camo 
Wicked Producer
Registration Date: 22-12-2004
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Please check out my new track 'jump up' and post your comments here!!!
Hi! This is my first track ive bundled those bigbadbasspowa without using cutted samples.
This tune is made with reason2.0 and some dark jungle refills.
Pleaze listen to it, and write a comment. Tell me what u think!
greetz!
This track has been deleted on the producer's request
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keepin it rollin`
www.myspace.com/camopdj
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06-02-2005 13:13 |
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broadside
mentalist
Registration Date: 17-01-2005
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Start is atmospheric and the sounds are all really good. Beat is nice - if you made it yourself - and theres a lot going on with the bass. But cant really say I enjoy the melody much, really doesnt make me want to jump at all, bit random, but thats a style thing.
Far better than my shit, but not really my bag nonetheless.
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06-02-2005 17:13 |
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muphasta
Master Producer
Registration Date: 29-06-2004
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verry nice intro. waw man twisted. beats are bitt dull and sound about 5 feet further. sound gets a bit irritating a bit too much of the goodie imo. subbass needed verry much and some other sounds. you cant trust the song to carry itself with just these sounds the high synth sound later in the song should be used earlier too. play with the beats some more and if you cant get the sound ok use gosths. the terror sound is wicked but it cant control the whole song imo.
2,5/5
cheers
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muphasta none dnb
www.myspace.com/muphsugar
reggeadubwise.com
Roots-reggea-project: muphsteppa
muphsteppa@reggeadubwise
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06-02-2005 17:47 |
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stickbubbly
mad man
Registration Date: 16-09-2004
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your noizes are really good, and the structure of the song is well done but the melody is not very enjoyable. sounds like you just picked random notes a stuck them together.
didnt hear much bass.
not bad. if you change the melody of the lazer noizes and add some deep sub bass u would have a deadly track.
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06-02-2005 22:50 |
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camo
Wicked Producer
Registration Date: 22-12-2004
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Hi! Thank you all for ya comments! U r right this melody sucks bad. but ill go back in da studio and rework this one....
thanks again!!!!!
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www.myspace.com/camopdj
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07-02-2005 17:10 |
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kaliyuga
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Registration Date: 15-12-2004
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dark ery intro kool vibe worked up but not enogth there to be really good main break melody very stupid and childish. same old break needs more time and affort.
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08-02-2005 01:38 |
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Surya
The Robot
Registration Date: 04-11-2002
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Ah, using the "deadline" sound. Always a winner. Too bad your melody for it is quite lame and doesn't seem to go anywhere. Sounds a bit like you played a note and then thought: now lets go up, now lets go down a bit...
Tramen is nice offcourse, but it could use some more crispness. And try giving it more variations
The main problem is: where is the bassline? No DnB without decent bassline you know 
Some good idears, but still lacks imagination. Try picturing where you want to go before you acually make the whole track...
1.25/5 for the track
1.75/5 for the sound
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"In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
- Pieter Frenssen 2004
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08-02-2005 12:30 |
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tetsuo
Guiness factory
Registration Date: 26-12-2004
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the drums are nice, nice break indeed, basses are just not there, or really far in the background, intro is really good btw
work on the melody and that would be good, voice is good 
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08-02-2005 15:05 |
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tracassasin
Cool Producer
Registration Date: 08-02-2005
Posts: 186
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hey man im feelin it with all those peeps cheerin and shit but i dunno about that high synth. it sounds like a really pressurized fart
you should make it easier to follow the tune. the beat is real hot and the fx.
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