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Please check out my new track 'BULLETPROOF' and post your comments here!!!
My first DnB tune for over a year, not finished but you get the idea..... hope u like!
This track has been deleted on the producer's request
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03-02-2005 18:27 |
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Halph-Price 
Zombie Algorithm
Registration Date: 22-12-2004
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holy fuck.
this is one pimp song dude.
i actual enjoy listening to this, you do it VERY GOOD.
you need to find a vocal or something to make it easier to rember the song. ya know, it's called a hoook.
maybe just the mid and high end cranked up a bit. but even then, it's got a great dark feeling, adn that maybe what's helping it.
you got everything else. i loooooooooove it.
now tell me, what do you use to craft this sort of song?
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04-02-2005 03:11 |
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Surora23
Agressive Melodic Disorder
Registration Date: 05-07-2004
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very cool intro...nice breaks...i like them...this is a lot like a usualy suspects song...so mad props for that...drop...ehh i dont like that sample for the bass...cool square bass...the reverb on it makes it sound sweet...i think the drums when it drops could be a bit more active...damn this track is short...well damn...i was expecting a whole nother 3 mins atleat...damn...well everything is cool for now..that bass is a bit messy...i had the same messy prob with my last track (bombshelter)...
3/track
2/5 for that crap bass...<<i did the same shit though 
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Rinse it OUT!!!! 
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04-02-2005 03:26 |
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stickbubbly
mad man
Registration Date: 16-09-2004
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nice rolling beat. i like the drop.
sick noises
the song needs more. its too short and empty but it could be deadly.
all the levels are good.
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04-02-2005 07:10 |
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Surya
The Robot
Registration Date: 04-11-2002
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Ah, nice punchy drums 
Like that. Same goes for the atmos: nice.
Bassline coming in: sounds a bit digital. The sub is very nice though.
Nice start for a track, but make the bassline a bit dirtyer
2.5/5 for the track
3/5 for the sound
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"In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
- Pieter Frenssen 2004
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07-02-2005 12:24 |
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tetsuo
Guiness factory
Registration Date: 26-12-2004
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LIke it a lot, nothing to change in the intro, dark and sweet
, cute...
First drop come nicely, sub is fine tuned, maybe the lead one is out of keys or something.... look forward for the rest
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Yesterday' s futur is today!! 
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08-02-2005 13:17 |
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additive
DROP IT!
Registration Date: 09-02-2005
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man u could distort those drums and layer another snare on it.. and give your kick a bit more flam or layer another kick with some more high end..
the ghost notes i'd move around a bit because it sounds a bit square.
the bass is nice and rich, and works really well on my speakers... although i did do a bit of strange parametric eq'ing .. i boosted the floor to about 100Hz and it started really shaking. nicely produced, but there's a problem with your hats after about 40 seconds... they aren't matching the groove of the other drums, and it shows. with those shifted into place, it'd make u jump.
you have a hollow sounding pipe kinda sample that could use a bit of high end distortion i think. where they are placed, they kinda deserve to stand out because they're not used that much but they sound decent
afer it finishes at 2:43 you've got the ideal opportunity to reallllly go nuts, layer another bunch of drums and kick it in hard, because it's really leading up to that. you're ready for the climax of the track at that point, and you could make it go quite hard for some time after the initial buildup of the previous minutes of the track
nice work and a great start
4/5
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