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Capsacium 
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Registration Date: 11-02-2005
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Please check out my new track 'feeling fine' and post your comments here!!!
This is a little outside of my usual style, being that it's very electronic sounding. I needed something new to refresh with. Lemme know how it works for you.
Enjoy
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24-02-2005 22:02 |
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Soi
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Registration Date: 29-01-2003
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1st glance: poppy song!! yeah! always liked the chorus/verse thing.
Jazzbrushes + drumedits are nice.
Break: could use some slight melodic variation, duration = good
Drop: ok, but you might wanna get a bit more aggressive on the bass, some heavy basses could fit well, since the drums are kinda ruff. Imo eej...
I like the energy of it.
jazzbrushes, a samurai (i think) and an amen (a detuned one moreover!!) does the trick.
Overall level/dB is quite low, had to bust everything up here.
Nice one.
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24-02-2005 22:19 |
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Halph-Price
Zombie Algorithm
Registration Date: 22-12-2004
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that intro sound is amazing! 
the levels are quiet on the drums, the looped, only complaint, so far.
now the lops later on are a bit louder...
but overall, i put on other dnb, and had to turn it down.
a lot.
just a limiter or just turn up the master volume.
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25-02-2005 04:21 |
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Stutterstep
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Registration Date: 27-01-2005
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Nice track, I really like the vocal it fits in well, the bass line is good but it needs some dirt on it. try some distortion or layering. I like the amen but needs to be louder and punchier. IThe arrangement is great. Really good stuff just need to work on your levels, depending on what software you use, try putting a limiter on your bounce stereo track. Respect!!!
Stutterstep 
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25-02-2005 07:45 |
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marine289
Wicked Producer
Registration Date: 05-10-2004
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Intro is ok. Some nice sounds... samples on the 1st beat arent that great. But when the break gets added, the drums sound good. Some notes dont really fit each other. Sometimes the notes are even a bit off.
Bass could use a little more variation.
Vocals are nice, as are some of the effects you used.
I really liked the drums, but the bassline is getting a bit annoying after a while. And I think the track needs some more variation at the end... The first 3 or 4 minutes were interesting, but after that it gets a bit boring... May be try making the track a bit shorter 
But that's just my opinion, you dont have to do that 
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Overall: 2.5/5
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04-03-2005 17:49 |
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kareem
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Registration Date: 10-11-2004
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Style intro.
Nice and chill atmos.
Good beat.like the bongo's.
builds up nicely.the woman's voice works perfectly, gives me chills.
Nice drop at 2min15.Does need a little more variation.
3,5/5
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04-03-2005 19:34 |
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Halph-Price
Zombie Algorithm
Registration Date: 22-12-2004
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09-03-2005 06:30 |
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Muad'Dib
Andrejnalin
Registration Date: 02-12-2003
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Interesting begining, and you have some tramen sample on which you cutted several frequencies
The bass is too loud... or the beat is too quiet, I don't know but this sounds kinda outta key. The beat LACKS POWER, fix that.
Nice atmo, but man, what a pity for the beat. I don't know why you chose to lower the volume of the beat, I guess you wanted your other sounds to be heard, but this is way toooooo much!
wow nice build up at 02:45... excellent combinations in da beat at 03:15... the hihats are too loud compared to the beat...
The whole tune lacks power, and that's mainly because the beat is too quiet... Man! What a potential you have here, just EQ it better and increase the volume of the beat!
You have excellent atmo...
The end is kool, 2, you know how to end a tune.
Wow kool, how kool 
3,25/5
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13-03-2005 14:26 |
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Surya
The Robot
Registration Date: 04-11-2002
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Nice intro, nice use of the female voice
Drums need a lot of work on the sound, now they don't kick and punch... they should!!!
Nice stuff with sweet drumedits, but it does get a bit boring quite fast.
2/5 for the track
2.25/5 for the sound
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15-03-2005 12:44 |
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