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fogboy fogboy is a male
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Please check out my new track 'fuck you' and post your comments here!!!

made this track today just playin round with breaks really sorry i havent been reviewing anyones tunes for a while just moved from nz to australia is anyone here in the brisbane gold coast area keen 2 hook up for mix message me
10-02-2005 14:13
camo camo is a male
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Hi! oh, this track is not so my style. the hard bas is too loud i think, the wobble bass is ok. the hi hats doesnt fit on the amens! There should be a lot more variation in the bassline and some ambient elements......
the intro is way cool......

1.7 for this one.

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10-02-2005 15:45
additive additive is a male
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hey man that's really average. it sounds like you're being a bit lazy on how it sounds or you're producing it on a sanyo tapedeck...
it doesn't flow at all, and i honestly dont think one line works with another at any point in the track. it sounded like a screwdriver in my ear.
keep at it man

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10-02-2005 20:30 Homepage of additive
stickbubbly stickbubbly is a male
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very cool sounds.i like the wonky stuff. amens sound clean.
melody needs work. it changes around a bit too much later in the song.
really nice work choppin up the beat.
intro is solid but i didt really feel the drop. the melody is just too srange for me.

cheers. keep em commin!
10-02-2005 22:00
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Great intro, love the strings, reminds me of a very old tune, but can't put my finger on it....
Nice Amen, although the cutting needs to be a little cleaner in the intro portion, although nice once it's in fully. Very dark bass line, a little too deep for myself.
Nice track, although the melody needs a little work, and a nice atmosphere in the back to flow with the drums would be great, mabey bring the strings from the intro more into the melody of the track?? just a thought.

2/5

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11-02-2005 01:18 Homepage of thefunke1
Capsacium Capsacium is a male
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The drumz'R hot, and I was diggin the first bass line (the wobble sounding one). The intro was stretched out a bit too much and that second bass line just absolutely did not fit. I think if you focused on the wobble bass and the drumz you'd have a smoother tune. A tune like this can afford some repetition. I'd most def' just get rid of that second bass, or at least turn it down considerably, it's very obtrusive. I liked your breaks alot. THere's potential for a hot classic sound here, but I think it needs alot of reworking.
11-02-2005 14:19
Rude Rude is a male
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indead, fuck you! It was probably the best title you could find with this song.
Bad tune, don't like this at all .
Sorry dude

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11-02-2005 18:44 Homepage of Rude
fogboy fogboy is a male
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yeah it's far from completion i'll get rid of the other bassline work on other suggestions thanks for the reviews guys
12-02-2005 23:55
Surora23 Surora23 is a male
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the intro was cool...like the drums...after that it got boring as all get out...lo siento mate...good idea...but then it got a lil too square pusher'y for my tatse, and it wasnt done very well...

2/5

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13-02-2005 01:21
Surya Surya is a male
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Intro, nice pads
Cool wobble.

Ah, amen teasers, nice. Maybe layer a nice crisp ride over it?

Drop: nice amen edits, but having a sub drop together with the amen would be nice to add more impact.

Hmmm, basslineteasers. Not sure about those: sound isn't convincing and the melody sounds like you were out of inspiration. It's also too loud, overpowers the wobble.

Hoover like thing is ok, but not loud enough.

Overall: sub is missing, nice amen edits, but sound needs some work and it gets a bit repetetive.

1.75/5 for the track
1.75/5 for the sound

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15-02-2005 14:41 Homepage of Surya
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