wreakon 
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Please check out my new track 'The Langoliers' and post your comments here!!!
um... just have a listen :)
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09-02-2005 14:43 |
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Surya
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Intro is ok, but the second melody is completely out of key with the first one! It's godawfull!
Drop: bassline is cool, but needs louder mid. Sub is a bit overpowering. Tramen: nice, but lacks punch. Boost the low and low mid parts.
Some nice things, but the out of keyness of the melody is really annoying. Also, the melodies are a bit too much all over. Would be nice to have some beats + bass only parts.
1.75/5 for the track
2/5 for the sound
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09-02-2005 17:56 |
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wreakon
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bugger i didnt notice the "out of keyness" 
thanks for another nice review Surya
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09-02-2005 23:52 |
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camo
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Hi!
ohhh, amen cuts inna house!
intro is cool with the silent bassline, a bit long?
Yes now it drops: Cool: more bass powa! and a funny flute
I like it!
Overall there could be more variation i think...
but nice tune
peace
3/5
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10-02-2005 12:40 |
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additive
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10-02-2005 20:54 |
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stickbubbly
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didnt really feel the intro but the build up to the drop and the drop itself
were really cool. wicked melody after the drop! i like that high pitch noise in the background, reminds me of and old horror movie or somthing. the pads sounded a bit too nintendo-ish (if that makes any sense)
i liked this track, enjoyed the melody but the intro could use some more work.
cheers!
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10-02-2005 22:12 |
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thefunke1
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Interesting intro, is it a looped sample, or sampel loaded on a sampler? sounds familiar... anyway, the amen's are really nice, not to big in the new sound brought in at 2:37... just personal though... nice break at 3:20, liken it!! bass drum needs a little more presence, to compete with the cymbals and stuff.
nice track though reckon/fogboy
3/5
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11-02-2005 01:26 |
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wreakon
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ta thefunke1
the intro is factory preset from absynth... fogboy didnt help on this one.. i just logged in as him by accident
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11-02-2005 04:13 |
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Capsacium
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Guess I'm not real "Key sensitive" I didn't notice that. But I will say that the video game sounding pad or chord or whatever it is, isn't powerful enough to be the focus of this tune. Watch the levels a bit more on the mix, sometime subtle is better.
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11-02-2005 14:39 |
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Phoenix
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This post has been edited 1 time(s), it was last edited by Phoenix: 04-12-2005 03:08.
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14-02-2005 03:56 |
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Halph-Price
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Originally posted by reckon
bugger i didnt notice the "out of keyness"
thanks for another nice review Surya |
out of keyness can add disharmic value to a song, it can be good for a dark song, in fact it's the only way a song sounds dark. it's the elemnt that makes it uneasy.
this is a great song, i like it a lot. don't kow how to critque it.
maybe cut the pad's druing the drop, get a solid tone going, instead of a progressive pad movineg about.
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