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Rude 
I'm gonna get you
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Please check out my new track 'Escape from the future' and post your comments here!!!
Ok, this one was not that easy.
I've searched over 200000 samples to get the right sound. I've spent alot of time on this one, hope you'll enjoy it. The problem is that my comp. is totally f-ed up and I can't make a good song without crashing. So, I've puut alot of time in this. See ya
edit by thechronic:
This track has been deleted on Rude's request.
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11-02-2005 14:55 |
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marine289
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Intro is a bit weird. Melody's just a bit too much i guess, too complex. Beat is good, I assume you used a loop, but you chopped it nice a few times.
Dont really like the claps.
Suddenly a silence... 
Also a bit strange, make a cool effect at the beginning of it.
Beat coming in after that is good, is that a loop or did you make it yourself?? good job if you made it yourself 
Dont really like the bass... I mean both the sound and the melody.
Some sort of synthmelody coming in. Sounds cool!
Overall I find the track a bit boring sometimes. There are enough elements in the track, but I guess there's not enough variation. I mean: you only made one or two patterns for each instrument I guess.
You still have a lot to learn, but this song is definitely way better then your first!
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11-02-2005 16:42 |
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Rude
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Originally posted by marine289
Intro is a bit weird. Melody's just a bit too much i guess, too complex. Beat is good, I assume you used a loop, but you chopped it nice a few times.
Dont really like the claps.
Suddenly a silence...
Also a bit strange, make a cool effect at the beginning of it.
Beat coming in after that is good, is that a loop or did you make it yourself?? good job if you made it yourself
Dont really like the bass... I mean both the sound and the melody.
Some sort of synthmelody coming in. Sounds cool!
Overall I find the track a bit boring sometimes. There are enough elements in the track, but I guess there's not enough variation. I mean: you only made one or two patterns for each instrument I guess.
You still have a lot to learn, but this song is definitely way better then your first!
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"Suddenly a silence...
" it's not a silence, listen to it again, you'll see that it's a heavy bassdrop
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11-02-2005 17:12 |
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Rude
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over 70 hits and only 2 reviews posted
(I mean, those 2 reviews and mine)
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11-02-2005 20:47 |
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Surya
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Originally posted by Rude
over 70 hits and only 2 reviews posted
(I mean, those 2 reviews and mine) |
You shouldn't expect 5 reviews in the first day... Give it some time 
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11-02-2005 21:00 |
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Surora23
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ehhhhhhhhhh that intro synth is the most anoying thing ive ever heard...egh...the breaks are cool though...i dont know abotu that clap...ive heard it done by a very famous group...they put out a track called The Warewolf or somet shit...crazy track...those acid sounds dont remotelyt fit waht so ever...not to mention this track is extrememly slow...it sounds as if its at 165 or soemthing...i just cant see this track going anywhere...everything is so random...nothing has order...the sounds was really good...but as far as the track goes...it blows...sorry? 
this is a good improvement though compared to your first tracks...BELIEVE ME ON THAT ONE!
1/5 track
3/5 sounds
2/overal
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Rinse it OUT!!!! 
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11-02-2005 22:06 |
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marine289
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Originally posted by Rude
over 70 hits and only 2 reviews posted
(I mean, those 2 reviews and mine) |
Happens all the time... Most people wont review
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12-02-2005 01:13 |
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Rude
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Originally posted by Surora23
ehhhhhhhhhh that intro synth is the most anoying thing ive ever heard...egh...the breaks are cool though...i dont know abotu that clap...ive heard it done by a very famous group...they put out a track called The Warewolf or somet shit...crazy track...those acid sounds dont remotelyt fit waht so ever...not to mention this track is extrememly slow...it sounds as if its at 165 or soemthing...i just cant see this track going anywhere...everything is so random...nothing has order...the sounds was really good...but as far as the track goes...it blows...sorry?
this is a good improvement though compared to your first tracks...BELIEVE ME ON THAT ONE!
1/5 track
3/5 sounds
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"this is a good improvement though compared to your first tracks...BELIEVE ME ON THAT ONE!"
---> duh
and the claps: famous group ej?
I don't like famous groups, i just made it and put it in the song dude,
there's nothing in it from famous groups
see ya
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12-02-2005 13:08 |
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Halph-Price
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yea you need to keep different tracks going at the same time to give a climax, thats how you build to it, by having a bunch of instrments playing at the same time. you seem to go against that and make it so their's only one instrument going at a time.
if you have the same instruemtn going in a loop, and then add another, the mind forgets the boring instrument, and focus instead on the new sound. this only works if you have introduced one of the instruments. that little bassline afte rthe big bass drop would have been cool to have play during the guitar pad, thingy..... or even to have drumms going during the big bass drop or something....
keep it feeling more full, since you have no sample, you can have more instruments going. if you had a vocal going during the song it probably could mask thoes empty parts.
you do vocals i hear, but there more of just background noises than a lead vocal. just to clarifiy. i didn't even notice it till after that was talking. so it really is a far back sound.
umm, i can't tihnk that straight, but i hope i got my point across. you got a cool lead sound after the beging, and a good intro sound, even if it is annoying you don't want it to be the sound they want to hear more, it's just the intro.
the claps are funny, they stick out int he song sorly. the rest is smooth, thoes are harsh.
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This post has been edited 1 time(s), it was last edited by Halph-Price: 05-04-2005 05:16.
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12-02-2005 21:53 |
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Surora23
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12-02-2005 23:27 |
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Rude
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come on, just review this sucker
see ya
(rate it too please)
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14-02-2005 20:47 |
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Surya
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Intro sound is quite annoying to me... Cuts away quite abruptly too.
Claps are a bit too all over and up front. Breakbeat is quite nice though.
Nice 303ing. Quite punchy beakbeat coming in. Give it a bit more low-end though.
Awtch, 4-4 
Luckely it's only a short part
Dunno, not too fond of your choice of sounds man...
1.5/5 for the track
2/5 for the sound, lacking in the low end
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