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Muad'Dib 
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Please check out my new track Alien vs Predat0r' and post your comments here!!!
A track for this game, the three films and my occupation about it. 
Enjoy!
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03-02-2005 22:29 |
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Room 24
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Registration Date: 01-02-2005
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Verry long intro that turs into a acid line
The chords are to soft in the mix
some sounds are to soft some to loud
the track sounds like a story , verry cool !!!
Only thing that needs more atention is the mix
Rating 4/5
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04-02-2005 17:00 |
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Muad'Dib
Andrejnalin
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Yeah, but that diversity in loudness comes from the thing that I have some shitty headphones which have strange frequency response.
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04-02-2005 19:18 |
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Surya
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Hmm, intro is a bit too long...
Intresting hits coming in.
Drop: simple stepbeat. Kick lacks power, snare is a bit thin. Hats are a bit too loud
The bassline is a bit weird. The amount of bass coming from it is very unsteady. Try fixing that.
Ah, reece coming in. This bassline is better. But boost it a bit, and give it a bit more mid.
Hmmm, this part gets quite repetetive...
Ah, choirsounds coming in: nice touch, but they don't quite blend with the reece as much as I'd like them to.
Some cool idears, but this still needs a lot of work in terms of a decent structure with depth. Sound needs some work too.
2/5 for the track
1.5/5 for the sound
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07-02-2005 12:36 |
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Muad'Dib
Andrejnalin
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Hmmm... this is strange... I guess I'll never be good enuf 
well, ok, I can handle that... and myself...
I juz wished someone else had written a review... 
to dnb.be
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09-02-2005 07:37 |
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tetsuo
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c'mon, you still got plenty of time to get better.... 
Actualy, i do like your tune, it's like the opening of a dj set ( make sense??), play a bit more with the reece and bass line, break more here and there, that'll get better!!!
Finish this off and i'll review it with pleasure!!!!
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09-02-2005 14:33 |
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additive
DROP IT!
Registration Date: 09-02-2005
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PFL all your layers to start with, they're unbalanced.
the sounds are decent.. you have a synth retrigger problem in your reece.. try using a sample instead, and if you are, fix the envelope on it, so you don't get annoying clicks. it also needs a compressor on the synth because your automation is pushing the ranges all over the place.
really nice drum work.. did you make the loop yourself ?
i quite like the intro... and i don't think it's too long at all. at 3 mins this thing is rockin.... where you've repeated the snares after 3:20, i think they sound like they should be ghost notes .. so put a filter on them, detune them a few cents, and make them much quieter. you could move the drums around quite a bit to make it even more groovy, but they sit nicely in place anyway.
at 4:15 it isn't the right place to bring in the snare and hats, maybe just hats
and some more ambient drum sounds or a delay on them to fill out the drums because they sound quite dry.
nice slide at 5 min!
damn it didn't take off like i'd hoped, fill the range out at 5 mins 10 seconds with some serious bass...
because im assuming this is the apex of the track... the bass is sounding really sweet here and could be much louder with some more distortion i guess, and some automation of a filter ?
now you got those pads mixed in nicely at 6 mins...
can i suggest with your hats, use 3 or 4 different hat samples and make a line that sounds decent just on its own... because the hats are a bit square.
3.8/5 nice effort and definately worth working on some more!
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10-02-2005 23:48 |
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