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camo 
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Registration Date: 22-12-2004
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Please check out my new track 'downpour' and post your comments here!!!
Hi! This Track i made while my one week disease. it starts smoov and then turn to a bad bassline tune. pleaze listen to it and tell me what u think.........
thx
peace
This track has been deleted on the producer's request
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18-02-2005 15:38 |
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fullgore
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Registration Date: 18-02-2005
Posts: 5
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18-02-2005 17:08 |
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*Izah*
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Registration Date: 02-12-2004
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yea the intro is really nice .. the beats coming in sound good.. breaks are a little weird though still..
bassline is cool, but not really convincing.. give the bassline some power imo..
the atmosphere is good but the track needs some more variation and power.. overall good job 
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18-02-2005 17:47 |
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Anthem
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Registration Date: 18-02-2005
Posts: 67
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18-02-2005 23:09 |
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Muad'Dib
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Registration Date: 02-12-2003
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Wow, what a producing, man!! VERY KOOL SOUNDZ! I like that pipe sound, though not very found of its melody. The snare is da bomb, juz little more low-end. 
Interesting combinations of sounds and beats. Very hard beat, but simple. And that tramen sample that you add a time to time.
I cannot hear the hats, what's the trick? High-end boost of the tune, and better mastering. The tramen also needs high-end boost. The compression is wrong (if u used any), because the bassline decreases its volume when the kick hits.
What a voice! And what a strange atmosphere of the tune! Hmm... You could have used the tramen in more combinations. I like your choice of sounds.
The tune's overall loudness is on very high level, making it clip and creating distortion. An overall compressor here would help. Attack and release times you should set to more than 50 milliseconds, because if you set it to less it will kill the snares and the kicks.
I don't know, you switch between too many themes, I can't really follow what the heck is going on there. You have approx. 4 themes, but I think that 2 or topmost 3 are allowed in this kinda tune. Good effort man!
Overall rating: 3/5
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22-02-2005 17:56 |
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marine289
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Registration Date: 05-10-2004
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Nice intro, some really good samples. Really like the flute sample. Beat coming in is good, but the amen once in a while could be a little bit better done. Go crazy, add some weird effects
Overall the track feels a bit too slow, what bpm is this? It especially feels slow with the amens. Great vocals
Really weird atmosphere, but I like it. like muaddib said: many themes, may be you could make 2 tracks out of this
Overall not bad, but still needs a bit of work. Keep it up
for now: 2.75/3
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22-02-2005 20:31 |
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camo
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Registration Date: 22-12-2004
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Thanks for ya reviews, guys. Yes you could get more songs of this one....but i want to make tunes which wont get boring after 2 times listenin. the bmp is 170, i dont know it sound so slow, but i thought, "make a chilly tune".
Yes, i havent compressed it. imnot too good with compressin
, and i think the compresssin, if its done bad, take some power away of the track.....
thanks again
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22-02-2005 21:29 |
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kareem
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Registration Date: 10-11-2004
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Nice intro with use of great soundz.
Like the snare.nice chill atmos.
Oncoming bass sounds wicked.Nice lil' effects.
Some good ideas but everything needs a boost cause it doesn't have the catchy quality, gets lil' boring after a while.Needs more variation.
nice beats also.
3/5
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22-02-2005 21:43 |
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fogboy
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Registration Date: 13-01-2005
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like the flute is that voice of "silence"
sax is cool 2
love that bass nasty
clippin quite a bit tho
definitly need more of the tramen and maybe once the drop hits don't mellow it out anymore just keep it rollin the bass is mint 3/5
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02-03-2005 11:19 |
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Surya
The Robot
Registration Date: 04-11-2002
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Nice how you gave this chilltrack a rough edge, good job!
A bit slow no? I suggest making a sligtly faster version of it (around 175bpm)!
2.5/5 for the track
2.5/5 for the sound
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14-03-2005 15:17 |
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janverstichel
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Registration Date: 10-11-2004
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like the the flute sample
nice play with the beat
the track sound a litlle to empty for me and the beat isn't fast enough
the track gets a lot better when the basses drop in and the vocal brings a good atmo
good idea's nice basses but bit to empty and slow
cheers
3/5
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14-03-2005 15:37 |
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nice track. snare seems overpowering though.
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11-11-2005 22:04 |
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kinda interesting intro, weird tempo thing goin on though.....the beat has a strange shuffle though.....could maybe do with another mixdown .
takes a little to long to kick in properly.
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11-11-2005 22:08 |
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ATN
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Registration Date: 07-10-2005
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K, I'm a sucker for vocals, so this track got me with those. I wasn't too into the shooting stars in your intro, they didn't feel natural to me. I like the amens from time to time, I like the four bar bass line, keeps it moving. The end doesn't work for me at all though, its too sudden, and I don't feel the need for the whole last section after you pull out that awesome bass. Maybe groove on the big bass for a while, just bass and vox alone at the end, could sound sick and make for nice mixes into other tracks.
keep workin on this though, it has definate potential.
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