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kareem 
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Please check out my new track 'Mercury' and post your comments here!!!
Hope you enjoy it.
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22-02-2005 19:45 |
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camo
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Hi Kareem!
Intro: nice bassline!!!!!!! little short, but thats good. i dont like the drumloop very much, but the snare is heavy. i dont really like them whistles. and when there are so much snares. the other fx i also dont like much. but bassline is really great!!!! 
where is she from?????
but overall a hearable track. cool!!!!!
pease, camo
2.7/
hmmmm. 2 or 3??????? ok! ill give you a 3 ..... for sure
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keepin it rollin`
www.myspace.com/camopdj
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22-02-2005 22:40 |
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kareem
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Tnx.
The bass is from right here on the site, just with some effects on.
And the drums aren't a drumloop but are made from scratch.
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23-02-2005 12:59 |
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Yawn
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nice short intro with a great sounding bassline, feels a little empty at first but starts to pick up. I like the little drum fills in the background they sound pretty sweet.
i dont really like the way it changes at 1.20, im not really sure if that sound suits the track up to that point - rolls on ok though.fx at 2.18 sounds a little cheesy, im not sure if all these sounds compliment each other.
The bassline is very good but I think it could be put to better use in another track.
2/5 track
2/5 sounds
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23-02-2005 17:42 |
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Stutterstep
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Good intro, i think it sould be a little longer, The bass line is good but needs to be layered as do your drums, if those to thing arn't fat then your track can't be. For me layering really changed how my shit sounded. Overall the track is good, would like to here more of your stuff. respect!!!
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25-02-2005 08:10 |
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Halph-Price
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you started with the bassline?
sounded good, but it helps give an impact if you wait till the drums to plop er in...
i like the whistling sound.
that bending lead is cool, and the bassline in the background are nice sounding.
yea, thoes snares that are just in a drum roll , they sound very drum machine, at 1:50. they have a sharp ness to them, sound exactly like snares. not the metallic ones, there cool. anyways, they don't flow along with it, play with their pitch and cut slightly to make them variant more. it's only when you hear it hit more than twice in a row.
that wasa pretty bitchen tune overall.
started very cool. the kick seems to be panned out a bit, usually should be dead center... it seems to clip some too, it's very loud in the start. make it stop playing when it is start it again. Cut Itself, is what i mean. it will eliminate the clipping i bet, and keep a deeper tone to it.
i like this song, it's rolling.
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26-02-2005 18:21 |
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dNk
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ou man nice bassline , very nice , drums ar simple but its clean , the bassline i think that is come from acid monkey pack 
)) i am right ? 
nevermind , whistles is good but put a little warm reverb i think they will be sounds better
put ya 4 just because this is first from ya what im heard and i like this bassline
maybe im not right to put 4 starts but this is my opinion but dude try to make next time better sound of drums , its not good for this bassline 
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27-02-2005 19:41 |
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I think that there's too much audio clipping in song.
Melody is well, but it is quite repeating.
Drums aren't excellent but they're good.
In my opinion is song interesting.
ps: outro is cool!
i'd give it:
2/5 for drums
3/5 for melodies
3/5 for effects
This post has been edited 1 time(s), it was last edited by Tchor co Tchor: 28-02-2005 19:03.
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28-02-2005 18:58 |
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kareem
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Thanks!!
Appreciate the comments.
Next track coming soon!
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03-03-2005 16:30 |
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Jeller
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good song, i like the bassline
3/5
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07-03-2005 18:53 |
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Surya
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Intro is nothing new but allright.
Not too fond of the kick
Drop: sound of your bassline looses power when it goes down. maybe sample it and play it in your sampler.
Drums: not a lot of power and very standard. Try spicing them up.
Overall your theme's aren't bad, but not very gripping either. Neither are your sounds, so try making more intresting choises in the future.
2/5 for the track
2.25/5 for the sound
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"In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
- Pieter Frenssen 2004
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15-03-2005 12:13 |
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janverstichel
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like youre intro very good atmo expecting something fat but got a bit disapointed by the melody of the bassline
the sound is very well though
like the little soundfx u use
like the wissel sound
youre beat doenst roll enough for my taste but it's powerfull
good track overal good variation but weird sound
3.5/5
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15-03-2005 17:59 |
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Paki
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hEY kAREEM. Exelent baseline but where is the loop?
i think it`s too low. Anyway i like the baseline and the snares. Anyway good track and exelent mastering about the basses!!!
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03-04-2005 21:59 |
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