005 21:54 |
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Ur-Sag Zi-Ga-Ni Naphar Ajjabi Sharush! Sa-Par-Mah-Zu Diri La-Magiru Sin Su-La. 