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Please check out my new track 'COFFEE MONSTA' and post your comments here!!!
Not sure if i like this or not....not quite finished either......oh and big up to Chronic for the hats!!!
This track has been deleted on the producer's request
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20-02-2005 23:56 |
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stickbubbly 
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intro is o.k
the lead sound is deadly.
nice dark melody. border line cheesy though.
i like the bouncey rolling beat.
nice track.
could use some more layers.
cheers
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21-02-2005 01:22 |
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kareem
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Nice and chill intro.
Good atmosphere.
I can hear a sample you used for breakstune too.
The lead is kinda good but it doesn't sound as full.
Like it but needs work.
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22-02-2005 19:30 |
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camo
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Hi! just short; i got no time
: nice tune!!!!! bass line is bit too loud in the main part......but.... i like that!!!!!
3.4 for that
greetz, camo
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22-02-2005 22:43 |
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well u could at least give me a rating......
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22-02-2005 22:56 |
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Surora23
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is this clown step 
this sounds liek clwon step
...kind of a happy feel...very pendulum ish i bet youre a fan 
who isnt... blech...anyway! the mix was great...song gets a tad repetetive...and i dont like pendulum too much 
BUT the track was decently done...
3/5 track
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23-02-2005 02:21 |
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Soi
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I kinda get what you're aiming for with this tune, and you're 3/4 there.
Sounds are ok, but somehow, i miss some 'glue'. Glue stands for a sound/frequencey, whatever, that holds it alltogether.
The beats are bit too "clownsteppy/straight from the computer 1/8th bar/strict quantise" for me, maybe try another sort of quantising, perhaps this might help.
but there are some good ideas anyway..
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23-02-2005 15:22 |
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Yawn
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nice scatty beats, intro pad sounds nice but a bit quiet - seemed to be a bit drowned out by the beat, i like it when it drops, the bassline sounds really nice on my speakers. lead sounds is cool, could maybe be abit more gritty though, might suit the heavy bassline a little better.
I like overall feel of the track & I think it would go down well at a club - its real stomper.
The only other beef i have was that I was little disappointed it wasn't a bit longer after the second break it seemed to fade out a little to early.
But other than that - good stuff!
3/5 track
3/5 sound
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23-02-2005 18:31 |
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DJParash
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on your drums: get rid of the two step, also try panning your hats to the left, and your kick needs to be a little softer i think. This track does get boring your almost there though get back to it and finish it up
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24-02-2005 07:00 |
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Capsacium
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not bad. That drum line does gets real repetitive. Why's everyone hate'in on cheese/clownstep, it's allowed. I really feel like you could add something to that long break 3'19-4'19, but the drop after that is effective.
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24-02-2005 18:05 |
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cluelessproject
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unique sound, but not my kind of dnb songs
but keep up the good work
respect
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27-02-2005 17:52 |
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Halph-Price
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this is a nice song. i though the drumbreak sucked, but it grows on ya, and it adds a VERY nice SWING.
the lead is sick. that's amazing.
the pad's panning and the nice liquid sounds, very cool.
filtered lead coming in now. Dramtic, niiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiice. 
wow that was fucking sick.
now the drums feel to slow... i want it to break, fast and sharp.. there was that delay with a little bridge noise...
OMG YOU ARE NOT FUCKING FADING OUT ON THE ENDING!
fade ends are ONLY for pop songs. not for drum n bass EVER NEVER EVER NOOOOOOO.
yea, that about summs it up.
after that lead sizzles filters down, you need to take that suspence, make a snare hit, and than run with it, fast. add a hihat with a close pitter, or something, i dunno. arp with the same note, with a tight gate, would speed it up too.
oh and just drop each layer out till it's just the drum left to end a song, if you really can't figure out how. adda reverse cymbal to really puncutate it. don't fade out. EVER.
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This post has been edited 1 time(s), it was last edited by Halph-Price: 01-03-2005 03:50.
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01-03-2005 03:49 |
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YO HALPH PRICE!!!!!!
It fades out cause its not finished!!!
AND PROBABLY NEVER WILL BE AS MY COMPUTERS GOING MENTAL!!! KEEPS TRYING TO BURN DISKD WHEN THIS NOTHING IN THE DRIVE!!! FUCKING MODERN TECHNOLOGY!!!!
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01-03-2005 19:46 |
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fogboy
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cool tune drums don't really suit that bass tho imo
maybe some variation in the drums starts 2 do your head in after a while 
breakdown cool like the decending keys on synth
tune sort of reminds me of "dr sonic"
3/5
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02-03-2005 11:35 |
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Surya
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Nice drums, sweet pads in the intro.
Synth coming in: nice warm sound, but a bit too digital for my taste.
Buildup to the second drop is cool, but spice it up a lil with some slight percussion or atmos.
Very well made, but a bit too empty, add some stuff!
2.5/5 for the track
3.25/5 for the sound
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