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Surora23 
Agressive Melodic Disorder
Registration Date: 05-07-2004
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Please check out my new track 'Oasis (Abandoned City) Final Mix' and post your comments here!!!
This is the final version...I may do some personal touch ups, cause i never post my actualy polished work on here...BUT I chantged the lead sound...I agree 100% before that it was annoying, and needed to be changed...The Lead is now a chrousy lead that is MUCH less annoying and fits the track much better...i also chagned, and added a few extra drums hits... ALL DRUMS in this track were PROGRAMMED BY MYSELF<< something im proud of, cause im so anal about them...The idea behind the track is to have a good almsot easy going roller for the end of the night or end of a set...There are a lot ofthings behind the track as far as story wise, but i wont bore all of you with the dumb details...ask me if you really want to know :P
Again made with:
FL.5 (prod. edition)
Albino2
Sytrus
Vangaurd
and Infinity samples...
Props to everyone...This site has progressed me further than i wouldve ever expected...ENJOY!
This track has been deleted on the producer's request
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12-02-2005 23:45 |
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broadside
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a story line behind a dnb song? 
this i must hear.
(oh and as usual badboy tune there. my drum and bass cup of tea entirely. cannot believe you programmed the beats yourself etc etc)
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13-02-2005 04:16 |
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fogboy
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love the first break
that reece sound is a bit better
i still dont think that sound fully suits the tune tho
too deep and evil for such happy techy sounds in intro
this tune could b massive
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13-02-2005 05:02 |
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Surora23
Agressive Melodic Disorder
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long story short...its for my girl 
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13-02-2005 06:49 |
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Phoenix
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This post has been edited 1 time(s), it was last edited by Phoenix: 04-12-2005 03:08.
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14-02-2005 03:48 |
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Surora23
Agressive Melodic Disorder
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anymore comments guys ?
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17-02-2005 20:08 |
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Surya
The Robot
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Nice harp sound, melody is a bit too happy.
Not too fond of low saw pad. Sounds a bit messy.
Trance arps: nicely done, but too trancey for my taste.
Drums: Quite nice, but they need a boost, they're completely overpowered by the leadsound.
Leadsound: Quite good, but it doesn't blend with your bassline.
Imo it's just not a good idear to use that kind of patch as a bassline. Dunno, just too messy.
So overall your sound is quite messy and noisy, drums lack power. Some nice melodies though. A bit too long too imo.
2.25/5 for the track.
1.75/5 for the sound
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"In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
- Pieter Frenssen 2004
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24-02-2005 16:26 |
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Surora23
Agressive Melodic Disorder
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totally agree
thanks for the comment...much appreciation!
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25-02-2005 18:55 |
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Art.Love
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Registration Date: 22-01-2005
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nice trance atmosphear, synths are cool, but i didn't like bass for 1:35, i think that it damages the whole track, also track is very monotonous, drumz iz nice and
intereresting, but need in power and more strong, to compress better, add distortion, and finally 8 minutes -so monotonous , so bored , it's necessary to dilute track, more synths, effects, intro, work it on crossing more 
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