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Stutterstep
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Registration Date: 27-01-2005
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Please check out my new track 'Journey Man' and post your comments here!!!
Check out my lastest track, let me know what you think, be honest!! Thanks
Stutterstep
I did this in logic pro
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11-02-2005 23:15 |
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Surora23 
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this was avery interesting listen...although im thouroughly confused...i personally dont like the bassline cause it doesnt do much...taht rave synth gets on my nerves...you need to work on your breaks dude...they seem to have little to no structure on them...
good sound...but in all honest due to personal taste the track is so random...and makes no sense music wise...imo ofcourse...
3/5sound
1/5 track
2/5 overall
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11-02-2005 23:49 |
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Stutterstep
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thanks for the reply surora,
im not sure i understand what you mean, stucture on my drums, what would make this track better
thanks stutterstep
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12-02-2005 00:02 |
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stickbubbly
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i liked the melody in the intro. nice sounds.
drop is interesting.
snare is nice but the kick seems a bit soft.
nice lead
wasnt really diggen the change at around 3 min but the main melody of the song is cool.(could use a few more variations to keep you interested.)
nice one! keep em commin! 
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12-02-2005 00:25 |
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Surora23
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it sounds like youre trying to program clownstep kind of breaks...but got soemthign different...its not bad...jsut not my taste..try using ghost snares in the middle of initial snare hits...the style of the track just isnt my style...tahts why i dont like it...not because its bad production 
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12-02-2005 00:26 |
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fogboy
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cool intro and build up
drums sound bit different
you definitly need some ghost notes in there
snares get annoying after a while they seem to over power the tune
love the bit after 3 min but snares start getting annoying after a while again well made tune
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12-02-2005 23:28 |
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thefunke1
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Really nice intro, like the bongos in the back. Really like the idea, and the lead is a nice sound, the bass is a different, kind a reverse roll. The drops need a little work, a little more precense and a little variation needed in the main theme.
Interersting tune, keep'em comin'!!!!
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13-02-2005 16:33 |
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Surya
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Hmmm, not too fond of the intro... Nice atmos though...
Ah, nice hooverish thing coming in: quite allright.
Drop: quite good, with the sub and all, but the drums need some work, especially the snares. Get some ghosthits in there and try not putting a snare on almost every beat unless it's a ghosts. Gives a static feel
Try getting more groove in the sub line though, it's a bit static now.
Some intresting idears, but the execution is a bit flawed
1.66 for the track
2.5/5 for the sound
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26-02-2005 14:01 |
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daze_DND
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hmm...this is my first shot at this her. here it goes...
Like the intro sounds,keys and fx (only that hardcore stab is a bit weird imo).percussion roll pitched up is very nice too.
then the breakdowndrop:
good ravy lead comming in. good base (maybe a bit louder in the mix imo)....don't really like the beat and it's 'hook'...doesn't quit roll imo. snare on every beat is a no go imo.work on yr beats...ghost snares as suggested work wonders for a beat-groove.
this is a very buzy tune imo...(to) much stuff happening. i like yr choice in sounds very much, only work more on their balance in the mix (example: vocals r a bit to much 'in the back'). overall sound is pretty good.
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26-02-2005 14:59 |
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kareem
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Disturbing intro very tense!
Weird drop, not really my style.
Don't like the snare.That ravelike sound really gets annoying.You used soundz that don't fit the track IMO.
Track needs more action and power.
3/5
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27-02-2005 23:55 |
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Halph-Price
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the drums are kinda cool, in how there very stopa dn go. it could be used in a cool way, if used sparingly.
i like them. i don't knoww hat everyone esle is saying. it add's a unique sound to the track.
but you got swing drums, and the rave-liek synth, the hooverish, should swing with the drums. at the same off-time signature, rhytem they have set.
it's not the odd rhythem drums are bad, it's just the track is not bouncing with it. you have a dead on beat song, with swinging drums.
drum's rhythem set the song. if you go against it, it sounds off.
the song sounds good, till the drums can in, and conflict.
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28-02-2005 14:39 |
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Sykotic
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Strange abstract intro pulls together instantly when the bass line come in. Track may need a little EQing/level adjustments. Abstract beat and erie sounds accompanied by a hot synth lead sound.
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12-05-2005 23:36 |
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Nosrac
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Great intro - the main synth lne is wicked and the sub is deadly when it comes pounding in - nice!! Whole intro and drop sounds really professional. The drums after the drop could be brought up a bit and the snare and hats could use a bit more of bite to them. As the track progresses it loses focus a bit, but some really cool elements (like the pitched up bongos?) Nice track overall, with a deadly intro and drop - a solid 7/10. Waiting for some of your new stuff bro.
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13-05-2005 04:16 |
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equipped
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Interesting track man, totally diggin that intro! 
Synth's are a bit dry for my taste, maybe add a small bit of reverb. Structure and level's are to a tee. 2:41 is phat man.
Some cool synth sound's and editing at 2:57!! Yeah man this really sound's like a complete tune. Lot's of work put into this. Bass could use some off beat to give the drum's more swing.
Vocal samples sound good, nice bongo's at the very end, could hardly hear them throughout the track 
, maybe turn them up a bit!! Nice work Stutter!
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