*Izah* - D-Mobile (preview - 128)  |
*Izah*
Producer
Registration Date: 02-12-2004
Posts: 53
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Please check out my new track 'D-Mobile (preview - 128)' and post your comments here!!!
still a preview.. so give me your opinion
__ :: www.dmob.nl
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01-02-2005 20:00 |
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Room 24
Tourist

Registration Date: 01-02-2005
Posts: 19
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Nice vocoder but it takes too long for the tune to kick in .
the bassline has some verry cool changes in it something we also try to do
when the tune kicks in try to make it realy slam
It has some real potential and we like the style
dit you use reason for this tune ?
Rating 3.5/5
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02-02-2005 16:21 |
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dark intro, very usual suspect like,....what the fuck does that vocoder bit say??? steady rockin beat.....try a bit more light and shade....fade the pad out a bit earlier so theres a bit of silence...it will give the bass/lead more of an impact...like the pitch variation on the lead....roughen up the lead with a distortion or maybe try a thin chorus with it...cool
3/5
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02-02-2005 19:51 |
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Surya
The Robot

Registration Date: 04-11-2002
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Cool vocal, nicely done!
Drums in the intro sound a bit thin. Give them more low- and high-end
Maybe make the bassline in the buildup highpassed?
Beating bassline needs to beat more. Make the attack louder and give it more bass.
Again a very cool concept, but again the sound is very thin. Do you ever use EQs?
2.5/5 for the track
1.5/5 for the sound
__ "In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
- Pieter Frenssen 2004

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03-02-2005 16:12 |
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Nosrac
Bag of Hammers
  

Registration Date: 15-12-2004
Posts: 599
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Intro sounds good - not a big fan of vocoders like this but great snare drum - loop of hits? -I'd love to gey my hand on that one. Drop is really good -unique and heavy, and drums have great punch and variation between kits, ya!!
The bass sound is disagreeing with me for some reason - but only slightly - too dry and fuzzy perhaps?? The "tinkle, tinkle" (hi freq) sounds take away from the toughness of this tune - looking forward to a finished version.
__ Tunes pictures and info: Myspace Page
MP3's: Acid Planet Page
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06-02-2005 16:54 |
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