broadside 
mentalist
Registration Date: 17-01-2005
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Please check out my new track 'Blood Ninjas' and post your comments here!!!
Well, I know the production is very amateur, but not much I can do about that till I get reason. Let us know what you think anway.
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06-02-2005 16:55 |
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muphasta
Master Producer
Registration Date: 29-06-2004
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ideas and theme for the intro are good.nice experimental. but the high synth sound not my fav. the bass sounds quite good nice layer in it. then that high synth again put more effect over it . then probably the most important thing is the snare. it needs a loud expressive intruiging snare. the 1 u use later in the song is a bit too sharp cut the high ends a bit. some variations in hats could work too i think. some rides perhaps. it needs some variations in sounds too. like using this as main theme but then cut the 8th or 16 th step to use something complete different. those vocal effects are quite nice so let them return more often. use some break loops as well now and then. brighten up the snare and hats part they sound a bit like a phone and too background. work on it some more i 'dd say.
2/5
sorry
cheers
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muphasta none dnb
www.myspace.com/muphsugar
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06-02-2005 17:37 |
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yeah..good concept but the spoken samples are really low quality....sound like they were recorded of a bad quality video, beats need to higher in the mix.....dont take this the wrong way either...reason is good but youll never get a totally pro sound on its own, its best to get hold of cubase sx or something else you can rewire reason into if you can, and try and find some decent plug ins .i know their expensive if you buy 'em but you get what you pay for
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06-02-2005 19:42 |
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camo
Wicked Producer
Registration Date: 22-12-2004
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Hi! Vocals are too loud and appear to surprising. The bassline is too loud for da drumloop. and the second bass is not so cool. oh,3.44, the drumloop gets louder, too loud! you have to find a middle betwenn the 2 levels! Just play with your tracks and learn to listen
Keep on' producin
greetz, camo
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keepin it rollin`
www.myspace.com/camopdj
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07-02-2005 17:24 |
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kaliyuga
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Registration Date: 15-12-2004
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wried stero at start bit to 80s samples well dull, whole sound needs mixing better. shit break , shit kick in shit lead noise. try again and this time focus.
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08-02-2005 01:32 |
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Surya
The Robot
Registration Date: 04-11-2002
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Introhat could use more hi-end, it sounds very lowfi
Why are those old samples hard right? Not a good idear
Drop: Booming kick, but where's the snare?
Bassline is a VERY standard sound, and way too digital sounding. Distortion man! And give it some decent low-end
Overall, your sounds and melodies are quite unintresting, and the structure has very little buildup/release.
Sometimes it seems like there is a gap in the music that is just a bit too long, like at 4.11
So, you know this is amateuristic, so I don't have to repeat that. Try giving your drums more drive by using more intresting snares, adding ghostsnares and paying more attention to the hats. For the basslines: make them sound more natural, less synthetic.
1/5 for the track
2/5 for the sound
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"In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
- Pieter Frenssen 2004
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08-02-2005 12:25 |
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tetsuo
Guiness factory
Registration Date: 26-12-2004
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Interesting ideas, seems u got some kind of structure which is good, now u probably need to work on the mastering part and on your sound making, 2 of the thing that come with time i guess, keep at it 
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08-02-2005 16:08 |
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tracassasin
Cool Producer
Registration Date: 08-02-2005
Posts: 186
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lol its nice maybe its me but something sounds offbeat by a hair or someshit i know what he means about it sounding amateur its not "clean" sounding but thats how some of my shit is cus i dont know how to really clean it up!
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08-02-2005 23:08 |
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Halph-Price
Zombie Algorithm
Registration Date: 22-12-2004
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trippy start man.
cool reece. i like the beat. wow, this si some cool shit, when the reece starts to fade in and out like that.
i like the variation in it, it's trippin'. this is a wicked track. just want the beats to sound a bit more aggressive, liek that bass kick. the snare i guess.
NO, NOT A FADE
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
you fade out the end, YOU FOOL! 
NEVER DO THAT! NEVER, THAT'S ONLY FOR POP TRACKS, who's writers CANNOT THINK OF AN ENDING!
you can, you jsut end it on the last beat. THAt'S IT NIGGA!
oh well, good song, i thought it was pretty ill.
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