camo 
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Registration Date: 22-12-2004
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Please check out my new track 'runaway' and post your comments here!!!
Hi! I worked the whole last night on this track, and now i got ill:( but it was worth it:) its a softer tune with some lovely vocals. I ve made it with reason 2.5 and Fl4 Studio.
please listen to this and tell me what u think!
thx!
peace!
Edit by Surya: New version here
This track has been deleted on the producer's request
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11-02-2005 11:25 |
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additive
DROP IT!
Registration Date: 09-02-2005
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oh madd vocals! good choice man and the intro is working nicely. drops a bit sudden, but it's fat and nicely produced...
there seems to be some 16th notes missing, and maybe that bass is a little strong in the higher notes...
where you go into half-time i'd recommend some variation in velocity in the drums...
nice vocal breakdown in the middle; could use some reinforcing with something running in the background..
what would happen if you resampled that whole track a little higher.. ur hats a working a bit better at 5 mins than the first drop, but it didn' last long enough... it sounds really good man. heaps of potential. love the noise over the vocal sample!
nice track.. 3.8/5
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11-02-2005 12:14 |
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Capsacium
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I really liked the chords, gave it a nice lounge jazz feel. I also liked the breaks with the drum tempo dropping, that sounds hot. The vovals got a bit too repetitive for my taste. I'd give'em more frequent rest or some more intense variation. It sounded pretty nice when the vox dropped back alot and formed some of the melody, playing around with that might get you some more cool sounds. I think you should do a little something more to the bass, it sounds a bit flat. It could use some touch up work but over all nice tune 
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11-02-2005 12:29 |
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Rude
I'm gonna get you
Registration Date: 06-01-2005
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damn I just hate jazz 
but then again, when I hear this song, nice..
awfull irritating sax-thing..
not my style, but still nice.
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12-02-2005 13:29 |
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fogboy
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Registration Date: 13-01-2005
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like the vocals dont like the pitched bit tho
fuckin sick tune man drop comes out of nowhere
really love bass cool ambience sounds and those piano bits. vocals get bit 2 repetitive after a while
i like really like this tune just not the slowed pitch bits 
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12-02-2005 23:52 |
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camo
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Registration Date: 22-12-2004
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Thanks for all yall comments!
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13-02-2005 00:25 |
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Surya
The Robot
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What annoys me in this track is the vocals being pitched down, sounds wrong imo...
Nice chill tune though, quite good structure, enough variations, quite good sound, although the vocal is a bit too loud.
2.25/5, too bad about the vocal
2.5/5 for the sound
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