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DRUM FORCE 
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Registration Date: 28-10-2003
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Please check out my new track 'Dreaming of a better world' and post your comments here!!!
...ok, i`m waiting to see some reviews...Big Up!
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17-02-2005 03:19 |
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additive
DROP IT!
Registration Date: 09-02-2005
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mmm nice chill vibe, and sweet hats!!
wow 1:29 wasn't expecting that, it's heaps nice
hrmm personally i don't like the vocals, but they work well in the track
almost felt the drop, but more bass and a fuller range of the audio spectrum would haev been cool but still NOT BAD MAN!!! 
ur sweeping filter is what makes this track.. i really like it.
the snare could use another layer imho, but i also understand it might stand out a bit much over the mellowness of the track
i'll definately be listening to this often. it's charming!
4.7/5 ... would have got the extra 0.3 if i felt the drops a bit harder
nice track well worth the download! 
i'd love to hear it in 24/96 not as mp3, coz i can tell those hats are lacking coz of compression.
just a suggestion, with the harpy sound, when the drop happens, you could full arpeggiate it up and down, and fill out the range, and maybe even double it an octave lower? just a thought. very good all the same
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17-02-2005 05:28 |
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wreakon
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17-02-2005 08:10 |
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DRUM FORCE
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Registration Date: 28-10-2003
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Thanks guys 4 now...i`m expecting more reviews...
@additive - ur right about sweepeng filter ...That really IS what makes this track 
...about the snare...i tried what u said but it`s better like this, trust me...hehe
@reckon - The thing is that i really wanted the second half of the track after the break) to be similar to the first part 
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As i said i`m waiting for more reviews...
Big Up 2 All
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17-02-2005 11:29 |
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Stutterstep
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Good intro, The drums r nice, i think the hi hat sounds a little flat. It could us a bit of dirt on the bass. Really like the vibe of this one. Maybe some variation when it drops the second time. good production would like to hear more of your stuff. respect
stutterstep
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17-02-2005 18:46 |
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Capsacium
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Smooth Smooth. That vocal's a perfect sample for your melody. I like that you didn't over use them. Well done
Curious, what software/hardware did you use for this?
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17-02-2005 22:11 |
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DRUM FORCE
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Registration Date: 28-10-2003
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Well.... I always combine ACID & Sound Forge...As i said once, i have some sick SF plug-ings to make the sound phat enough and that's it!!!
...more reviews???
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Big Up!
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18-02-2005 17:06 |
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Surora23
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cool intro...drums are a little low in the mix...not enough hi end in them...cool shaker...i see you used "the realm" vocal...very popular in trance tracks...the sub was brought out nciely...but again everythin seems to be drowned out..no hi end at all...the melody with the strings doesnt change very much...variation on the second drop wouldnt go without notice...track has a great vibe but no variation...maybe thats what you were going for though....
4/track
2/mixing
good track
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Rinse it OUT!!!! 
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19-02-2005 02:33 |
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DRUM FORCE
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Registration Date: 28-10-2003
Posts: 12
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@Surora - well...man, what can i say...
...some people think that i mixed the track well and that it`s well produced , u think i should do better ... i`ll try what u said and than we`ll see
About variations...i think that tune like this don`t need more variations...It`s not pendulum style track u know...But that is matter of taste and that's it!
Anyway...i see that my tune now have 3 stars instead of 4 like in the begining
, but it doesn`t matter so much...I`ll check the sound again and if i see that there is something to be modified , i`ll do it!
Thanks!
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19-02-2005 17:10 |
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MrNibbles
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Registration Date: 26-01-2005
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Sounding nice man, really nice thud in the kick! But as Mr Surora23 said, its way too repetative... add a litte more variation in there!
the strings style synth gets boring quickly. It should change to the more chilled section without the strings much sooner.... love the snap of the snare, but needs a bit more boost and high end in it. A little more compression wouldnt go a miss either...
Other than that, nice idea vocals work well on the whole and you didnt abuse that!
normally i expect a little more from 6+ minuites.
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20-02-2005 05:12 |
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Dub-LJ
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Originally posted by DRUM FORCE
About variations...i think that tune like this don`t need more variations...It`s not pendulum style track u know...But that is matter of taste and that's it!
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Damn right!! Less is often more! I like the tune like this, has a really nice vibe.. the vocal fits.. there is nothing to complain -> 4/5
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20-02-2005 19:33 |
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Muad'Dib
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Should I expect something by such pretentious name?! (kidding
) I like the start and that guitar-like sound. It really copes with the atmosphere you try to achieve. When the beat strikes, wow! Kool moves. The melodies are not outta key, everything is fine. Maybe the hat needs little more power, or the whole beats part, I don't know. They are little off-volumed, if u know what I mean.
I like the part at 01:29. It is so mystic, so revealing. Maybe too repetative, but timed well. The talking is very good! And the quality of the voice is good.
I like the part after the conversation (talking). The bass really adds to the atmo. Nice kick-snare combinations from time to time. This kinda sounds like SimCity music :-) You can offer it to MaxiStudios. 
Strange, but I can feel that the tune's natural end would normally come at the middle of this version. You repeat the voice, and again the same beat. Don't you think that it is better not to do this? I mean, I can feel that when that only-lead-linez part strikes in the middle of the song, it is preparing for its end. I don't know, this is strictly my oppinion.
This is kinda movie or game music. I guess this probably won't go to too much labels' attention, but a game could take it. Try that field.
I like the end, and I think that you should add a little snap to the snare. but again, THAT'Z MY OPPINION
Overall rating: 3,5/5
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22-02-2005 17:54 |
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DRUM FORCE
Producer
Registration Date: 28-10-2003
Posts: 12
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well muad, OK i`ll change my nick name
hahaha
...and guys, thanks for the reviews
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23-02-2005 00:19 |
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fogboy
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Registration Date: 13-01-2005
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nice happy intro i like it nice drums
don't really like the vocal in break down girl has annoying voice
drop is cool nice liquidy tune
nice clear sounds i don't think a tune like this needs more variatons either espiecially if you have it in the mix
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02-03-2005 11:01 |
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Surya
The Robot
Registration Date: 04-11-2002
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Boost them drums a lil
Quite nice sounds and melodies, but everythings sooo smooth, try making it a bit less smooth here and there, give it a slightly rough touch, to spice things up
Nice chill track, but a bit too smooth for my taste
2.5/5 for the track
2.5/5 for the sound
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14-03-2005 14:25 |
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janverstichel
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Registration Date: 10-11-2004
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nice sounds like them but the melody gets a bit bored
the beat is good nothing bad about it in my opingnon
vocal sopund kool but i dind't feel rthe drop
surya is right about the smoothness
3/5
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14-03-2005 15:53 |
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