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Sensa 
Wicked Producer
Registration Date: 14-01-2004
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Please check out my new track 'Abortion' and post your comments here!!!
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Email: sensa@revoltagerecordings.com
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15-02-2005 13:53 |
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Capsacium
Producer
Registration Date: 11-02-2005
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Wow, creepy subject. Sounds like it's coming along well. From about 1'30 to 3'00 it breaks too often to really get into the groove. And there's several really sudden breaks. THat's not nessesarily a bad thing but if it's gonna drop like that there should be some kind of build or change for effect.
As far as inspiration goes there is one thing that pops into my head. At 1'09 there's this metal drumsound (im guessing). It sounds pretty cool. I heard it subtley a few times through out. It sounds like one of those samples you can toy with to add something new.
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15-02-2005 20:48 |
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Muad'Dib
Andrejnalin
Registration Date: 02-12-2003
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Wow, good begining, spooky one. 
I like the talking, though I don't understand half of it 
it juz gives good atmo.
The start of the beat is cool, with that single kick etc... Maybe the beat needs more hi end, because I can't hear the hats.
Wow, love the bass line! What a trancey bass, man!
The beat can be better. Try adding another kick or something, this is the regular kick-snare combination which gets fast boring. The snare could use a snap, try adding another one over with more snap. It is a bit punchy like this, but needs a hiend boost.
Wow, good compression! I kinda don't like the click sound in the kick, but that's your personal choice, so I leave it to ya.
Abruptly stops at 03:37. Too narrow, try following with some lead lines or sumthing. Kool conversation.
I knew I'd love it.
The bass is good, and the line of the melody is ok, but there is no sub!
The thing with that snare which gets more power, I think is little too loud, because it kills the compression by lowering all other sounds... or maybe because it is not EQed ok... I don' know.
I like the story thing in your tune. I mean, the story which drives the tune, how it connects with the name... maybe a little dull name for a tune, right?
Ahhh, nevermind, well done! Quality tune, a bit repetative and that's why it earns a but less points.
Suggestions? Try using a sub with similar melody, and lead lines, something like a reece or sumthing. I don't know. It should break the repetetivness of the tune, which strikes at a moment or two.
Well done man! 
3,75/5
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15-02-2005 22:50 |
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Surora23
Agressive Melodic Disorder
Registration Date: 05-07-2004
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cool intro...nice drums!!!!!!!!!!!! hell yea!.....nice reece line...i was a little disapointed in the drums on the drop...i was waiting for some wicked amens or soemthing...sound is relaly good...just a lil repetetive...seconds drop cool...but those extra snare hits are really un neccisary...make those drums moer active...there isnt enough hi end like muaddib said...very cool melody all teh way through...this is good stuff...jstu some minor things here and this is top notch
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Rinse it OUT!!!! 
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16-02-2005 02:18 |
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83 HITS AND ONLY FOUR REVIEWS!!!!......PEOPLE GETTIN LAZY!!
sounds like theres some passion behind this....sinister vibe, good tune...could do with a day in a well equipped studuio though....run through some valves before recording.....dont like the way it suddenly cuts to second break though....man that sample is dark..."u were not there when i need u" and all that...hope its legal!!! sounds like its from tv..... that snare layer at harder velocity sounds poor, lose it!! apart from that ...id probably play it out if you changed the intro pad to a higher quality sound..
4/5 tune
3/5 sound....
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21-02-2005 19:05 |
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Soi
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Registration Date: 29-01-2003
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Ok, a varied track, which is good.
Don't like the intro-ambient pads... too normal, too preset-wise
Beat is awesome, like the delays on the cymbal
Main lead comes in: ok, but simple, layer it with some sounds.
Drop: hmmm, the first 4 or 8 bars there is one snare sounding way louder than the rest...
suggestions:
Snares more crispy?
Kicks more snappy?
use some variation in melody, kinda like chorus/verse
cheerz
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23-02-2005 15:33 |
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Halph-Price
Zombie Algorithm
Registration Date: 22-12-2004
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you know what, i though the same thing with thoes pads, There overdone, but that's genere spaning.
in this song, they work, so (thumbs up) let's not make this any more personal than it should be, he likes em. you gotta use it.
sounds like you got a delay on the snare or something. make it sound like one hit. it has a slight flan , like there's a ghost snare right after. maybe it's a high hat or the sample, but it would help to cut it.
best to use a different snare for the drops, and other parts....
that bassline solol at 4.14, ya you did it before, but make that a variation, you cannot do a direct coppy.
the second drop, you got snare volume problem, maybe trying to make it stand out with a big hit, maybe not, but layer it with another snare to make it beefer, don't hit the volume up button.
wow, after that second drop, that is a nice bassline 
alla in all, pretty sick song.
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09-03-2005 06:08 |
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Surya
The Robot
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Nice theme you start with, OK drums (bit less reverb on the snare, and as Soi pointed out: a bit more high end to it).
Bassline is OK, nice sub going on. Maybe boost the bass (not the sub) a bit?
4.33 and later: whats up with the too loud snare?
Switches in the theme are nice, but since they are quite similar, the whole track sounds like a bit too much of the same the whole time, despite the changes.
2.5 for the track
2.25 for the sound and levels
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09-03-2005 15:54 |
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