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Surora23 
Agressive Melodic Disorder
Registration Date: 05-07-2004
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Please check out my new track 'Oasis (abondonded city)' and post your comments here!!!
This is a track ive been working on for the past couple days...there really isnt a lot to it, other than some nasty reece, sliding sub, and some trancey melodies here and there...
The track is still in progress...In a couple weeks are so it will extremely complex, but as of now this is the stages its in...
Made with: FL5, Albino, Vangaurd, Delta Force, and some samples from the Infinity PACK...
...Please leave comments and rate thread...THANKS! AND ENJOY!
EDIT BY SURYA: New version here
This track has been deleted because a new version is available
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11-02-2005 22:40 |
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Stutterstep
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Nice track, The prodution is amazing, That sub pad is wicked. I like the trancey melody but i think it comes in to suddenly, maybe filter it in. The main sound is a little week. i think the sub doesn't match up with it. I'm looking forward to the finished track. Respect!!!
Check out my new track Jouney man
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11-02-2005 23:52 |
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Retroshift
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Registration Date: 31-10-2003
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Nice track 
Ur going the B-compway, trancy dnb, which i like alot. Gets me moving, altho it could use some more variation i think. The synth buildup at 0.52: good job 
Cheers
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12-02-2005 01:48 |
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wreakon
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I really like the track until that bass came in @ 1:35.. it doesnt seem to suit the track and it just desnt sound good to me at all
apart from that i like it and sound quality is nice as usual
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12-02-2005 09:27 |
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Rude
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Originally posted by reckon
I really like the track until that bass came in @ 1:35.. it doesnt seem to suit the track and it just desnt sound good to me at all
apart from that i like it and sound quality is nice as usual |
indead, from 1:35 it's bit messy
and again not my style, I like it loud.
still listening to it, don't know what to say more,
on 04:26 it's kinda.. cool? but still messy
nope, don't know what to say more.
see ya
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12-02-2005 13:36 |
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Surora23
Agressive Melodic Disorder
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yea the reece that i was using i dont like either...it is going to change...infact already has...again the track is in progress ive only spent a few hours each day working on it...so its no where near done...tahnks!
anymore comments suggestions?
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12-02-2005 21:12 |
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fogboy
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cool intro sound real techy
that bass sound is wrong doesent suit tune at all
everything else in this tune is mint just that annoying sound i don't like it
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12-02-2005 23:32 |
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Surora23
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Originally posted by fogboy
cool intro sound real techy
that bass sound is wrong doesent suit tune at all
everything else in this tune is mint just that annoying sound i don't like it |
yea i totally agree...im about to uplaod my finisted version now...the lead is much ebtter... cheers!
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12-02-2005 23:35 |
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Surora23
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