fogboy
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Registration Date: 13-01-2005
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Please check out my new track 'fuck you' and post your comments here!!!
made this track today just playin round with breaks really sorry i havent been reviewing anyones tunes for a while just moved from nz to australia is anyone here in the brisbane gold coast area keen 2 hook up for mix message me
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10-02-2005 14:13 |
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camo
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Registration Date: 22-12-2004
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Hi! oh, this track is not so my style. the hard bas is too loud i think, the wobble bass is ok. the hi hats doesnt fit on the amens! There should be a lot more variation in the bassline and some ambient elements......
the intro is way cool......
1.7 for this one.
peace
__ keepin it rollin`
www.myspace.com/camopdj
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10-02-2005 15:45 |
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additive
DROP IT!
 

Registration Date: 09-02-2005
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10-02-2005 20:30 |
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stickbubbly
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Registration Date: 16-09-2004
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very cool sounds.i like the wonky stuff. amens sound clean.
melody needs work. it changes around a bit too much later in the song.
really nice work choppin up the beat.
intro is solid but i didt really feel the drop. the melody is just too srange for me.
cheers. keep em commin!
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10-02-2005 22:00 |
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thefunke1
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Registration Date: 09-12-2004
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Great intro, love the strings, reminds me of a very old tune, but can't put my finger on it....
Nice Amen, although the cutting needs to be a little cleaner in the intro portion, although nice once it's in fully. Very dark bass line, a little too deep for myself.
Nice track, although the melody needs a little work, and a nice atmosphere in the back to flow with the drums would be great, mabey bring the strings from the intro more into the melody of the track?? just a thought.
2/5
__ www.acidplanet.com
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11-02-2005 01:18 |
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Capsacium
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Registration Date: 11-02-2005
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The drumz'R hot, and I was diggin the first bass line (the wobble sounding one). The intro was stretched out a bit too much and that second bass line just absolutely did not fit. I think if you focused on the wobble bass and the drumz you'd have a smoother tune. A tune like this can afford some repetition. I'd most def' just get rid of that second bass, or at least turn it down considerably, it's very obtrusive. I liked your breaks alot. THere's potential for a hot classic sound here, but I think it needs alot of reworking.
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11-02-2005 14:19 |
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Rude
I'm gonna get you
  

Registration Date: 06-01-2005
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indead, fuck you! It was probably the best title you could find with this song.
Bad tune, don't like this at all .
Sorry dude
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11-02-2005 18:44 |
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fogboy
fog

Registration Date: 13-01-2005
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yeah it's far from completion i'll get rid of the other bassline work on other suggestions thanks for the reviews guys
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12-02-2005 23:55 |
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Surora23
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Registration Date: 05-07-2004
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the intro was cool...like the drums...after that it got boring as all get out...lo siento mate...good idea...but then it got a lil too square pusher'y for my tatse, and it wasnt done very well...
2/5
__ Rinse it OUT!!!!

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13-02-2005 01:21 |
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Surya
The Robot

Registration Date: 04-11-2002
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Intro, nice pads
Cool wobble.
Ah, amen teasers, nice. Maybe layer a nice crisp ride over it?
Drop: nice amen edits, but having a sub drop together with the amen would be nice to add more impact.
Hmmm, basslineteasers. Not sure about those: sound isn't convincing and the melody sounds like you were out of inspiration. It's also too loud, overpowers the wobble.
Hoover like thing is ok, but not loud enough.
Overall: sub is missing, nice amen edits, but sound needs some work and it gets a bit repetetive.
1.75/5 for the track
1.75/5 for the sound
__ "In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
- Pieter Frenssen 2004

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15-02-2005 14:41 |
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